The Devil in Boots - Manan ff NOTE page 26 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
interesting
i just love supernatural...
continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Its a really interesting concept... 👏
Do continue bt 1st plss plss plss plss plss plss update
ENCHANTED!.plsss A REQUEST!
I sm dying read enchanted! 😒 ❤️
Dis was nice...
different frm oders... like always...
keep goin gal!! ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Vampire stuff???
Are you serious???
Its gonna be damn interesting

The prologue was awesome
Pls pls cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Woah man! This was something exceptionally brilliant.. I didn't even think about such a thing... U truly have a beautiful mind and to come up with such a track is commendable👏 I take it that nandu is a vamp [ all sexy and brave and cute :) ] this manan story will definitely be the one to get hooked on easily, and if thats your plan then I've been successfully trapped 😛
PS : I've sent you a buddy request so please do accept it and pm me when you update next!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Ok she is a vampire in this story its sound amazing i really love scary stories. Update Asaps. Will b waitinig.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
omggg prologue seems lke very scarry😭😭😭 if prologue is so scary dn d story is going 2 b hell dreadful😭😭😭 plzz dnt seperate #manan😭😭😭 update itx nxt chp soon will b w8ting for it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Hey guys. Am very happy that u guys liked my new story. Do support me like u guys have been doing. Thank you so much. Love u all.
Part 1:

------Midnight--------

A boy was running through the dense forest, looking back every second. It was clear that he was scared. The forest was forbidden for humans as the elderly people who lived near the forest said the forest is haunted by deadly ghosts. He was crying shouting for help. But no one came for the rescue. It was pitch black, he stumbled and fell down many times hurting his face, hands and legs. He was bleeding badly. What started as a mere ragging ended badly.

###flashback###

"Hey u come here." Said a boy who was standing with a group. "Yes" said the boy. "Aaww look who is here. It's our very own Manik Malhotra, the nerd of the college. The topper" said the other boy who snatched his bag and emptied the books on the floor. The group of boys started to laugh. "Please let me go" manik said trying to run away. He has always been like this. The nerd, the topper, always stays away from trouble but it finds him.

"Don't show ur attitude boy" said the leader Cabir pushing manik against a wall. "Leave me" manik tried to break free but in vain. "Tch tch tch..now u have to bear the punishment for raising ur voice.." Cabir said with an evil smirk. "No Cabir, not raising his voice, but trying to find his voice against us" said the other boy in the group who wore a cap. "U r ryt dhruv" said Abhi running his hands together. "So now your punishment is u have to go inside the forbidden forest" Cabir said grinning evily while others hi-fied each other.

Manik's eyes grew wide with fear. "No please don't " he begged them but in vain. "So midnight we will meet in front of the forest. If u dnt show up u knw d consequences ryt. So better be there" Cabir patted manik's cheeks and ruffled his hair before leaving. Manik couldn't register what he just heard. 'The forbidden forest? No no. What will I do now? I cant escape' manik thought before he grap his stuff from the floor and ran from there.

At midnight they met at forbidden forest and Cabir pushed manik inside and asked him to stay inside for 10mins but things changed when they saw shadows and movements. Cabir and hang fled from there, but when manik tried to escape he got more trapped in the forest.

###end of flashback###

Manik ran and ran. His vision was blurring that's when he saw a small cottage with only a lamp hanged in front. The only light in the dark dense fearfull forest. He ran to the cottage and stood in front of the cottage door praying that someone to open it even though it was utter nonsense to think someone will live in the middle of a forest alone that too in the forbidden forest. Hoping for the best manik knocked the door. He was slowly loosing his senses, everything slowly blurring. First no one opened the door. He knocked for a second time, this time with all the energy he had left in him. As soon as he finished the knock some one opened the door.

He only saw a blurred figure. The only thing that he could register was the pale color of the persons face. It stood out even in his blurred vision and before he could say anything he blacked out.

He woke up the next morning with a bad headache. He wasn't able to register where he was. He blinked his eyes for a few times to get adjusted to the light. Suddenly the glimpses of last night flashed infront of his eyes. He stood up with a jerk as the last thing he remember was seeing a blurred vision of a person. As he scanned the room he found that he was in his room. He checked his head, hands and legs for bruises of yesterday but was shocked to find none. 'How is this possible? Yesterday I was bruised badly and now there is not even a scar? Am sure it was not a dream. Hell, it was too real and damn scary' thought manik. "How did I get here? And who lives in that cottage in the middle of forbidden forest. A forest where no one even have the guts to look at?" Manik asked himself looking in the mirror checking for scars or bruises.

"Manik, baby, breakfast is ready" called his mother from downstairs. "Ya mom. I'll be there in 5" manik replied. "Ya honey, fast u can't be late for college" she reminded him. "Ya mom" manik whispered and got ready for college. "Good morning mom, good morning dad" manik wished them as he sat down for breakfast. "So had a good sleep?" Asked his mom Leena Malhotra placing a bowl of cereal in front of manik. "Ya mom" manik said not disclosing what happened last night. They'd freak out. Whenever cabir's gang rag manik and hurt him, they freak out and become over protective.

"So when are your last year grades coming out?" Asked manik's dad David Malhotra. "It'll b out by next month end" said manik filling his mouth with a spoon full of cereal. "Ok dad, bye mom" he kissed their cheeks and ran to college so that he won't miss the first lecture.


So that's the first part. Do comment ur views and suggestions. Hope I'll like the update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
awww THE MANIK MALOHOTRA as a nerd😭😭😭😭😭 awww bichara dnt knw how ds will story shaped up but plzz update itx nxt chp soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
oh! okay i know definitely it would be nandini that is obvious hope u prove me wrong😆 coming to manik ki marvellous entry he a nerd tough to imagine but u did a great job an amazing one...loved it
Keep it up
take care
Edited by zooni.shah - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Nice update.
Please continue soon.

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