MANAN SS : BE MY DATE completed pg14

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hey guys here i am with my first ss on india forums...hope u like it as u did with my ff...this story wont be long just 4-5 part maximum...time between this part n the next one will be depended on ur response...hope u enjoy it :)

Part 1 :

Malhotra mansion Mr and mrs.malhotra are celebrating mrs.malhotras
birthday..they have thrown a huge party..but it was a party in name only
for them its just another way to get together with their business
associates..everyone was in a jolly mood except one..their only son
manik malhotra who was sitting all by himself in the poolside area...he
was about to gulp down a glass of vodka but someone
snatched it away..manik looked up and a smile appeared on his face..it
was nandini
N:manik u promised me u wont drink anymore in such parties

M:miss.murthy let me remind u I promised that I won't drink if u r there
with me..u weren't here and I was getting bored..
N:im just half an
hour late and dont u know that VIP's r always late
M:whatever..its ur
fault not mine
N:oh please!u know how much I hate these business parties
of dad but im always forced to come..so excuse me if im late..I came
just for u ok?
M:oh my my!!what would I do without u?
N:get super bored
like u used to be till u met me..
m:thats true..god bless that day when
ur dad and my dad became business partners...at least now i have someone
to talk to at these boring parties
N:so true!!If it weren't for u I
would never attend such parties..
M:so u like my company huh! (He
smirked)
N:I do but not as much as u like mine..vaise this is not one of
those typical parties its ur moms birthday..I thought u would be making
arrangements for her but here u r sulking in a corner
M:oh please!!They
never cared for my birthdays..They were always busy.why should I do
anything for them?
N:manik aise nehi bolte..they are ur parents..they
love u!
M:sure..whatever
N:aiyyapa yeh larka!!accha listen even if they
dont love u..u love them right?
M:hmmm
N:so go in and express it..if u
dont then what will be the difference among u and them?
M:I hate
u...why do u always have to make sense?
N:cause u will have to be
stubborn thats why..
manik smiled..they both went in..manik went to the
stage with his guitar M:this ones for u mom
Manik sang MAA from
taare zameen par..His mesmerizing voice won over everyone's
heart..mrs.malhotra had tears in her eyes...she went to manik and kissed
his forehead and hugged him..
M:happy birthday mom!!I love u!!
MM:I
love u too my baccha!!this was the best gift...Thanks a lot!
M:come lets
cut the cake.. They all cut the cake...
after a while: Nandini was
standing at a corner looking at the malhotras family pictures..manik
came towards her with a plate full of cake and a fork..
M:whats up??

N:kuch nehi..I was just looking at the pics..tum to mujhe bhul hi gaye
the!!
M:oh hello!!main tumhare liye cake lane gaya tha!!
Nandini had
already started eating.
. N:itna sara cake mere akele liye to nehi hai!!

M:nehi mere biwi k liye!!
N:what?
M:In the agnihotris party I remembered
how much cake u ate..ok??
N:what r u talking about??I dnt know
(stammering)
M:don't lie nandini... He took the fork from nandinia hand
and started eating as well..
N:fine but what about u??u ate my biriani
as well that night..
M:whatever...
They both laughed..Soon they finished
the entire plate...
N:dads calling time to go..
m:come ill walk u!!

N:thats ok..u have a party to attend
M:nandini listen
N:what??
M:thanx

N:for?
M:for making me do what I did today..I haven't felt this happy in
a long while
Nandini smiled and walked away..manik smiled and kept
looking at her till she reached the door..then he went back to the party

NEXT MORNING Nandini ran into college N:aiyyapa! im so late..sir is
going to kill me! Suddenly she bumped into manik..who was standing along
with fab5..She looked at him once
N:sorry
M:its ok...She slowly walked
away
Cabir:manik isnt that ur dads business partners daughter?
M:hmm

C:why dont u talk to her properly??I thought u would be friends.
m:our
dads are partners..not us!!besides she is..let it be..lets go

SO THIS
WAS MANANS LIFE..THEY HAD A SECRET FRIENDSHIP..EVEN THEY DIDN'T KNOW WHY
IT WAS A SECRET...THEY NEVER TALKED IN COLLEGE YET THEY WERE SO CLOSE
TO EACH OTHERS HEARTS


part1 pg1
part2 pg3
part3 pg5
part4 pg12

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my other work NEW MANAN FF : I FOUND PERFECTION WITH YOU (ON GOING)

link address-
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4398049&PID=123605067&#p123605067

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lissy16 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
nice idea of yr ss...
continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hmmm...nicee story...n av bs secret freindship...ok ok...i thing aage bht kuch hone wala h...so keep posting n i lyk all ur stories...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing idea👏
Wud luv to see such bonding..secret friendship😉😳
Smthing different😳😛
Manik obeyed nandu so well...nd der teasing was just wow😛😳
Luvd it
Always keep writing😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsummm
i am in love with ur writing skills
do continue plzzz😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome...start...
loving this concept...and this secret friendship...
u penned beautifully...
continue soon
take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsme
fab interesting
Plz 1 request aliya or soha ko manik ka girlfriend matbnana plz
Continue soon as well always I love ur story n writing style
It's just amazing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsome start
secret friendship something interesting
they way manik obeyed her too good
continue soon
keep writing...
take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome start dea. ...
Continue soonnn
If possible pm me nxt time
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing ss n wonderful start. Continue writing want to read more. Plzzz update nxt part soon. Can't wait to read more.

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