MANAN FF::JO TU MERA HUMDARD HAI!!! chapter-23(PG-85) - Page 51

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FINALLY HARSHAD KO SAJA MILL GAYA PER MANIK KO KYA HO GAYA AB NOW NEXT PART UPDATE SOON

I CANT WAIT NOW

THANKS FOR THE PM

Sorry for not replying for the 19 ch...earlier...I hadn't logged in for a while now...actually months...n just now I saw u have updated the story... So here I'm...

In chapter 19 I just loved it...the way nandu acted n prepared breakfast for him...n was shocking manik...loved the way nandu Sat on manik's lap while he was talking with his mom...n nandu was enjoying her affect on him...the way she told him she told him call her nandu only...n not nandini...loved it was waiting for it...waiting for him call her as his nandu...

Regarding ur question about the patch up...

I think nandu should manofyi him...he has beared alot without saying a word...just for sake...though she has realized her mistake n she regret its...n is guilty about it but still...she has to make it up...after all all he has asked her for was trust...that to also on her own childhood best friend...who can never she her sad...who could anything for just one smile...though manik loves her n can do anything for her...but I think this time nandu should do something to make it up...for hurting him so much...she should make him feel special...n manik should also forgive her...but after some cute manofying section...followed by nandu loves confession...wanted to be little bug...but can't see manan having differences also...

Now coming to chapter 20...u have written it amazingly...the way u described their friendship...their childhood...their insecurities...their love...their bonding...from the start...was awesome...loved it the way u described that described the way manik made nandu stop crying at the age of 2...when no one else was able to do so...just a lollipop given by him could it...him their to hold her in very step where she is about to fall while learning cycling...the way she scolded him for talking to a new girl...coz she was scared of loosing him...though she thought of him as her best friend but still he meant him to much at that time also...n the way he listened to her patiently n then assured her...of her being the most important part of his life...n the way he expressed his love on the airport only coz he had waited to long to first understand his feelings n then after that even waited for the confession...n she broke his heart...just coz she dint realize her feelings for him...she also loved him but dint understand her own feelings...n he happily let her go...for her happiness...but when he asked her to trust him she dint even trust him...n blamed him...which was not correct the person who can happily die for u...how can u say that to him that he is wrong...

So when after returning home she said that she trusted him...but he just walked away without saying anything...which I think was correct...the mistake she has done cannot be rectified just by saying sorry or saying I trust u...she has hurted him alot...by not trusting him...he neverasked her to reciprocate the feelings...be just bad asked for trust...which she dint give...I felt bad that he walked away but he is still hurt...n we cannot accept him to be over it just like that...be needs time, healing, love n care...which she has to give him...n makrr him realize that now she will always trust him...n she guilty of what she did...

Thora sada bara hogaya na😳...sorry...but what to do...I just lo EUR storry...its my favorite...so u can always accept this big comments from me😉...I thought to write a short one nutt ended up writing this big...so now...plz update the next part soon...cant wait to see how will nandu manofyi manik...n plz put some manik's pov...also...like how he felt when nandu took him to jail...n called harshad n slapped him..n gave proofs to police...n most importantly when nandu said I trust u to him...finally...n now wjat will he do...just can't wait...for the next update...

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