manan ff Ur_Possessiveness_Kills_Me, imp note pg 42,27/09 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
oh god
poor nandu kaha phas gayi
ye manik is like a manic
u knw kuch hote hai na...
oh god m damn scared now
lets hope for the best
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
Nice ff manik iz so over possessive about her. Just loved it and plz pm me next time
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
When u'll post the next part?
Waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
awesome part dea...👍🏼
loved it
beautifully written
continue soonn
if possible pm nxt time plss

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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
#Ur_Possessiveness_Kills_Me

GUYZZZ 1STLY M REALLY SRY ITNE DIN SE POST NHI KR RHI THI STORY BT MAI BSY THI APNI ADMS. KO LE KR ES LIYE LIKHNE KA TYM NHI MILA SRYY...

nandini jst puch him away n wnt to washroom n lock her slf...manik doesnt do anything n wnt frm thier as he too was gilty for hrtng nandu...

nandu in washroom rmmbrng her colg day tht how she met manik n how thier love story start...( NOW ITS ALL FLASHBACK )

nandini - a vry cute girl, lv evryone,her family was vry rich aftr thier death all proprty was with nandini n his bro... bt she hate his bro's frndz as thy buly people... she was comng frm U.S.A in space for singng as she lv singng... an thier is a secret abt nandini bt i tell u whn we will come in prsnt... ( secret blong to manik n tht y he is poss. )

manik - Hansome guy all girlz r mad abt him, bt he jst lv flrtng nothng else... havng frndz name fab5... richie rich too... he is close to his frndz n only thy can handle manik anger... bt ya he also miss his family i mean his mom n dad... he too have join the space bcoz he lv singng...

cabir - hot n funny guy, lv his sister alot can die for her...

rest r same.. n ya aliya n manik r in rltn...

cabir p.o.v

aj pari ( nandini ) vaps a rhi hai maine use promise to kr diya k mai kisi ko nhi btau ga k vo a rhi hai as she hate fab5 alot... or upr se adms. bhi is colg me li hai mai fab4 ko dur kaise rkhu ga us se... i cant c my sis hurtng by my frndz only...

his thoughts were brokn by manik

manik - buddy sb thik hai na tu tnse lg raha hai...

cabir - yr vo pari...

mukti - kya huya pari ko...???

aliya - cabir is evrything al rite...??

cabir - ya guyzz sb thik hai puri bat to sunn lo phile hi itne ques.. guyzz vo mai puri ko miss kr raha tha u knw na 12 saal ho gye hai usko U.S.A gye ko to bs ajj bot miss kr raha tha...

dhruv - buddy sry yr tujhe hmari vja se us se durr rahna pd raha hai... hm sb jan te hai k vo hmari vja se U.S.A gyi hai.. bcoz she hate ragng n also fab5... we also knw vo tujhe cabir nhi bhai bula ti hai bcoz tu ( cabir )fab5 ka prt hai...

cabir - guyzz lets change the topic... mai kuch khane ko lata hu...

cabir p.o.v.

yr in sb se jhoot bol kr acha nhi lg raha kaise btau k pari aj vaps a rhi a n agr in sb ne pari ko ghr me dekh liya to pfob ho jae gi... pari ko to pta bhi nhi k fab5 mere ghr me roz party krte hai... mujhe pari ko kisi or ghr me rkhna hoga... dilr se bat krni ho gi new house k liye so tht pari vaha aram se rah ske n watch tym n said ohh shit mai to bhul gya pari to bs ati hi ho gi mujhe jana hoga use lene k liye vrna bot nraz ho gi...

cabir wnt back to fab 4 n said guyzz sry vo kuch kam a gya hai ofice me mere sign n all chahiye so mai kl milta hu ajj late ho jae ga ofice me so not party sry guyzz... n without lisnng to fab4 he jst ran away...

cabir wnt to airport n call pari...

cabir - hii baby kaise ho... apko aj apka bhai bot mhiss kr raha hai plzz jldi ao na...

pari - bhai bs 5 mint or fir airport k bahr... vase ap kaha ho mujhe pta hai ap lene go ayo ge nhi bcoz of ur so calld frndz...

cabir - pari... y r behavng so rude.. n mai bahr hi hu tumhara wait kr raha hu...

pari - what... ap schi me aye ho mai bs abhi ayi ...

pari cut the call n ran towardz the exit n jst hug cabir... bhai maine apko bot miss kiya lv u bhai... n hv tear in her eyes...

cabir said hyy mera bcha plz dont cry u knw na ur bhai cant c his sister cry...

cabir thn said acha lisn maine ek new house by kiya hai tumhare liye so frm now u r gong to stay their...

nandu said bt y bhai i miss my house too... cabir said bcoz... bcozz vo... bcoz vo hum... fab5... vo... sb...

nandu got cnfuse n said bhai saf saf bolo na...

cabir said vo mere sath sath fab4 bhi hmare ghr rahte hai kbhi kbhi so if u came with me to unhe pta chl jae ga tht u r back...

nandini get agry... cabir said sry baby i knw apko apne room se bot pyar hai bt i promise apka jo ghr ho ga na vo bilkul vasa hi ho ga jaisa ap chahti ho...

nandu said promise like a baby... cabir said pari promise...

nandini get happy n hug him once again n said bhai mai 12 saal bad ayi hu to kya ap mujhe mumbai nhi ghumao ge... cabir agree...

n first thy wnt n rom evrywere n thn wnt to mall for shopng...

on othr side aliya said guyzz colg start ho raha hai to kyu na kuch new dress khride... mukgi too agree.. aliya ask manik baby ap bhi chlo ge na... manik hold her hand n said yes baby chlo lets go for shoppng...

precap - agr bta diya to mza khrab ho jae ga... so nxt prt me hi dekh lena kya hua shoppng mall me...

GUYZZZ AJJ BOT BDA POST KIYA HAI TO PLZZ CMNTS BHI BDE KRNA SO TJT PD KR KHUSHI HO K AP SB KO MERI STORY PSND AYI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
🥳For u r back
🤗 For ur story
👏 N it for you n ur lovely writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Nice update...
eager to know the secret of nandini...
nandini cabir relation awesome..
loved it..👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Nandini is cabir's sister??? :O
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
thanks i jsut love it
plzzz do upload it soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
wow...awsm update as always...thanks for the lovely n wonderful update...m jus loving ur story...u penned it so well dea...plss update soon...eageely waiting for next part...

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