The Devil in Boots - Manan ff NOTE page 26

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys..am back with another ff. Hope u guys will like it like u guys liked my other stories. This one is different from the other stories I wrote.
Prolouge:

"MANIK...MANIK...MANIK" Nandini was screaming on top of her voice searching for Manik, the love of her life, whose life was in danger cuz of her existence cuz of her secrets. The dense forest was silent, the only sound echoing was her voice calling manik.

"Nandini" a voice doing started lingering in her ears like a whisper, his voice. She ran in the speed of wing to the direction from where she heard the whisper. For a mre human the forest was deadly silent but for Nandini even the sound of breathing was clear as a scream. After running for almost 10 mins she stopped in the most scariest sight. There was nothing in this whole universe that can scare her except when it comes to manik.

He was lying on the ground covered with blood. Blood oozing out of his head and mouth while those bloodsuckers was laughing and smelling him. Their phangs were coming out. Manik was scared. He knew about them, about her. He was looking at her with a small smile on his face even between the scariest moment of his life. This shattered her heart into million pieces. Her eyes turning red and phangs coming out.

Manik stretched his hands towards her. In no time she ran towards him and scooped him up and left. The bloodsuckers followed her but she was the fastest, they lost her track. She reached a dark place where only the light of a small lamp was seen. It was a small cottage. She rushed inside and placed manik on the couch. His heartbeat was feeble. His eyelids closing. "Nandini..don't" he reached out his hands to wipe the tears falling from her eyes. "Am sorry..yeh sab meri vajah se" she sobbed. "It's not ur fault nandu. It's not. It's my time. I hav..." Nandini didn't let him complete his sentence. "I..I won't let u leave me. U can't leave me alone like others did u promised me" Nandini held his hands close to her heart. "I knw baby, but there is no other option" manik said in a weak voice. He has lost lot of blood and he was loosing his strength. "There is a way..there is..but I promised u I wnt do it" there was a glint of hope in her eyes which faded when she remembered her promise to him. "I want u to do it. Am asking u to break that promise" manik said his eyes closing. "No don't go" Nandini said and within no time her phangs pierced his neck.


So hers the prolouge of the story. Plz comment whether u like it or not and do I have to continue it or not. Am waiting to know ur reaction.

Index:

Part 1. - pg 5
Part 2. - pg 7
Part 3. - pg 10
Part 4. - pg 12
Part 5. - pg 16
part 6 - pg 20
Part 7. - pg 24
Edited by maniknandini - 8 years ago

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haritha2108 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ohh nooo is manik going to die
nandini is a vampire
and what is theway shes talking about
its sooo intresting
continue
waiting for chaptrr
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Vampire nandu... Seriously
Wow... Ntg can b more interesting

M liking it
Plz cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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What? Is nandini a vampire 😲
that's pretty cool..!!
plz update soon ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow. edward ne bella ko bachaya tha. aur yaha nandini manik ko bacha rahi hai.
interesting . continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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No words hats off in love with ur ffs 👏
Edited by Aayu98 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting prologue
Continue soon
Thanks for d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's different and seems interesting
Waiting for update
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow..finally a vampire version of Manan..damn..these ff are gttng way way outta imagination...
Awesome..continue..
But still i hate u for putting enchanted ss on hold!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wowww vampire story one my most favor stories r vampire stories awww amrutha love u 4 this ff update soon

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