MANAN SS MY HEAVEN updated part 4 on pg 8 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
aww i love pappu..
poor manik...no time for romance..bathroom part was amazing .oo ya the song...nyc
marykom nandu..really..
🤣 .totaly loved it.
thanx for the pm.
waiting for next update...
update ASAP
take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 4

Nandu standing at the bath room door ,fuming with anger...pappu hugged manik tightly around his neck,both were scared

Nandini : tum dono ko mein abhi batati hoon mary kom kaun hain

Saying this she tries to enter into the bath room,pappu whispers something in maniks ears

Manik and pappu immediatey took water in their hands and threatened nandini

Seeing water in their hands nandini backed off...

Nandini : manik .no...pappu...no...mumma bol rahi hain ...no..(they were still threatening her and laughing)

Nandini finally came out of bathroom,

Nandini: ayippaa apko yeh dono monster hi mile thein mere liye

Pappu: no mumma...bada monster and baby monster(.manik and pappu laughed out loudly)

Our tigress nandini bhi koi kam nahi thi,she had her own tricks to bring them to her ways..she walked towards the cupboard ,took both their dresses and started her trick

Nandini:achaa phir teek hain,tum dono ek group ho toh... ,I don't mind,aaj jo chocolate cookies baanaungi voh toh mujhe akela khaana padega, nahi nahi akeli nahi khaungi,thoda chutki keliye bhej dungi,kyunki voh apni maasi se bhahut pyaar karti hain she never troubles me.so...

Hearing this pappu shouted on top of her voice...: no she quickly moved manik aside ,took shower and came out all wet,leaving a confused manik,manik also then quickly took shower

Pappu came and back hugged nandini: mumma ,aapse sabse jyaada pyaar mein karti hoon..(nandu smiled and turned,but when she saw her all wet,she quickly dried her using towel)

Nandini: pappu aise aaogi toh bimaar pad jaogi

Pappu: mumma I said I love u...

Nandini: pulled her cheeks and said alle meraa baby,I knw pappu loves me the most,and mumma too loves u sooo much and ( hugged pappu)

Manik: (came out of the shower like pappu.completely wet) no...I luv you the most

Pappu: curled more on to nandini: no mumma he is lying pappu loves u most

Manik : nahi mein(he came near nandu,and handed over a towel)

Nandu released herself from pappu's hold and took the towel,and wiped water from his body

Nandini: achaa tum dono ladoo math u both equally love me teek hain ??

For this both nodded their heads

Pappu: par mumma ,aap mujhse sabse jyaada pyaar karti hain na...

Nandini was about to say yes

Manik: haan nandu bolo whom do you love the most

Pappu : haan mumma bolo...

(Nandini being nandini handled the situation so cleverly)

Nandini: took pappu in her arms : pappu tum batao tumhe tumhare kaunsa eyes sabse acha lagta hain

Pappu:( first touched her right eye) yehwala( then left eye) nahi nahi yeh wala then... mumma I like both of them nahi toh mein dekhungi kaise

Nandini: yaa...like that,mumma also loves u both same same...tum dono hi tuh mumma ki life ho..(her eyes became teary)

Manik: (to cheer up )so pappu no more fights ,come on monster family hug time...(.saying this manik took nandini his arms ,pappu sat on nandu's stomach and hugged manik and nandini together with her tiny hands..manik twirled them...then he kept them on bed and started tickling both of them).

Nandini: manik pls...(in between her laugh).plss manik chodoo

Pappu: paapaaa nooo...mumma bachaaooo

Nandini some how escaped and helped pappu to get out of his hold .now it was time for manik s punishments he was lying on the bed

Nandini and pappu exchanged evil smirks

Nandini: pappu attack...

Pappu started tickling him,then nandini too joined her...manik was breathing heavingly,trying too hard to get out the holds of his shern'ss

The trio laughed till their stomach started paining

Nandini : bass.(saying this she laid down ,with her head on his heart ,paappu too laid over him sitting on stomach and head resting on his chest, pappu and nandini kissed each other,and then manik's heart...)

Nandini: I love u manik

Pappu: I love u papa

Manik: (his happiness knew no bounds) love u too ,ANGELS OF MY HEAVEN,saying this kissed both their heads...

Nandini: (happy realizatio): utoo utooo,school jana hain na ready ho jao chalo

Three of them got up from the bed

Nandini gave both of them their dresses,manik quickly came out wearing a ligt pink t shirt black blazer and jeans ,pappu wore a pink frock

Pappu:cabir chachu aur chachi wala frock hain na mumma yeh??

Nandini: haan pappu...voh us din tumne aur chutki di ne same wala liya than a vo hii

Nandini made her wear ear rings,gave her light touch ups...

Nandini: ho gaya...ab bas baal teek karne hain

Manik( fully ready): wow some one luking like a cindrella

Papa: really papa mein beautiful lag rahi hoon?

Manik: aur nahi toh.kya bilkul angel jaisi( he quickly pecked her cheeks)

Nandini( came up with a comb): lo ...ab yeh bhi ho gaya tho sab ready

Manik :( took the comb) mein karta hoon

Nandini agreed and went for getting herself ready

Manik and pappu fighting over her hair

Pappu: she looked herself in the mirror and gets shocked : papa mein kaya ladka hoon kya .jo apne mere spikes bana diyaa(her hairs were gelled up luked like as if she got an electric shock)

Paapu stood over the bed and ruffled manik's hair which were perfectly gelled...

Manik: pappu tumne mere baal kharab kiya

Pappu: apne bhi toh mujhe voh electric shock ka add wala bana diya tha na

Manik and pappu were pulling each others hairs when nandini came there

Nandini: stop it...

Seeing their angry bird cum mary com,they both calmed down

Manik (quickly tooks his hands from pappus hairs and caressed her cheeks ): hum toh bus khel rahe thein.alle alle mera baby...

Pappu: (to control the situation took her hands back and kissed manik's cheeks) hum toh friends hain..alle allee mer pappa

They both quickly took the comb and arranged each others hairs,

Nandini was smiling at their cute antics,they both came forward

Pappu : mumma finish mera bag kahaan hain??voh dhruv chachu aur alya chachi ka. gift diya bag dena

Nandini took out her bag and handed her

Pappu: mummy mukti chachi kaa gift kahaan hain?

Nandini: mein rakh diya hain,pencil box and book,aur tiffin box niche hain

Luking towards manik

Nandini: manik,meine table par sab rakh diya hain,tum dono break fast karlo,aur zara uska tiffin box aur bottle bhi rakh dena bag mein

Manik: ys madam...(.luking towards papppu chalein)

Pappu: hmmm...

Pappu and manik quickly kissed nandu

Pappu: mumma dekho papa aur meine same same color pehna hain aap bhi same pehnanaa.ok

Nandini: ok...

Manik and pappu went downstairs and had their breakfast .manik kept everything in pappu's bag..then he was making her wear shoe and socks...

Manik : pappu sit properly

Papppuuu the whole mansion echoed with this sound ,pappu was very familiar with this voice, she jerked off maniks hands and ran towards the owner of that voice .she sprung around his neck .he twirled her

Pappu: breaking the hug and still in his arms, I hate u cabir chachu...u promised me na aaj aap jaldi ayenge pappu ko school chodne ,par u r late

Navya: kaise aatee pappu,subhah itni jaldi jo utt gaye thein tumhare chachu

Cabir: aisa kuch nahi hain my darling..bas chachu yeh lene gaye thein aur late hogaye

He gave her a dairy milk

Pappu's anger flew away through the window : thank u chachu she kissed him

Fab3 also enterd the mansion within no time

Manik: agayee sab...(he found his girlfriend missing)navyaaa chutki kahaan hain

Nanvya: manik voh school gayi hain...pappu aur uska timing alag alag hain isliye

Manik: achaaa.

Cabir: vaise aaj sabse jyaada excited voh hain.bas pappu ka wait kar rahi hogi.school mein

Manik: vaise mukti yeh le...zara isse shoe pehenade.mein abhi aya

Mukti: (opened her arms for pappu to come and hug he)r: ok

Dhruv: vaise nandini kahan hain manik

Alya: ya where is she? dikhayi nahi de rahi

Manik : voh upper hain , getting ready...(he excused himself took plate with toast and went upstairs)

Cabir: manik...

Manik turned and gave him an angry glare: kya hain

Cabir: bas yaad dilana tha ki school ke liye hume 8:30 ko niklnaa hain...tohhh...tohhh

Manik: I knw...😡😡

Cabir: I also knwww...😆😆😆...

Manik ignored him and went upstairs

Nandini was busy tucking her saree's pallu...then manik entered..

She was wearing a black cotton saree with pink border

Nandini:( turned) manik teek hain na saree dekhoo?

He came near her,handed her the toast an told her to eat,he knew otherwise she wud have skipped her break fast,manik then kneeled down

Manik: if u don't knw then yeh saree pehenthi kyun ho,saying this he arranged her fleets properly,after this he grabbed her waist kissed on her belly ,senting shivers to her spine

Nandini: ma...nik( she hardly uttered)

Manik got up,and made her eat the toast to calm her down.he made her wear earing while she was busy in eating

Nandini: achhaa hua manik ,aaj meeting dopahar ko hain,nahi toh mujhe aaj full day lev lena padthaa

Manik:kaunsa meeting,voh naya project wala

Nandini: haan manik,mujhe na thoda dar bhi lag raha hain...

Manik: nandini murty aur dar?? Am I dreaming...

Nandini: manik I'm serious

Manik: (cupped her face) y u hav to worry .meri nandu kabhi nahi haarthi.she never looses.and aaj tumhara project zaroor approve ho jayegaa saying this he kissed her forhead and gently kissed her lipss

Cabir: (from downstairs) tum dono neeche aarahe ho ya mein uuper aaun?😃

Manan romance was broken by cabir's mocking..nandini quickly glaced herself through the mirror took her files ,pecked on his cheeks and they both came down

After a little chit chat session ,

Manik: chale time ho raha hain

Nandini: hmmm...saying this all went towards the door

Pappu: mumma mein ek chiz bhool gayi..

Nandu: kya hua pappu

Pappu: meine aiyappa ko pray nahi kiya...

Nandini: chalo jaldi pray karke aoo...wait mein bhi aati hoon

Both of them prayed to ayippa for the well being of their family and came back ..evry body was waiting for them

As per their plan they decided to go in a open jeep ..as pappu wanted a fab 5 style entry in her new schoolll

That all for now..thank uu for supporting me guys...pls continue it .and give me ur reviews
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
wow..yaar...this is so cute...loving this trio a lot...pappu...pappa and mamma...so sweet
loved the bathroom scene and then combing hair ...seriously spike...😆😆😆 manik and his pappu...is superb...!!!
u penned so beautifully...
continue soon
thanks a lot for the pm
take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
ur story is very sweet...
love pappu n manik fightg n bonding...
nandu marykom n angry bird...
u portrait nicely...
plz cont...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
It was a fab update...u oend it beautifully...loved d trio bonxing nd love...tbre of them are so swt.so cute.. I m falling for dis cutness nd sweetness... Manik & pappu their fights nd bonding..loved it... Nd it was so funy.. They r fighting for gair style... Nd mary kom nd angry bird... Loved this swt si family..nd cabir nd pappu bonding..was too adroable.
Keep updating..it was a fab. Update..
Nd thnx for pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Awesome update dea. ...
This is so cute
Loved it
Continue soonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Wow ...Awesome update
Nandini marry kom & angry bird ...
Manik & pappu fighting. ..
Just loved it
Trio r to cute
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Spike? He he he! Reminded me of my chotu bro who complimented my puffy hairstyle as spike! Oh i luvd it! I hope u show pappu having a friends gang in the school and i want a chotu manik-nandini kinda fight of pappu wit any school boy! I knw she is little! But... And this time pappu mamma ke sath haath milake papa ko attack! Luvd it!
Love and hug
Ayisha
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Hahaha awesome that cookie part was the best and then tickling then at the end cabir's teasing as a whole loved it 👍🏼 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
awsomeee update nandu told that manik and pappu are her 2 eyes it was soo good
u penned down emotions very well
cabir nd pappu ka bonding bhi awsome tha and everyone gifted her for her first day it was cute fab5 vala entry that was damn good

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