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mishti5

@mishti5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#811

nice update

I loved the present part...give some more of it

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Noor

@CROCKOMICHI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#812

Oh god for the first time i cant understand what is happening in your stort i am sorry if u feel bad i know things r like crystal clear but still am confused is manik right about nandini's father or some misunderstanding what does nandini actually want to do. After so much of hatred how they fell in love they r really idiostic lovers yar i just want manik to realize his mistake as soon as possible thats it. And in the begning of story u mention manik saying ill words about womens and their character know all of sudden his this AVTAR just cant connect the dots.

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Aashna_chawla

@Aashna_chawla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#813

Originally posted by: CROCKOMICHI
Oh god for the first time i cant understand what is happening in your stort i am sorry if u feel bad i know things r like crystal clear but still am confused is manik right about nandini's father or some misunderstanding what does nandini actually want to do. After so much of hatred how they fell in love they r really idiostic lovers yar i just want manik to realize his mistake as soon as possible thats it. And in the begning of story u mention manik saying ill words about womens and their character know all of sudden his this AVTAR just cant connect the dots.
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ohk ohk i acpt my defeat i messed up wid u r mind hehehe but yhi to talent h as i told you devils bride it too much different thn other or abt frst prt or prologue it happens after there departure toh its obvious manik ka burst out hona or gusse me bolna or ye dots tb tk connect nh honge jb tk mystery unfold nh hogi or yhi to concept h story ka how a devil turn into a human and u cnt guess anything abt my story u cn only do one thing wait fr the next part

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Aashna_chawla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#814

Originally posted by: PrettyAaShuu
OMG..!!!
it was amazing..!!
first i was adoring hospital scene..
n laughing on Nandu tactics..
but in end i am crying.!!
but seriously just awesome u write..!!
I LOVED IT..!!
waiting for more.😃

it sounds like all the emotions in one part adore fun thn pain everything only in one part its too much different i myself dont knw ke mene ye kese kia my story used to change in a blink of eye some emotional some time funny and some time so realistic u all just cnt predetict anything abt my story and evn i cnt do this seriously today i have suprised myself lol

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Aashna_chawla

@Aashna_chawla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#815

Originally posted by: Fati.crisp
Starting was so cuteee...awww
And that girl in the hospital and maniks scene was so adorable...
Hahahaha that was so much fun to read how usnei papar bele to convince her hubby...
Manik has got some brains
...I loved the way he talks to his princess
Plzzz inko theek kerdooo I really want that...in real life too devil changes yarrr plz plz plz..I knkw u will one day but soon plz

thnk u so much dear and i will change him i promise plz wait for some time i just want three updates more for this

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littlesnow

@littlesnow

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Posted: 10 years ago

#816

Ohhh again it was full package ...awful- dat hospital scene, manik nd baby talk
Hilarious dat smurfy scene,drama- our nandus antics n manan at her parents scene,...bas ek he kami thi...romantic scene..n jelo manik...its always treat to find him jelo...emotional- day last scene

Okkk so now nandu took swear to change manik point of view regarding relation... N here we r also waiting for this..
Waiting waiting waiting for next update
plz try to post soon ..
I know m acting like greedy...

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Roshni S

@Roshni8

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Posted: 10 years ago

#817

Awesome update

In hospital, MaNan with that girl, that scene was really nice...

And then Manik talking with his princess. Aw... So cute...

"Baby wake up dekho subah ho gayi" - this line😆

And then someone made a heroic entry... Smurfy... Yeyyy!!!!

And then Manik got jealous looking @ DhruNi's pic...

and Manik Nandini ke haaton se khata hai???😆 😆

But the overall update was great

And one thing is very clear from this update, that is, Nandini's getting influenced by Manik, it was clearly visible in her POVs... Haha, sangati ka asar...

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Arunima

@jesse93

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Posted: 10 years ago

#818

Awesome update dear,
continue soon and take care.

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Aashna_chawla

@Aashna_chawla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#819

Ohk guys today i got a comment tht my story is unrealistic real life me aisa nh hota hai ke kisi married life messed up ho or wo is trh ka fun kre and trust me i dont want her to feel bad she is right at her place being my reader you cn ask me anything its your right so i just wanted to knw tht you all too found my story unrealistic i knw its different and i knw my story changes in a blink.. humour or emotion ka bht bda mixture but i add humour in this bcz of you all love this

Acording to my pov my devils bride is based on nandini's character a strong yet innocent grl who loves her love ones or let me ask you one question kya har bar situation ke aage harkar rona jruri hai cnt we just accpt over faith agr mene nandini ko storng nh bnaya hota to manik usey torture krta aur akhir me uske innocence ke aage har jata or last me apologise pr kya ye realistic hai real lyf me hota hai if we want something we have to fight for it in next updates she is going to teach him very good lesson or yes abt my rape part saxena ki trh kitne log ate h aise ek grl ki lyf me cnt we fight for ourselves kya hum khud ko protect nh kr skte or in tht part she did the same she didnt take his help and why she would, she cn protect herself or trust me i wont change her character evn a bit i already told you my story has so many updowns read at your own risk but i want to know your opinion wht you think abt devils bride wht you found in my story if you want me change something i cn but just speak up

-Aashna

And here I go hey the upper note was by aashna aka aashu aka my hubby ... And here I wanna say something acha who am I? Aqsa yr Author of Elevator if u knw me by that... Chlo pehle thanks se formality start krte hai yes we are the best best besties ever like eva!! We are like Salim-Javed of IF world she cant write a word without me I can't write a word without her firstly cuz we are lazy lads secondly cuz hume ek dusre ke confirmation ki aadat hogayi hai... Now coming to the point.. See yah yah a comment has been made that her story is unrealistic and we totally respect that person that's her personal pov but here you go with a truth honestly when there's no humor or something like fun the comments of u ppl has a great fall on the updates... And when they are u guys comment g bhar ke am not being rude or offensive just speaking the truth and if i've hurt anyone so damm sorry.. chalo see we writer die for ur comments we write for u, you guys know that right? Yah u knw it mennu pata hai pr this story... Devils bride is a very sensitive concept that's gonna be unfold with the further updates so it has to get every emotion we just need ur support, we are having it but we want ur love even if the updates doesn't have humor... Somethings are just not good only when a particular emotion like humor is added we need every thing in the stry... so kindly co-operate and yah drop ur views about it... we need ur views regarding this

PS: we aren't angry at all the girl who commented the unrealistic stuff has a point so I just wanna know ke if am gonna give less humor or no humor in some updates and pure scenes that are required for the story are you guys gonna continue loving and commenting on the updates the same way u do? And please do not criticse the girl's comment cuz she said what she felt and that's a true sign of a reader that is speak freely if not liking at all

Edited by Aashna_chawla - 10 years ago