A fortunate encounter: Manan SS UPdated Part3 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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My 2nd OS as we all know that both Niti and Parth like to dance so thought of this in manan style hope you guys like it n no time to edit so ignore the typo errors plz...

18th june 11:00 pm

Nandini and her friend Navya are very much excited to go for ABCD 2 movie, they are so much excited that both were on call since 2 hours and were just blabbering about the promo their fav dancer, direction part, choreography (girls and their chats don't end that soon u knw😉😆) finally at 12 they hung up as they thought of meeting, nandu took her chacha n chachi's permission to spend the rest of her sleepless hours with navya at hostel nandu's chacha was very happy dropping nandu as they were not able to control her excitement anymore.

Both the girls had a sleepless but excited night they didn't knew when they fell asleep, early morning chacha came to pick nandu but navya too accompanied her as both wanted to stay together coz none can resist that excitement on reaching home nandu and chacha ji were near the parking place and navya was waiting for nandini right below rishab's room window, every morning when chachi used to give rishab milk he used to pour it out of his window and as navya was standing there he threw it upon her without noticing that she was standing there when nandini came to navya

Nandini : Navya ye kya hua?? ye white white color water kya hai??

Navya : *gritting her teeth* nandu iss white white water ko milk kehte hai jo shayad rishab ne apne window se pheka hai

Nandini starts laughing so hard that navya leaves her and rushes to nandu's washroom as her clothes also became dirty she soaked them in a bucket got freshened and both the girls were ready to leave for the movie.

Nandini : Navya tickets rakh lia na paani rakhu??

Navya : nahi rehne do vaha le lenge and tickets *that's when horror strikes navya, morning while they were coming to nandu's house navya kept the tickets in the same clothes on which rishab pour milk and at present which are being soaked in the bucket this was enough to make navya run to check for the tickets as soon as she tried to take out the tickets from those wet clothes it got torn and the best reaction was of nandu's her reaction was as if her eyes were ready to pop out any moment, which now turned blood red to murder navya at that same moment.

Here starts the tom and jerry fight whatever was coming in her way nandu was throwing it at navya and navya trying her best not to get hurt thankfully chacha n chachi caught nandu and calmed her by giving an idea that they still have chance to see the movie if they go to the hall and check for available tickets, nandu was very sure that they wont get the tickets but both of them went to try their luck.

At Theatre :

Nandu and navya enquired at the ticket counter for tickets but it was housefull. Nandu was very much disappointed as she being a great fan of dance, she had to see the movie at any cost on the 1st day itself luckily there was a guy beside them whose convo was audible to them.

Boy : *on phone* yaar last minute mai 2 more tickets kaha se lau its housefull dude, cabir you know i cant miss the film mujhe aaj aur abhi dekhna hai bas

Cabir : Manik dekhna vaha kisike paas extra tickets mil sakte hai just try

Manik : Ok i will, now come fast bye.

Nandini overheard him and started following him so that they might get tickets as well.

Destiny was so much in favour to them that Manik spotted a guy who was asking people that he had 2 extra tickets and was enquiring if anyone wanted

Manik : Hey i need those tickets can u give it to me, kithna hoga??*Nandu was behind them listening*

Boy : 350/-

Manik was just about to give the money when nandini gave a slight dash to manic and gave that guy the money and ran away while running she turned back and said "I m so sorry" and she caught her ear with her right hand and with other hand she held navya and both ran away from there (imagine this to happen in a spilt of seconds).

Manik's reaction : "hey" With that slight push manik's money slipped from his hand and as he looked up his words stopped, he saw a girl, her hair was open and it seemed to him as if her hair was dancing with the tune of wind, her innocence was very much evident on her face, her eyes were twinkling and her sorry expression was enough for him to understand that she was guilty but not really he found genuineness, unknowingly a smile crept on his face.

Where as nandu couldn't see him properly both of them hi5ed and went to the theatre, Manik too managed to get the extra tickets and fab 5 too entered but for fab 5 three seats were at one place and the other two were some where else cabir, manik and dhruv sat together and girls were together. The hall was cheering at the top of their voice everyone was enjoying the movie and during popcorn break the fab 5 met.

Cabir : wooh... great peace of dance isn't it amazing.

Manik : Yeah dude, killer and the dialog "shampoo ko daaru samajh ke pee raha hai conditioner ka shots leta hoga" raghav was too good

Mukti : ye dialog kaha tha??

Manik : what do u mean kaha tha?? were u guys sleeping??

Alya : That stupid girl she keeps screaming we don't get to hear anything im really pissed off.

Dhruv : Alya, its ok tum dono hamare seats mai baith jao manik aur cabir vaha chale jaenge u know they can handle

Manik was just glaring at dhruv and Cabir

Cabir : Abey, seedha bolta kyu nahi ki tujhe apne girlfrnd ke saath baithna hai.

Dhruv : *blushing* yaar aisa nahi hai manik plz jaana yaar apne buddy kelie ithna to kar sakta haina.

Having no option manik and cabir swaped their seats with alya and mukti as manik and cabir were going towards their seats walking in that row he spotted that girl, the same girl who said sorry to him he scanned the whole row only 2 seats beside her were empty he just stood there in his own thoughts which were disturbed by cabir

Cabir : Jaa na ruk kyu gaya?? acha vo ladki hai islie?? ok mai baith jata hu vaha (seat beside nandini)

Manik : nahi nahi its ok i will sit no problem

Cabir : your sure??

Manik : yeah, yeah sure

And bingo the girl whose innocence impressed him was sitting right beside him, he was looking at her from corner of his eyes Cabir was staring at him as what has gotten into Manik but our dear nandu was so much into the movie that she didn't even look at him as the movie started Nandini was doing all the possible cutest stuff that was making difficult for manik to focus on the movie, she was hooting, clapping, laughing, the sound of her laughter was the best melody he thought, for a scene she even caught manik's hand (unknowingly) and was chanting "oh shit, oh no aiyappa please save him" manik was just about to place his hand on her and she suddenly withdrew her hand and for climax when Indian stunners couldn't complete the formation and they fall nandini made an "O" shapped face covering her lips with her hands and he could see tears forming in her eyes he felt that she was a pure sole her eyes reflected what she felt and when the team took their positions to complete the end formation both navya and nandu jumped from their seats and hugged each other and unknowingly nandu turned towards manik and was about to hug (poor manik who couldn't conc on movie was ready for the hug) but coming back to reality nandu just smiled and started clapping.

As the movie completed fab 5 gathered to go back home but

Manik : Guys don't u think its an awesome movie i think we have to see it again. What say??

Cabir : Are you sure Manik?? Movie amazing hai islie u wana see or is it because u couldn't conctrt on movie??

Alya : Y what happened??

Manik was just covering his face and looking here and there and shooting death glares to cabir

Cabir : i was just joking yaar, i m with u lets watch it again.

Manik : *self talk* I hope vo ladki chali gayi hogi at least i can conctrt on the movie now

Cabir : Ya dude, you will concntrt this time lets go.

So, how's it?? hope u guys liked it feel free to share your view be it good or bad any kind of review i would be very much happy to read it.

Edited by dontstop - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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wowww...this was awesome ...loved it.
Can u please make this into a SS ...would love to read more of this .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was amazing e
i would love to read it mor
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww amazing hehe nandu reaction was hilarious
poor manik bacha cant concentrate on the movie
please write more
bye sumi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice concept I loved it specially cabir 's teasing talk and plz continue fast and also pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi, everyone as few of you have asked me to make it an SS i would love to do it and so sorry that i left it untouched for like more than 2 months, im really sorry i couldnt come to IF due to some personal reasons as i m now a bit free so i can continue this new born SS😆😆

I can's continue from where i left because if i start from there it would be boring as i have to show you the whole journey i m thinking to continue it in a different way but i'll write their past in flashback hope you will like it😊😊

The Midnight Chase

Time: 1AM

Nandini couldn't sleep and was rolling on bedtrying hard to sleep but looks like Sleep didn't have any mercy on her and on top was her stomach which was roaring loud indicating that she was hungry due to her repeated movement Manik who was hugging her and sleeping got up and in a sleepy tone asked her

Manik: Kya hua jaan??

Nandini: Manik utho na i'm hungry.

This was enough for Manik to sit erect, his eyes were wide open now, why not, the love of his life was hungry and he was more than pleased to feed her. Manik Malhotra the arrogant spoilt brat who never listens to anyone who never cared for anyone other than Fab5 was deeply, madly and crazily in love with this girl Nandini Murthy who became his life.

Manik: *cupping her face* ok, aaj jaan ko kya khana hai??

Nandini: *smiling and kissing his palm* ice cream chocolate flavour.

Manik: Ok i'll be back just a minute.

And he was just getting out of bed when he saw Nandini adjusting herself and he helped her sit resting her back to the headboard that's when his eyes fell on her stomach her baby bump was now clearly visible a cute smile crept on his face. He kissed her stomach and then planted a feather like soft kiss on her hair to which she blushed. Manik was about to go when she held his hand and stopped him.

Manik: Kya hua jaan any problem??

Nandini: Manik i too will come along with you please... She said this with such a cute puppy face that Manik couldn't resist and he had to let her come along but on one condition.

Manik: You are not allowed to walk, if you will allow me to carry you only then i'm letting you come down, ok??

She was more than happy to agree with him, he treated her like his princess she was the apple of his eye. Since the day she told him that she was pregnant he never left her side he kept a stock of all the things that Nandini liked as he was aware of the craving that women generally have during this time. They went downstairs and headed towards the fridge he already kept a stock of ice creams but to Manik's surprise he found ice creams of all flavours except for the chocolate flavour. He made Nandini to sit on the couch and searched for Ramu Kaka but he couldn't find him anywhere finally leaving hope of finding him he came near Nandini.

Manik: Jaan i'm really sorry i ordered the ice creams today itself but i couldn't find chocolate flavour in them. Would you like to try any other flavour??

Nandini: Nahi mujhe sirf chocolate chahie.

Manik: Maine Ramu Kaka ko kaha tha to take the order and keep it in the freezer but pata nahi vo kaha hai.

Nandini: Manik... wo... actually...

Manik: Bolo jaan kya hua??

Nandini: *lowering her head* Aaj sham ko Ramu Kaka ne 2 boxes rakhe the freezer mai but mujhe khane ka mann kar raha tha so i ate it in the evening.

Manik was just looking at her wide eyed and Nandini further continued...

Nandini: *in a complaining tone* i'm sorry i couldn't control abhi baby ko aur chahie, it seems ki she likes chocolate ice cream alot...

Just as Nandini mentioned about their baby Manik's face curved with a smile and was adoring his wife who was complaining to him as a small child who is guilty for doing something wrong. He just took his hands and kissed them and placed his hand on her stomach.

Manik: No problem baby needs more ice cream then papa will bring it for her.

Nandini's face became very much bright on hearing him and the excitement was clearly visible on her face Manik just smiled and took out his phone and dialled a number but they weren't picking his call, after 2-3 attempts he made a puppy face and looked at Nandini who copied his expression and was genuinely sad but Manik being Manik gave her a smile and said...

Manik: Agar baby ko ice cream chahie then papa kahi se bhi laenge.

He kissed Nandu's cheek and was getting up when Nandini held his hand "I know that you wont listen to me and still you will go out to get the ice cream i want you to take me along mujhse aur nahi ho raha i want to eat ice cream abhi" as he knew that Nandini will not back off, he took out a shawl and wrapped it around her and made her sit in the car. When Manik was driving

Nandini: I'm sorry bohot pareshan kar rahi hu na mai??

Manik: Nandu don't ever say that again you and our baby, tum dono are my 1st priority i am sorry that i'm making you wait for so long i'm...

She didn't let him complete and kissed him on his cheek, yes she loved him, she loved him to infinity+1, he was the man every girl would wish to have as husband, tears were just forming in her eyes but she blinked them away as he didn't like her crying.

During the drive they found an ice cream bicycle so manik stopped the car and both of them got down with excitement but god wanted to test their patience today as the seller said that he was retiring to home and he has no ice cream left. Nandini went back to the car dejected and Manik followed her.

Nandini: *almost had tears in her eyes* Baby ko ice cream chahie.

In frustration Manik looked around and that is when he spotted an ice cream shop he took Nandini in his arms and started walking, Nandini was quite surprised by this sudden change in his behaviour and looked at him, he was smirking and looking at her with all the love he has

Nandini: Manik kya kar rahe ho??

Manik: My baby needs ice cream and i'm taking her to the ice cream shop.

Saying this he gestured her to see what he was looking at and she spotted the ice cream shop which was closed and flashes of their memories occupied her mind.

*Flashback*

Manik and Nandini were the only members left in SPACE and rest all have left and all the classrooms etc, were also locked but Manik made Nandini to stay as she was his PA and he wanted her to experience the monster in him and he kept assigning works for her and while completing those works she lost the track of time.

Manik: So PA i need a drink get it soon.

Nandini stared at him in horror and checked her watch its 10PM and how was she supposed to get him a drink and this time and she was scared to go out of the college premises because Mumbai was highly dangerous at this time. Manik glared at her and repeated

Manik: Cant you hear i need a drink make it fast.

Nandini: Manik.. *he glared at her* Sir, its 10 and from where can i??

Manik got up from his seat and this was enough for her she ran around and it struck her about the college canteen but it was closed she heard Manik calling her name she panicked and took a rod and tried to open but couldn't and then brought a stone to break the lock but she couldn't then she took out her hair pin and tried to open as she used to do this in her childhood when Amms used to hide her fav. chocolate in the locker and yes she succeeded, she jumped in joy opened the lock and took out a drink from the freezer and went to Manik and gave him with a victorious smile, he was surprised on how could she manage to bring it but he hid his surprise look and said

Manik: Mujhe frooty nahi Moutain Dew chahie.

Nandini: *murmuring* Khadoos iss time pe bhi isko apni padi hai.

Manik: What??

Nandini: Nothing sir.

And she went and brought Mountain Dew from the fridge and Manik never expressed but it was the 1st time he was impressed infact very much impressed as she didn't give up.

*Flashback ends*

Manik: *looking into her eyes* Bohot pareshan kia tha na maine??

Nandini: Those were the memorable days of our journey I Love you Manik.

Manik pecked her lips and they reached the shop he made her stand and was trying to find out something to open the lock when Nandu forwarded him her hair pin with a smirk and both of smiled but Manik couldn't open the lock Nandu was resting herself to the wall.

Nandini: I know tumse nahi hopaega...

This time Manik was blushing remembering their cute moment

*Flashback*

Manik was waiting for Nandini, she could see him from his window and seeing him she came down running, it was the day after they confessed that they are more than friends (not love they confessed that they were more than friends that's it) seeing her all excited a sweet blush crept on his face.

Nandini: Manik tum yaha?? tumne time dekha??

Manik: *pulls her towards him* acha?? I thought that you were more than happy seeing me here you came all the way running down nahi??

Nandini couldn't reply and she just blushed

Manik: *placed both his hands on her waist* and your blushing now...

Nandini: Aisa kuch nahi hai... wo... mai... why did you come??

Manik: Was missing you, so socha milne aajau

Nandini: Aww... i missed you too...

Manik: Acha i have a solution for this

Nandini knew where this conversation was heading to so she tried to move but he made his grip more tighter having no option she stopped trying and he stood there closing his eyes. Nandini tip toed and tried to reach him.

Manik: I know tumse nahi hopaega...

Nandini: Hooogaaa naaa...

Manik: Oookkk then...

*Flashback ends*

Nandini took the hair pin from him and tried to open the lock and she cracked it Manik opened the door for her and he took out the ice cream when Nandini just stood there all excited to finally eat the chocolate ice cream as Manik brought it to her and fed her a spoonful of ice cream she closed her eyes feeling heaven and he kept feeding and she was eating like a kid spreading it all over her face and Manik admiring his cute wife

Edited by dontstop - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Woah.. Amazing update.. 👏 where were u hiding all this time..
Such an interesting story... 😉
Keep writing 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazin'
sounds really interesting
plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Just read part 2
it's fabulous
manik is such a sweet hubby
nandu is very lucky
flashback was awesome
monster Manik and poor nandu
they both are adorable
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update...

loved it so much...

nandu and her pregnancy hormones...was adorable...all her demands manik dissent think twice before completing them for his angel...

the flashbacks were also amazing...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...


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