MaNan ss:tu me manques(completed)(14&15-pg41) - Page 28

Awesome Update.
Manbir convo was superb.
loved it.
waiting for next...

Your words... are just magical. It combines legends with poems and there you have it, a beautiful wonderland. Are the colored lines your compositions too?

This story is turning out beautifully... Their relationship is now about to sail... Yes, love is initially a fearsome battle, each step to be taken carefully...And MaNan's ship is about to sail off.
p.s. Now my wish is this Nidhi, could it be possible to also include a chapter that tells us of how their story continues ten years from now?? A big demand pls...consider.

Originally posted by: cutypie04

nice update dea...

continue soonnn

tnx fr d pm

Originally posted by: Dhariya_

you are awesome yaar

I just loved ut

Cont soon

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: aliyaangel

you are fab dear.. seriously...
too good.. jus love the way u write n specially the quotes.. they are beautiful...
manan are soo adorable.. n manik like alwayz naughty... love cabir such a good frnd..
wonder wats gonna happn on the date..
soo excited... update agn soon.. pllzzz

-Aliya :)

Originally posted by: parthadmirer

Chapter 11 and 12 were awesome...

so cabir now knows and evrything and approves their relationship too...

the way you described each scene was fabulous...

loved it...👏

Originally posted by: Cooldude101

Here I am desparately waiting for you to update and you ask whether you should update tomorrow?

It seems that more than Nandini I am interested to hear him confess and tell her the answer to her questions.

I'll be waiting!😳

tysmmm

Originally posted by: OhMeriJaan

Nidhiii 🤗 These were such awesome updates! I am so loving how the story is unfolding!! And your writing is just a cherry on the cake! Love this thoroughly! ❤️ And please update ASAP! Am so not able to resist myself to know what more is about to happen! And how it will happen!! Eeekss!! 😃 Loving this SO bloody much!! 🤗