manan ff Ur_Possessiveness_Kills_Me, imp note pg 42,27/09 - Page 3

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epshitatabassum thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Haw my poor nandu
Manik the monster
awesome
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
i just love it
i kind like the over possess manik it intersting
i wonder whats going to happen next when nandain comes to know abt it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
I don't like this Manik.. he is psychotic...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
wow...it was jus amazing dea...n i read all part in one go...jus loved it...u penned it very beautifully...ur the best writer..each and every part u described so nicely...thank u so much for wonderful story...update soon dea...desperately waiting for next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ur_Possessiveness_Kills_Me

1STLY GUYZZZ PLZZ DONT HATE MANIK AS HE IS VRY CUTE I KNW MERI STORY ME THODA ALG HAI BT STILL IT HRTS WHEN U ALL SAY THT U DONT LIKE MANIK IN MY STORY N YES GUYZZ DO COMNT PLZZ N 2NDLY U CAN BUDDY ME I WHOULD LV TO ADD U N U CAN ALSO GIVE ME SUGGTION ALSO REALED TO STORY N IF U NEED TO CHANGE SOMTHING PM ME I WILL SURELY DO THT NOW ENOUGH FOR MY BORNG LECTURE N ENJOY THE STORY...

nxt day...

manan bad room...

nandini bring bed tea for manik who was sleepng like a baby... ( manik look baby while sleepng only in my story hehehe ) n thn go near to him n try to wake him bt manik said in close eyes only 1st my morng kiss thn only ill wake up...

u knw na jaan tumhari morng kiss k bina mai uth ta nhi...

nandini blush n give a kiss on his cheks n said now happy...

manik opn his eyes n said vry happy jaan... nandu gave him tea n said tum tea peo n mai ready ho jati hu fir u too get ready thn v will go to colg...

manik lessnng colg get up frm the bed n said no jaan u cant go...

nandu got cnfuse n said y so...
manik hold her hand n said jaan kl tumhari tbiyt thik nhi thi n i cant take risk with ur health so u r not comng with me...

nandini pov

nandini smile tht how much he care for me... or mai hmesha ise gussa dila deti hu...

on othr side manik pov

( SRY JAAN I KNW I CARE FOR U BT THE 2ND RSN IS RAHUL AGR TUMHE PTA CHL GYA TO PROB HO JAE GI N I CANT TAKE THT RISK ALSO )

manik thn said now u jst take rest n mai ready ho jata hu...

ohhhkkk mai breakfast lga deti hu said nandu...

manik wnt to washroom n nandu wnt downstair for breakfast...

aftr preparng breakfast she wnt to room n saw manik who was busy dong comb.

nandini wnt towardz the table n put breakfst on it n wnt towardz him n hug him tightly...

manik ask her is evry thing ol rite nandu jst smile n said yes baby sb thik hai jst missng old dayz whn v met 1st tym n how u were lost in me...

n rmmbr jb maine tumse pucha kya hai u jst said pyar... hahha at tht tym i was laughng madly... n thn u again said tum bot hot lg rhi ho... n tht tym i got angry...

n i jst slap u at tht tym n said aj k bad shkl mt dikhana... n now v both cant live without each othr...

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Edited by daman9292 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Itna chotu sa..!!!!
Plz give long updates..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
ur title fully matched to ur story
indeed manik loves nandu a lot
but manik ki possessiveness... m damn scared
wish for the best
update soon n long wala
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
A different story and a nice one too...😊👏
do continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Yeah ur r8 I just love ur ff.
Bcz
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Mid blowing
Superb
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
i am always thinking abt ur story because it so good
its mystery story because i always wonder what happen next
and i like this manik
two request : when aware u udpate plzzz pm me
i have add u to my buddy list
and can u plzzz make ur font little bit smaller
BUT I WONDER how would nandain react when she finds out how manik is veryyy possessive abt here
I JUST LOVE WHERE THE STORY IS GOING

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