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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Mawara_Ejaz
beautiful writing :)
keep writing :)

Thank you. I surely will.

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Kuushi

@Kuushi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Wow awesome...that was intense..love the posessive manik..and aryaman played a cute role in bringing them together..manan are fab ..you should try continuing this as an ff would love to read it..superb writing ..looking forward to read more amazing stories from you :)

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mayaya.

@mayaya.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

I loved this!

The jealousy was awesome, and Aryamaan is too god man!

You should definitely write more!

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Ananya

@horizontwilight

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

wow!!

damn awesome!!

loved it!!

you write like a professional writer and I must say there are very few writers out there who can write like this

its amazing and beautifully penned down

do write more on manan

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bevirtuous30

@bevirtuous30

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Beautiful. You have described everything so beautifully.

Just loved it.

Continue writing.

You are a brilliant writer.

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

This is so lovely... the concept and so well written too...please do write another one...

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: navk
wonderful
loved it

Thank You! ^_^

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Humzy
Awsm os

Thanks a lot!!

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Kuushi
Wow awesome...that was intense..love the posessive manik..and aryaman played a cute role in bringing them together..manan are fab ..you should try continuing this as an ff would love to read it..superb writing ..looking forward to read more amazing stories from you :)

Thank a lot. Though I respect and appreciate your suggestion, Here the story is complete in itself. If I would continue, it might not turn good..rather end up stretchy and boring. So I would instead like to come up with a new story than to continue this one. And once again, Thank you so much!