The Devil in Boots - Manan ff NOTE page 26 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Lovely update dea. ..
Continue soonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
a story with VAMPIRES.. wow!
the update was good and I am pretty sure that hut belongs to Nandini..

Contiue soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Hahahaha it was quite difficult for me to think of manik as a nerd :P well it was a good start :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Hey,
Congratulations for d new story
And it's just awsm yr looking forward for more interesting updates... :)
Pls yr update soon cz after reading dis killer update i can't wait...
U r jst awsm girl... :) :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Part 2
In campus:

As usual Cabir and gang was standing at the entrance oogling at girls. Manik entered the college and saw them standing there. "Woh dekh aa gayi humare topper" Dhruv said attracting Cabir and Abhi's attention to manik. "Are aao aao. Kaisa dha jungle mein bhooton ki saath mangal" Cabir laughed and hi-fied withabhi. "Laktha hein kisi bhoot ne daara diya bichare ko. Dekh how his face turned pale" Cabir and others were teasing him When a jet black Harley Davidson entered the campus drawing everyone's undivided attention towards it.

The person on Harely Davidson was wearing a black jacket zipped till neck and a black jeans with a knee length black heeled Boots. Everyone was stunned seeing the attitude and aura surrounded the person. The person parked the bike and removed the helmet leaving everyone shocked. It was a girl. Nandini..Nandini murthy. Her hair was long, black, reached till her waist. Her eyes green in colour and with light make up and dark red lipstick. She kept the helmet on the bike and moved towards the entrance wearing her shades. "Who's that chick man?" Said dhruv staring at her. Hearing this she turned her head towards them and flashed a seductive smile.

"Woo hoo..laktha hein aaj humara din hein. Itni hot ladki" Cabir hi-fied with abhi and dhruv laughing. "Aur tu jaa aur padai kar chal" abhi said pushing manik aside. Manik was just lost in her. "Hey baby" said Cabir flirting. " hey" Nandini replied in the same tone and tracrd her forefinger on cabir's cheeks. Cabir was grinning like a fool seeing Nandini. But the next thing shocked him. She held his chin with her thumb and forefinger tightly and forwarded his face near her. She was looking straight in his eyes making him gulo his saliva in fear. She pushed him back, he fell back with his bike and Nandini said "next time u try to comment or look at me, dn don't blame me if u turn blind" Nandini warned with an expressionless face. "And u" she said pointing towards dhruv "what did u say 'chick'?" Agli baar tumhara shakal bhi mat ddikhana varna tumhara yeh shakal kisiko dikhane ki layak nahi rahega" she said before turning to leave. She glared at abhi and left giving a dumbstruck manik.

She entered the college with full on attitude and ruthlessness in her body language. Anyone who saw her can guess her rudeness and attitute. Everyone in the corridor was staring at her with their mouths open. She was indeed sexy. She was short but had killer looks and shape. She just smirked seeing everyone oogling at her. It wasn't new for her to be the centre of attention but no one dared to approach her cuz of her anger issues. She entered the principals cabin without knocking where the trustee of the campus was waiting for her.

Nandini sat on the chair kept there and placed her foot on principals table and rested her head on the back od the chair. "So Nandini u r here." Harry (trustee) said. "Ooh please cut these welcome drama and come to the point. I don't have while day for these shits" said Nandini with her eyes closed and head resting on the chair. "Well don't grab much attention. It can be dangerous for u and for the reason u r here" harry said seriously. "I know that. Tell me something I dnt knw and I should b aware of" Nandini said sitting straight and playing with the paper weight. "Well for now this is it" harry said calmly. "Fine then" Nandini stood up to leave. "And ya u r a dance student here" harry said. "What ? Dance? I told u I wnt join dance" Nandini said crushing the paper weight she was holding. "Please Nandini calm down. I dnt have a choice. Every other subjects are filled." Harry said calmly. "Fine" Nandini slamed the door and left.

"Kya yaar. I mean itna gussa that too with trustee. She is dangerous man. Subah Cabir and gang now trustee" manik talked to himself before leaving to library. Manik was sitting in the library reading some books. That's when he heard whispering in the library. He looked up from his book to see the same girl sitting opposite to him with her legs on the table and hearing music in her ipod. Her eyes were closed and she was swinging her head to the beats which made her hair to sway. Manik was lost in her. He was brought out of his trance with a soft voice. "Like what u see?" Nandini asked him still with her eyes closed. "No..woh..I..nothing" manik said and ran from there. "Fattu" Nandini smiled and concentrated on her music.

So here's the next part. Plz do comment ur views even if it is good or bad.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
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sorry di m super duper late...got stuck with study 😭
amazing n funny update 😊
dhamakadar entry of nandu 😃 too hawtt 😉
boys ki to wat laga di ekdum se 😃
hehe cabir n dhruv ki to hawa nikal gayi 😆
n our all shy nerd boy was 😳
so she has ccome here for a mission hmm suspense...
last scene was awesome
whn nandu told like wht u see 🥱
n manik was stammering
chal beta bhage le warna tujhe nandu kha jayegi 😉
omg really he ran 🤣 indeed a fattu 😆
yayyy m the 1st 🥳
love u lottzzz di ❤️
thnx for the pm
cont soon 🤗
Edited by mehjaben_nahin - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Aww.. manik is so innocent n nandini is so diff..
actually manik nandini has gone thru role reversal .. dey r d opp in dis ff what is shown on tv..
nice update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Hahahah...dat was amazing
Wild bold n dangerous nandu...
Awesome
Luved it...
Mind-blowing

Specially d last part...
FATTU...!!! Hahahahahah
So good...

Cont soon man ur too gud
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
OMG... what an attitude man...
Perfectly penned...
I am amazed with the change in rolls of these two...
Cont soon...
And yeah plz continue your another ff "let it go" too...

Thanx for pm..

Keep writing... stay blessed...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Nice update dear ,
but fattu woh bhi Manik ,
seriously never ever imagined in my weirdest thought .
And and Nandu another big surprise of today's update ,
oh I am just loving your story continue soon .

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