Devil's Bride Manan ff thread 2 link on page 150 - Page 80

How easily you managed...both comedy and emotional part...u are doing a great job...



Again today...i was laughing like hell...
Hahah...
That rum rum bum bum baaba???...
And that tharki...bahahaha...faida uthana...
And then at nandu home...
Hahaha


I was just rolling here and there on bed...



It was damm awesome...i felt like I am going thru laughing therapy


But
I really not understand about nandu dad...k y he want to grab the deal...disclose soon...


And past part was so so so emotional...i felt like crying



Anyways love u for this ff..
Update soon...
God bless u
Regards

Ufff start mai tu mera stomach mai pain hugaya hanste hanste but end buhat emotional tha... Overall I loved it...

nice update
continue soon

plzzz PM me when u make new update

nice update
I love jealous manik
pls continue soon
tanxx for pm

Love
Suji :-)

Really loved this update!!!! Especially the cute Nandu trying to butter Manik

Lovely update... especially tht Hospital part soo sweet

Superb n emotinl update
Finally manik ko thodi si akal aayi...pr jldi se usse batao ke har rishte mein give n take nhi hota
Father daughtr scene was awesome
Loved it...continue soon

Originally posted by: nikki.smiley95

Heyy dear...it was truly an amazing update yrr...
Manan hospital scene was sooo adorable...loved it to the core.. 😳
And nandu's cheesy acts were too awesomee 😆
I think Manik & nandini, both are right in their pov...but this time even nandini should try to understand him that he is not all at fail yrr..
On the whole...it was all amazing 😊
Thanx for the pm dear 😊
Tc

well in my ff i m not in manik's favour next update me manik ko phr se jhatka lgne wala or abi aise bht shock baki h uske liye b or baki sb ke liye b so wait for the next update and thnk u fr u r cmnt

Originally posted by: Nitisharma

Starting from start i love d starting as well nandu bindass character... U and writer of elevator ff seem to be best frnd... I feel d same while reading ur both ff... .
I just love jor so bolo jai mata di part. .. Haha seroiusly yrr u r such a amazing writer...
So amazing...
And ya devil needs more shock...
Let see what nandini will do now. ..

yes she is my bestie as i told we help each other in writting some scenes added by me in her ss and same wid my ff or hmare writting krne ka tarika almost same h she is best in looks fun or povs or me in humour or emotional parts so we used to help each other she is mine wifey i just cnt write a single word widout her and same for her or uske liye jitna kahu km h to yhi bht h

Originally posted by: epshitatabassum

When he com to know druv n nandu they r not realisation ship

well myself dont knw but dhurv ki entry bht jaldi hone wali rest u will knw in future updates