Devil's Bride Manan ff thread 2 link on page 150 - Page 84

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

Ohk guys today i got a comment tht my story is unrealistic real life me aisa nh hota hai ke kisi married life messed up ho or wo is trh ka fun kre and trust me i dont want her to feel bad she is right at her place being my reader you cn ask me anything its your right so i just wanted to knw tht you all too found my story unrealistic i knw its different and i knw my story changes in a blink.. humour or emotion ka bht bda mixture but i add humour in this bcz of you all love this

Acording to my pov my devils bride is based on nandini's character a strong yet innocent grl who loves her love ones or let me ask you one question kya har bar situation ke aage harkar rona jruri hai cnt we just accpt over faith agr mene nandini ko storng nh bnaya hota to manik usey torture krta aur akhir me uske innocence ke aage har jata or last me apologise pr kya ye realistic hai real lyf me hota hai if we want something we have to fight for it in next updates she is going to teach him very good lesson or yes abt my rape part saxena ki trh kitne log ate h aise ek grl ki lyf me cnt we fight for ourselves kya hum khud ko protect nh kr skte or in tht part she did the same she didnt take his help and why she would, she cn protect herself or trust me i wont change her character evn a bit i already told you my story has so many updowns read at your own risk but i want to know your opinion wht you think abt devils bride wht you found in my story if you want me change something i cn but just speak up

-Aashna

And here I go hey the upper note was by aashna aka aashu aka my hubby ... And here I wanna say something acha who am I? Aqsa yr Author of Elevator if u knw me by that... Chlo pehle thanks se formality start krte hai yes we are the best best besties ever like eva!! We are like Salim-Javed of IF world she cant write a word without me I can't write a word without her firstly cuz we are lazy lads secondly cuz hume ek dusre ke confirmation ki aadat hogayi hai... Now coming to the point.. See yah yah a comment has been made that her story is unrealistic and we totally respect that person that's her personal pov but here you go with a truth honestly when there's no humor or something like fun the comments of u ppl has a great fall on the updates... And when they are u guys comment g bhar ke am not being rude or offensive just speaking the truth and if i've hurt anyone so damm sorry.. chalo see we writer die for ur comments we write for u, you guys know that right? Yah u knw it mennu pata hai pr this story... Devils bride is a very sensitive concept that's gonna be unfold with the further updates so it has to get every emotion we just need ur support, we are having it but we want ur love even if the updates doesn't have humor... Somethings are just not good only when a particular emotion like humor is added we need every thing in the stry... so kindly co-operate and yah drop ur views about it... we need ur views regarding this

PS: we aren't angry at all the girl who commented the unrealistic stuff has a point so I just wanna know ke if am gonna give less humor or no humor in some updates and pure scenes that are required for the story are you guys gonna continue loving and commenting on the updates the same way u do?

Originally posted by: anki_diya

Hey glad to read this than ur stories that u consider all ur readers comments. Good quality i must say. Well i hardly comment on anything but this cought my attraction so here is just a smal gesture to calm u down.

Look baby doll ur writting is good n its totallg ur story wid whome u write or whatever u do its ur wish. If u think u have some good concept then just go on n trust ur vibes. N chill Its f9 whatever ppl think of ur stody its their prospective u know na u have good concept just trust urself n write . Dont worry eventually evry1 willl love it n trust me on that.

N 1 more thing ...yeah no offence if pl get attach wid the story they expect you to update soon like within 2 3 days if u won't then only they wll get irritated n eventuallh u wll get such commnts like its nt practical n ol. Trust ur good vibes n keep smiling.😊

no no i am not at all angry on her she is damn right at her place and abt the update wht to do mere updates wakai me bht bde hote hai so i need time fr thm or u made me realise tht i m not at all wrong at place thnk u dear

Hey dear kisi or k lye story change mut kru jo bhi aap likh rhi hu we all loved it... U have a brilliant writing skills.. Keep updating ignore haters

Just continue doing what you are doing! You have a different and awesome concept! Update soon!

hey aashna

ur story is really unique and different from others..
that's what the thing we like.. I like..
so pls continue ur story from ur point if view..
I don't know about others..
but I like ur story personally..
u r doing gr8 job..
we r here to motivate u..
pls continue soon..

Love
Suji :-)

Hey dont change anything plz
We love ur story d way it is ..
Continue soon

what a wonderful update it was yaar...👏

I really liked the way u incorporated humour in the story. I think it makes for more interesting read! I'm waiting to see both of them soften towards the other a see already know that Anik loves Nandu!

hey..just want to say I am big fan of both the stories Devils bride and the elevator ... Because I love what you write ... These stories are ur babies and would really like it if u show us what you want to show. Yes every reader has his or her views and it's an award in itself ... That means they are reading it and loving it and are being part of this bful journey :D ... dnt think much just give us some updates quickly hahaha
Ya aur Kya inna slow update dete ho dono stories ka
U both are doing a great job dear so take a bow now and give us some quick updates :)))

Heyy Ashna & Aqsa! This is the first time I'm commenting on IF. I'm not into it but few stories have made me join IF. I saw Devil's Bride like 2 days back and I ended it in like couple of hours though I'm so busy with my studies but this story has something extraordinary. It is actually telling the true meaning of life that life cannot be good always. The concept of your story is new and different. Keep writing. Your story is no less than a roller coaster ride! Even if it wouldn't have humor, I'm sure everybody will surely like it cause its not about the humor always. Its about the sufferings and everything happening around the person. As the name states "DEVIL'S BRIDE" so I don't think every story needs humor! Coming to "THE ELEVATOR" it is also worth reading. Keep it up guys! Cheers. 👏