Devil's Bride Manan ff thread 2 link on page 150 - Page 83

Hey dear dont get angry just ignore them and chill your story is awsome and really nandini should be brave these mans always take womens for granted they think they r thier servents its really good showing a women character so strong every one has its own pov and imagination so what if u add some funny scenes its your way of writing and your imagination thats why so many ppl loved it u r an awsome writer and about eleveter i havent read it yet but i always saw this ff on my wall but know i will surely read it.

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

Ohk guys today i got a comment tht my story is unrealistic real life me aisa nh hota hai ke kisi married life messed up ho or wo is trh ka fun kre and trust me i dont want her to feel bad she is right at her place being my reader you cn ask me anything its your right so i just wanted to knw tht you all too found my story unrealistic i knw its different and i knw my story changes in a blink.. humour or emotion ka bht bda mixture but i add humour in this bcz of you all love this

Acording to my pov my devils bride is based on nandini's character a strong yet innocent grl who loves her love ones or let me ask you one question kya har bar situation ke aage harkar rona jruri hai cnt we just accpt over faith agr mene nandini ko storng nh bnaya hota to manik usey torture krta aur akhir me uske innocence ke aage har jata or last me apologise pr kya ye realistic hai real lyf me hota hai if we want something we have to fight for it in next updates she is going to teach him very good lesson or yes abt my rape part saxena ki trh kitne log ate h aise ek grl ki lyf me cnt we fight for ourselves kya hum khud ko protect nh kr skte or in tht part she did the same she didnt take his help and why she would, she cn protect herself or trust me i wont change her character evn a bit i already told you my story has so many updowns read at your own risk but i want to know your opinion wht you think abt devils bride wht you found in my story if you want me change something i cn but just speak up

-Aashna

And here I go hey the upper note was by aashna aka aashu aka my hubby ... And here I wanna say something acha who am I? Aqsa yr Author of Elevator if u knw me by that... Chlo pehle thanks se formality start krte hai yes we are the best best besties ever like eva!! We are like Salim-Javed of IF world she cant write a word without me I can't write a word without her firstly cuz we are lazy lads secondly cuz hume ek dusre ke confirmation ki aadat hogayi hai... Now coming to the point.. See yah yah a comment has been made that her story is unrealistic and we totally respect that person that's her personal pov but here you go with a truth honestly when there's no humor or something like fun the comments of u ppl has a great fall on the updates... And when they are u guys comment g bhar ke am not being rude or offensive just speaking the truth and if i've hurt anyone so damm sorry.. chalo see we writer die for ur comments we write for u, you guys know that right? Yah u knw it mennu pata hai pr this story... Devils bride is a very sensitive concept that's gonna be unfold with the further updates so it has to get every emotion we just need ur support, we are having it but we want ur love even if the updates doesn't have humor... Somethings are just not good only when a particular emotion like humor is added we need every thing in the stry... so kindly co-operate and yah drop ur views about it... we need ur views regarding this

No..no..no please dont change anything..
Whatevr u have write till know was amazing..
I totally agree wid u ki in a real life it doesnt exist ki u behave like a innocent doll and handle tortures then one day the other person all of sudden started realising ur innocence...its all bullshit..
U have to fight for ur rights..and i m wid u the character which u make nandini in front of us was an idol for all the girl..that they r not week or an abla naare and all..
I was waiting for ur nxt update eagerly..i so wanted to see what nandini do to make manik apologise to her father..
And ya u r doing great job..hatsoff and lage raho..hehe.
Update soon.
Love..mini

Wow mindboggling wonderful brilliant update


Manik do realize his mistakes and try to mend it but he is impulsive too especially in making decisions now he thinks that Nandu was innocent as she has no idea about the deal

Continue soon and thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

it sounds like all the emotions in one part adore fun thn pain everything only in one part its too much different i myself dont knw ke mene ye kese kia my story used to change in a blink of eye some emotional some time funny and some time so realistic u all just cnt predetict anything abt my story and evn i cnt do this seriously today i have suprised myself lol

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

Ohk guys today i got a comment tht my story is unrealistic real life me aisa nh hota hai ke kisi married life messed up ho or wo is trh ka fun kre and trust me i dont want her to feel bad she is right at her place being my reader you cn ask me anything its your right so i just wanted to knw tht you all too found my story unrealistic i knw its different and i knw my story changes in a blink.. humour or emotion ka bht bda mixture but i add humour in this bcz of you all love this

Acording to my pov my devils bride is based on nandini's character a strong yet innocent grl who loves her love ones or let me ask you one question kya har bar situation ke aage harkar rona jruri hai cnt we just accpt over faith agr mene nandini ko storng nh bnaya hota to manik usey torture krta aur akhir me uske innocence ke aage har jata or last me apologise pr kya ye realistic hai real lyf me hota hai if we want something we have to fight for it in next updates she is going to teach him very good lesson or yes abt my rape part saxena ki trh kitne log ate h aise ek grl ki lyf me cnt we fight for ourselves kya hum khud ko protect nh kr skte or in tht part she did the same she didnt take his help and why she would, she cn protect herself or trust me i wont change her character evn a bit i already told you my story has so many updowns read at your own risk but i want to know your opinion wht you think abt devils bride wht you found in my story if you want me change something i cn but just speak up

-Aashna

And here I go hey the upper note was by aashna aka aashu aka my hubby ... And here I wanna say something acha who am I? Aqsa yr Author of Elevator if u knw me by that... Chlo pehle thanks se formality start krte hai yes we are the best best besties ever like eva!! We are like Salim-Javed of IF world she cant write a word without me I can't write a word without her firstly cuz we are lazy lads secondly cuz hume ek dusre ke confirmation ki aadat hogayi hai... Now coming to the point.. See yah yah a comment has been made that her story is unrealistic and we totally respect that person that's her personal pov but here you go with a truth honestly when there's no humor or something like fun the comments of u ppl has a great fall on the updates... And when they are u guys comment g bhar ke am not being rude or offensive just speaking the truth and if i've hurt anyone so damm sorry.. chalo see we writer die for ur comments we write for u, you guys know that right? Yah u knw it mennu pata hai pr this story... Devils bride is a very sensitive concept that's gonna be unfold with the further updates so it has to get every emotion we just need ur support, we are having it but we want ur love even if the updates doesn't have humor... Somethings are just not good only when a particular emotion like humor is added we need every thing in the stry... so kindly co-operate and yah drop ur views about it... we need ur views regarding this

Yaar every story is different wid different nature of manan nd ur story have a different tag line nd we live ve it al u keep writing keep smiling

every story is different in their own perspectives

soo keep smiling and keep writing

I think u write amazing n to be honest some may like it some may not but as a reader I enjoy it it has a total different concept n that's the best thing. The meaning of a fan fiction is a creativity of ur own imagination if it is she as the actual show then u might as well just watch y read. I like ur story n DONT U DARE CHANGE IT ( sorry if that sounds like a threat but trust me it's not, I just love it)

You both are truly the Salim-Javed
of our forum, like creating masterpieces for us.
And yes I don't think that it was unrealistic as in this world we can't know everything which are happening in reality so we just can't judge anything of being realistic or not.