Manan ff -The Lost Souls Chap 12 pg24 /16th Apr - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kyy_manan


So first of all thankyou for reading my fic & commenting on it voh bhi lamba wala😛 Glad that you liked it...
And abt the regular update thing i cant cz my exams are cumin so till that i will b busy but aftr that il surely give u'll a lamba wala update😊
Thankyou


am glad that u like my comment...all the very best for ur exams...and am really happy that i came across to this story...after exams u surely have to give us a lamba wala update so that i can give u lamba wala comment...thanks a lot
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
nandu ne manik ko manii bola...

he will get to know now may be...

pls pls pls pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Note - Guyss I have started a new on wattpad named "GEEKY LOVE STORY" so please follow my wattpad acc @Kaisiyehyaariaan & tell your reviews about it!!

I'll continue only if you are interested..so here is the link

http://w.tt/1KGG7TF
Edited by kyy_manan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Okayy!! So hii everyone😆 Well I know I am superrr duperr late...exactly two months ryt?? Hehe okay sryy for that...now also I cant promise to be regular bt will be giving updates when get tym...😊
Its been a long while so just a chotu sa recap of previous chapter...
Recap - Abhi Nandu talk...Manik angry with Nandini...Manik Nandu fight...Nandini crying & Manik feeling guilty for overreacting bt also confused with his feelingss!!

So I hope this will be helpful for those who were reading my story😆
Here goes the next chap!


Chapter 11

After that fight between Manik & Nandini...Manik didnt ask further questions to Nandini & she also didnt have any energy left to answer him. So Manik dropped Nandini home & came to his home.

Manik's bedroom
He was recalling what all happened today! First that Abhi roaming around Nandini then their hug & then Manik outburst on Nandini regarding Abhi.

He ran his fingers through his hair restlessly.
"Why?? Why even I feel like killing Abhi when he is around Nandini?? Main toh bas apne matlab ke liye Nandini ka dost bana tha na toh phir kyu mujhe in sab se farak padta hai?? Kyu dammit!! I need to avoid all this! But how??"

And he digged his face between his palms & sat there for few mins. Then suddenly he got up & picked his guitar & started strumming a tune. He closed his eyes & started singing his childhood days with his Angel...

(Lost and lonely
Coz you're the only
One that knows me
That I can't be without you

Lost and lonely
Coz you're the only
One that knows me
That I can't be without you)


Hai kya yeh joh...
Tere mere darmiyaan hain
Andekhi ansuni koi dastaan hain

Hai kya yeh joh...
Tere mere darmiyaan hain
Andekhi ansuni koi dastaan

Lagne lagi
Ab zindagi
Khaali...hai meri

Lagne lagi
Har saans bhi
Khaali...

(Lost and lonely)

Bin tere
Bin tere
Bin tere
(Lost and lonely)
Koi khalish hai
Hawaaon mein bin tere

(Lost and lonely)

Bin tere
Bin tere
Bin tere
(Lost and lonely)
Koi khalish hain
Hawaaon mein bin tere


Ajnabee se huye kyu pal saare
Ke nazar se nazar yeh milaate hi nahii..
Ek ghani tanhaayi chaa rahi hai
Manzile raasto mein hi ghum hone lagi...

Ho gayi ansuni
Har dua ab meri
Reh gayi ankahi
Bin tere...

(Lost and lonely)

Bin tere
Bin tere
Bin tere
(Lost and lonely)
Koi khalish hai
Hawaaon mein bin tere

(Lost and lonely)

Bin tere
Bin tere
Bin tere
(Lost and lonely)
Koi khalish hai
Hawaaon mein bin tere...


He ended the song in a high pitch depicting pain in his voice. Saying that he is incomplete without her. He closed his eyes and let a few tears escape from his eyes. But then he wiped his tears & stood up keeping his guitar aside. He took out his keychain from his pocket that his Angel had gifted him & said with a determined voice "No I can't sit here and waste my time crying... Main tumhe dhoond kar rahunga Angel! I promise that!"

With that he kissed the keychain & kept it back in his pocket.
"I have to find out who is this Nandini Murthy & for that I'll have to ignore all that I feel seeing her with that Abhi. Its her life, her choice...usse jiske saath rehna hai, ghumna hai, jisko apna boyfriend banana hai...usse mujhe koi farak nhi padna chahiye"


Nandini's bedroom
She was also thinking about Manik & his behaviour. Why was he behaving like that?? Why did Abhi & her relation mattered him so much?? She also thought of calling him bt then dropped the idea & thought of talking with him tomorrow at the college.

She was sitting on her bed lost in her thoughts that she didnt notice that her phone was ringing continuously. Mukti was passing by & heard her phone ringing continuously. She peeped in to see what she was doing & saw her all lost in her thoughts. She came in & clicked her fingers infront of her saying "Oh! Madam tera phone kabse baj raha hai!"

But still no response so she herself picked up the phone.

Mukti "Hello"

Abhi "Hey babydoll!"

Mukti "WTH!! Whose this?? And yeh kya hai baby doll & all?? Listen if you are some stalker so just ---"

Abhi "Woh woh woh...calm down girl! I am nt any stalker. Main Nandini ka friend hu & I call her by that name...so can you plss just pass the phone to her??"

Mukti "Yaa fine...whatever"

Mukti then looked at Nandini to pass the phone & saw that she was still in the same position so she shook her by her shoulders "Nandu...kahan khoyi hai?? Phone tera..le" & she handed her the phone & left annoyingly.

Nandini "Hello"

Abhi "Hii babydoll...kahan thi tum??"

N "Woh Abhi sorry actually mein kuch soch rahi thi...aur shayad isiliye dhyaan nahi tha kab tumhara phone aaya"

A "Ohk! Waise woh Lady Bheem kon thi??"

N "What?? Oh Muku! And ayee! Dare you call her that😡 She is my sister ok!"

A "Ok baba sorry! Dono behne ek jaisi hi hai...chad jaati hai kuch bhi kehne par"

Nandini chuckled & said "Acha toh call kyu kiya tha?? Kaam tha??"

A "Umm..actually haan! Mein soch raha tha ki kal we'll go college together. What say??"

N "Actually Abhi I have my own car so mein Muku aur Navu ke saath hi colg jaati hu..so.."

A "Its ok! Will meet you directly at colg😊 Bye girl-friend😉"

N "Bye boy-friend"



Manik's bedroom
After freshening up Manik thought that he should spend some more time with Nandini to know about her past. So he called her to tell that he will pick her up in the morning. But as soon as he dialled her number it was coming unavailable. He tried 5-6 times bt everytym it came unavailable. He got frustrated cz it was 11pm at ni8 & he wondered to whom she must be talking to this late. And then it striked him "ABHI!!"
He threw his phone on the bed hell frustrated & started walking here & there in his room muttering some abuses under his breath.
After some time he thought to call her one last time & there! She picked it up..."Hello"

And here he blasted "WTH NANDINI!! Main kabse tumhe phone karne ki koshish kar raha hun. Kaha thi tum?? Kiske saath baat kar rahi thi itni raatko?? Abhi se naa?? I knew it!"

Nandini was first startled on his sudden shouting but then after composing herself she replied "Manik what is the matter with you?? Subah se tum ajeeb behave kar rahe ho...kabhi gussa karte ho toh kabhi shaant hote ho...tumhe Abhi se prob kya hai??"

Manik was about to blast again bt then he calmed himself down for the sake of his Angel & said "Ohk! I'm sorry! Actually mein kabse tumhare phone try kar raha tha & it was coming unavailable so got a bit irritated..thats it!"

N "Hmm...toh call kyu kiya??"

M " haan woh actually yeh kehne ke liye call kiya tha ki kal mein tumhe tumhare ghar ke bahar 7 baje pick up karne aaunga"

N "Manik par..."

And he cut the call without listening her.

N "Aiyapaa..yeh larka kab meri baat sunega??"
She said looking upwards & screen freezes on Nandini talking to her Aiyapaa & Manik siting on his bed with his keychain.



Finally done! Okay I know jyada lamba nhi hai aur na hi kuch khaas tha...no manan scenes...but nxt update mein pakka manan scenes honge if the response will be good enuff!!😆


Thankyou
Lots of love
Pari😊
Edited by kyy_manan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
after a long time u r back...
manik ko kab pata chalega ki nandini e uski angle ha...waiting 4 that...
jealously monster manik jaga deta ha...
plz next update asap...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update...
Luved it...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsmmm


Awsmmm


Awsmmm


Awsmmm


Uff monster manik

Want manan scene

Nice story


Thanks for the pm


Coun sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazinggg update
Jealous manik...nandu hi manik ki angel hai...thnx for pm me...lovd it...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Jealous Manik is too cute
Thanks for pm
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
super awesome update... read alk in one go ...damn interesting story...keep updating dear ...

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