Manan ff -The Lost Souls Chap 12 pg24 /16th Apr - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago
hey as i told u in the morning maine ab tak ye story nahi padi thi...

but now after reading this story am happy that u pm me and i came to know about the story...

it's awesome yr...

read all the chapters in one go...

nandini is manik's angel ...

but use abhi tak pata nahi chala ...

chlo ab jaldi se pata chal jaye use,.,,,,,,

kitna khush hoga manik jab use pata chalega ki jis nandini k liye vo feel karne laga hai vo hi uski
angel hai

but vo alag kyun hue the,,,,,,,,,,

nandu ko manik ko apna real name batana chahiye tha,,,,,but agar bata deti to itna twist kaise ata ...

hamare cupid cabir ki aankhon se kuch nahi chupta kabhi...

oh abhi k a ane se sab messed up ho gya...

but shayad usi k ane se manik ko uski real feelings ka ehsaas ho jaye...

jaldi se sab clear ho jaye

kya yaar jab maine story nahi padi thi u were updating regularly

and now when am eager to read out the story tumne itna lamba break le liya

not fair...

chlo try karna update karne ki...

we will be waiting

loved the story...

keep it up...

thanks...

Reet
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: reet0143

hey as i told u in the morning maine ab tak ye story nahi padi thi...


but now after reading this story am happy that u pm me and i came to know about the story...

it's awesome yr...

read all the chapters in one go...

nandini is manik's angel ...

but use abhi tak pata nahi chala ...

chlo ab jaldi se pata chal jaye use,.,,,,,,

kitna khush hoga manik jab use pata chalega ki jis nandini k liye vo feel karne laga hai vo hi uski
angel hai

but vo alag kyun hue the,,,,,,,,,,

nandu ko manik ko apna real name batana chahiye tha,,,,,but agar bata deti to itna twist kaise ata ...

hamare cupid cabir ki aankhon se kuch nahi chupta kabhi...

oh abhi k a ane se sab messed up ho gya...

but shayad usi k ane se manik ko uski real feelings ka ehsaas ho jaye...

jaldi se sab clear ho jaye

kya yaar jab maine story nahi padi thi u were updating regularly

and now when am eager to read out the story tumne itna lamba break le liya

not fair...

chlo try karna update karne ki...

we will be waiting

loved the story...

keep it up...

thanks...

Reet


So first of all thankyou for reading my fic & commenting on it voh bhi lamba wala😛 Glad that you liked it...
And abt the regular update thing i cant cz my exams are cumin so till that i will b busy but aftr that il surely give u'll a lamba wala update😊
Thankyou
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Posted: 9 years ago
first of all sorry for late comments festival haina so i struck in some work awesome update read all parts in one go its superb u penned it beautiful manan so cute nandu is maniks angel i loved it thanks for pm continue soon excited fir next part all the best for ur exams keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hiii guyzz!! Here i m gvng a promo of nxt chap...so tell me ur views abt this..!!


Promo


Nandini was trapped between the wall & Maniks masculine body. She was feeling to shy to look at him & he was smirking looking at the effect he had on her!!

Manik "Toh! Nandini tum kuch keh rahi thi haina?"
He said huskily in her ear.

Nandini trembled at his proximity. She was feeling vry weak as Manik was affecting her alot. She somehow gathered herself & replied "Ma..manik...plss...let me go" she whispered bt he heard it.

Manik "No! Jab tak tum nhi bataogi ki tum kya keh rhi thi tab tak na tum kahi jaogi na main"

Nandini "Manii...plss"

Manik was shocked he instantly moved away from her!!



Lo!!! Promo aa gaya aapke liye...ab jldi comment karo...ur comments will encourage me to write it!!
Tiara115 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting promo. .
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
manik shocked toe hoga...after all mani usa angle bula tha...but manik ko toe pata nahi ki nandini e angle ha...aur nahi nsndini ko kuch yaad ha...
plz next part asap...
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Posted: 9 years ago


Thanks for pm.dear

Very . Very interesting promo


Looking forward to seeing the update.




Thanks.





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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting promo dear
Waiting anxiously for the update
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome promo
Thnx for pm me
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice story
Pm me the updates
😊

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