MANAN SS MY HEAVEN updated part 4 on pg 8 - Page 2

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Wow! Awesome.. Thank u for writing the seqeul.. The previous ss was also awesome

PART 2

thank u lovelies for all ur comments..so here u go with some rootna-manaana.

Nandini started moving towards the duo ..seeing their angry bird approaching towards them ,manik and pappu quickly got up from the couch,but to their misfortune nandu had already reached there..

Nandini:Kisne kaha mujhe angry bird 😡(saying this she started slapping on pappu's bum)

Pappu: meine nahi papa ne kaha(stood like an innocent soul)

Nandu quickly turned towards manik and slapped him on the same place...and twisted his ears

manik: meine nahi.. usne bola( he was trying to get out of her hold)

nandu now turned her face to pappu,whose eyes were popped out hearing her pappa's statement ,nandu questioned her raising her eye brows

by this time manik freed himself from nandus hold and ran from there,and shouted

manik: pappu dekh kya rahi hain ...baagh...

pappu ran from her place

nandini was running behind them,a tom and jerry chase was going on there ,their house filled with their laughter ,happiness and love,nandu ran behind both of them ,but she cud'nt catch them

manik ( standing behind the pillar): voh actually hum dono ko tumhe dekhkar angry bird yaad a gayi thi

nandini: (she was smiling inside but still showed a fake angry face): achha tum dono ko mein angry bird lagthi hoon na

both nodded in a yes

nandini: tho teek hain fine..mein kitchen mein jaa rahi hoon ...jisse coffee aur bournvita peena hain voh table pe rakha hain jaa ke peelo,aur jisko school jana hain ,voh bhi khud chale jao

saying this she stormed off to the kitchen with a fake sad face

after nandini went,manik came back who was hiding himself behind pillar,and pappu who was under dining table

manik was standing near couch thinking about something his hands a ,crossed his chest,pappu came near him,stood near him on the couch,her left elbow resting on maniks right shoulder with her head resting on her palm

pappu: mamma gussa hain

manik: hmmm

sudden realization stuck both manik and pappu,and they both said in unison: oh !!! no!!!!! shit!!!!

Pappu: aaj mumma mere side nahi soyegi...

Manik :meri bhi side nahi ...Toh phir?? Oh no

Pappu : couch pe!!!!

Manik: no...(.then he turned towards pappu) : yeh sab tunhare wajah se hua

Pappu: meri vajah se ??

Manik: haan tumahri vajah se ..kisne kaha tumhe mere upper sone ko??

Pappu: ohhh...pappa u slept na first .phir mein apke upper soyi,so galti appki hain

Manik: meri?? Nahi tumhariii

Pappu : nahi aapki

Nahi...tumahri... nahi... aapki

Their tu tu mein mein went on for some more time ..

Then finally manik gave up

Manik: ok fine .galti hum dono ki hain.. but wat to do now..

Pappu: haan papa ...mummy ko kiss kiye or cuddle kiye bina mujhe neend nahi aati

Manik (with a sad face) :mujhe bhi nahi

Pappu :par aaj toh actually mummy ko mere side pe sone ka day hain..

Manik: ohh hello madam aaj Monday hain bhool gayi kya aaj and Monday is MANAN day you know,aaj voh mere side pe soye gi...

Pappu: noo...i knw aaj Monday hain par ..yesterday u cheated.so aaj mummy meri

Manik: wat?? I cheated?? Manik malhotra never cheats

Pappu: uu cheater malhotra!!! Kal raat mein mumma ke saath hi soyi thi par jab mein susu karne utti thi,tab meine dekha, aapne mujhe doosri side pe kardiya,aur aap mumma ke pass aa gaye

Manik was really embarassed with the truth revealation,his pappu has caught him red handed for the crime he does evry night after she sleeps

Manik: nai toh...mujhe yaad nahi aaraha

Pappu: mr papa malhotra pls don't liee...

Manik:( to get out of further embarrassment): ok fine yeh sab choddo,aur yeh bataao humari iss angry bird ko happy bird kaise banaye ...nahi toh ajj poora din hum dono ka kharab ho jayega

Pappu :ys papa...ab hum kya kare

both were thinking for some ideas after sometime pappu came upwith an idea

Pappu idea!!!!

Manik wat??

Pappu whispered something in maniks ears

Manik:superb ms pappu malhotra and he kissed her

Nandini was busy with her kitchen works when heard guitar being played she very well understood that ,her two little spoilt were trying to manofy her...she hid her smile when she saw them standing at the kitchen door ,pappu with a small guitar and manik with his favourite one,they started moving towards nandini

Ik teekhi teehki si uff karari si ladki

Mere dil mein ek beejli jaise hai kadki

(Manik sang this,eyeing nandu,taking rounds around her)

Thodi behkte hui Thodi chehekti hui gumsum sahemti hui

Kaise jal bechati hai pagli

(He hits her with his shoulder who was not all paying any any attention to their song,she was still engrogrossed in her work)

Ik teekha teekha sa ladkhadata sa ladka

Mere dil dil mein ek shola jaisa bhadka

(Pappu started her lyrics but still nandu didn't pay attention to her also,pappu started pulling the hem of maniks vest,gestured him to keep her on kitchen slab...manik did it)

Ik teekha teekha sa ladkhadata sa ladka

Mere dil dil mein woh shole jaisa bhadka

Kabhi hickita hua kabhi khulke gata hua

Baatein banata hua phirbhi humko woh bhata hai pagla

(Pappu was trying to block nandu,as she is so chotti she cudnt)

Hosh le ke ud gaya Uski Kaise hai jadugari

Dekhti hi reh gai

Mein to khadi ki khadi

(Manik came to help pappu ,along with singing ,he held nandu from back,pappu kept her guitar down and kept her hands around nandu's neck)

Chatpati chulbuli uski baatein sharat bhari

Per peeche pad jaane ki aadat badi hai buri

Thodi behkte hui Thodi chahekti hui yuhi fudakti hui

Kaise jal bechati hai pagli

Ik teekhi teehki si uff karari si ladki

Mere dil mein dil mein ek beejli jaise hai kadki

(Manik kept his guitar asisde and rolled his hands around nandu's waist)

(Nandini was still looking down,manik and pappu conveyed something through their eyes to each other)

Manik: mumma gussa hoo??( he snuggled more close to her,resting his head on her shoulder)

Pappu: (with her index finger raised nandinis chin ,to make her face pappu) hua kya hain nandu darling(in complete manik's attitude)

It was too hard for nandini to resist her smile

Manik: shoorry mumma ,plss mujhe maaf kardo( saying this he kissed her cheeks )

Pappu: (held her both ears) soory nandu

(Saying this she closed manik's eyes with her hands ands kissed on nandini's lips)

Manik quickly removed her hands ,both manik's and nandini was like "oo"

Pappu: aap dono mujhe ese kyun dekh rahe ho ,papa hamesha mere eyes band karte hain when he kisses you,toh meine bhi same to same kiya

Both manik and nandu bursted out into a laughter,

Nandini pulled pappus cheeks : ohh my sweet bachaa I love u...and she kissed her

Manik: (still back hugging her): toh mein??

Nandini: kept her hands above his on her waist : tum bhi...mere sabse chotaa bachaa ...I love u saying this she kissed his cheeks

Now both manik and pappu in unison : love u tooo our angry bird and they both kissed nandu on either side of her cheeks

But this time nandini was happy

Saying this both of them hugged her tightly ,manik from back and pappu from front.they made nandini a sandwich...nandu kept her one hand around pappu and other on manik's...

Hope u guys like it. I knw song is not so apt for the situation but its lyrics are just made for our nandu,that's y I chose this,,I'm sorry if u didn't like it...pls do tell me if there is any problem. I'm confused am I not able to convey their story properly...i don't knw are u liking it or not...do keep commenting..

Wow amazing update dea. ..

The only word for ur story...its too cute yar...very cute..jst like our manan..love that scene when pappu says...papa meri aankh bandh kar ke aapko kiss karte hai...awww...that was too cute...

Just loved your story
Awesome update
Continue soon

awesome update

Aww! How sweet their chotusa family is.. Loved it.. Cont. soon

cute and sweet part...
loving this pappa malhotra and pappu malhotra and their angry bird a lot
u penned so beautifully
song was awesome
thanks a lot for the pm
continue soon
take care

It was dm gd..
So cute..
they hv divided their days. ahww so swt yr..
nd d song was too gd.
nd d way dey both say sorry...
was too swt too cute...
wt to say..
it was fab..
continue soon..