MANAN SS : BE MY DATE completed pg14 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing start and secret frndship n all haa plzz cont. Soon
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Fabulous update
plz continue soon
update nxt part soon
loved it...
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Amazing story !!!! The plot is quite intresting wud luv 2 read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice story. A very new concept. Loved the cute friendly relationship between MaNan.
Thanks for pm
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Gosh!! Why do you have to come up with such sweet ideas always... I have a feeling that I will love this story...

Update super soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was undoubtedly so amazing. Different from usual ones. Definitely going to be hit one.
All the best with it.!!
Update soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: epshitatabassum

Awsme

fab interesting
Plz 1 request aliya or soha ko manik ka girlfriend matbnana plz
Continue soon as well always I love ur story n writing style
It's just amazing



hahhahahahah!!! first of all thanks alot!!! and yes even I don't like to pair manik up with anyone else...but yes soha is involved in this story :p :p but trust me she wont ruin anything :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

Gosh!! Why do you have to come up with such sweet ideas always... I have a feeling that I will love this story...

Update super soon




thanks a lot sweetheart and lets just say I jave a messed up mind :p and thats why I end up with these crazy ideas :p hope u love it...stay tuned for the upcoming rom-com drama :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was superb. ..
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hello lovely readers thanks for your amazing response...i read and absolutely loved all of your comments but im extremely sorry i couldnt reply to u all :( :( :( :( anyway here is part two for you...hope you read and enjoy... also those who want pm's please buddy me so i can send you those...anyway here is part 2 for you...please read enjoy and share your precious reviews cause that means a lot to me <3 <3 <3 and yes next part will be updated according to your response :) :)

Part 2

Part 2
Lunch break was going on..Navya didn't come to college so nandini didn't have a partner and she hated eating alone so she didn't go to the canteen..she walking towards the library to get some assignments done..suddenly she saw manik sitting behind the music wing..she wanted to walk by but he looked hesitated and there was no way on earth that nandini could leave him alone like that.. Manik was frustrated..suddenly he felt a tap on his shoulder..he looked back to find a desired face..but he was surprised cause nandini never approached him in college before
N:kya hua manik?
M:kuch nehi
Nandini sat beside him and took his hand in hers
N:its me manik..u can tell me
Manik looked at her..she gave him an assuring smile
M:u remember shanaya?
N:ur ex-girlfriend?yes..
M:well she is trying to get back with me..she has been irritating me all day..I don't want to get back with her..but I cant even tell her that cause she is dhruv's close friend..what if dhruv gets hurt?
N:manik u guys broke up because she left for usa right?
M:yes..honestly speaking I never truly had feelings for her..I started dating her because dhruv insisted me..so when she came to me to about her departure we had a mutual break up..I felt relieved..now that she wants to get back I don't want to..i dont know what to do
N:manik did I ever tell u about my break up?
M:ya u broke up with angsh because u had to move to mumbai..
N:I lied..
M:what??why?
N:cause I never liked talking about sad phases of my life
A lone tear escaped from nandinis eyes..manik felt like someone stomped his heart seeing her cry..he slowly wiped her tears
M:kya hua tha nandini??please tell me...
Nandini rested her head on maniks shoulder and wrapped her arms around his hands entwining their fingers..manik kept caressing her hand with his thumb
N:I was madly in love or I thought so..when mom n dad decided to leave for mumbai I was shattered..I couldn't imagine my life without angsh..so I told dad that I wont come with them..They were mad but I was stubborn..for the first time in my life I went against their will..dad didn't talk to me for a week..I was so blind I love that I didn't care..I went to meet angsh..I told him that mom n dad were moving..before I could tell him that I wasnt going with them I noticed something strange...he was smiling..he got up and told me that he was finally relieved..I couldn't understand..he told me that to him all this was a fling..he never truly felt anything for me..but he couldn't break things off as I got too serious about it..he told me that he was suffocating but then as he knew that I was leaving he felt free after so long..I begged him to me that it was all a lie but he didn't..I held his hand but he jerked it off and left without even saying a sorry..I knelt down as I couldn't hold myself anymore...I cried for hours sitting there..people were passing by and looking at me like I was some alien..I didn't care as somewhere in my heart I thought he would come back but he didn't..then I got up and went back home..I packed my bags and came to mumbai and never looked back...
Manik was shocked..he never thought that the girl on whom he relied on for his problems had gone through so much..he was to busy in his own world to notice this shattered side of a girl who cared so much for him..he felt like punching himself moreover he wanted to punch that angsh..he looked at nandini..she wasn't crying..she was smiling..this girl never stops surprising him
M:why didn't u tell me this before?
N:why?what would u do if u had known before?
M:taken the first flight to mangalore and punched his guts out..
Nandini laughed..
N:this is why i didn't tell u!manik I was hurt but Im not mad at angsh..he did the right thing by telling..he could have faked it but he didnt..thats why I could move on..I have no grudge against him
M:why are u telling me all this now?
N:cause I want u to be honest with shanaya..she will be hurt but she will recover soon..she will move on easily
M:what about dhruv?
N:he is ur friend..he will understand..dont worry
M:nandini u dont like to talk about it but u told me all these just so that I take a right decision..
Nandini just smiled at him..
N:let it go now...while u were busy with all these silly problem I have bigger things to worry about..
m:like?
N:manik prom is coming up!!!I dont have a partner..even navya is going with harshad..this will be the first time that I wont be attending a ball dance..
M:well ummm...even I dont have a partner
N:o hello!!u r manik malhotra..u will give one signal and all girls would die to go on prom with u..
M:every girl except the one that I want to take
N:who would that be?
M:some girl named Nandini murthy!
N:me??
M:yes u dumbo!!
N:but i thought we didn't know each other in front of our friends
M:well that wasn't neither of our decision...but this is...
N:so ur asking me out..
M:I guess
N:and its not because ur feeling bad for me
M:no..even I want to take a beautiful girl to prom
N:ooo M:soo?
N:soo.
M:will be my date ms.murthy?
N:yes
They got up as the bell rang..both of them left with a happy heart

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