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maniknandini

@maniknandini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: Kuushi
Awesome update..but chotusa..well manik whispered sorry but a little more of his pov where he thought he hurt her and shouldn't have done it would have been good..but loved the chapter and they both are madly in love with eachother while nandini is aware of it manik is not.. Manik want her presence near him always..can't bear the thought of her away from him and he made sure her sleep doesn't get disturbed bcoz of him..he unintentionally hurts her but does care about her too..maniks character is interesting and so is nandinis she is a lovable character..would love to read a litte about their past how they married how she fell in love with an angry young man all that..I've said this earlier too and am repeating I'm truly enchanted with your story and eagerly keep waiting for the next chapter please continue soon with a longish update..and would love to read a reply from you..thanks for the pm :)

Am really sorry dear for replying for the comments. Its just that haha network thoda kharab dhi issiliye updates bhi late hogaya. Thankyu so much dear. The characters r interesting and story is also going to get more interesting. And about manik's POV. I hav already planned were I want to add his POV. U'll get manik's POV also to clear the air. Dnt worry..and again a bada wala thankyu for such a bada comment.

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maniknandini

@maniknandini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: Kavyashree22
Its been more dn yrs dy got married,cn't sleep without nandini either.. Bt still m wondering y he is not realising..wat nandini's role in his life... In all these 3 parts, nly 1 thing happened in my mind.. I.e., plez sum1 hit manik till he bleeds frm nose.. Update soon...

Don't worry dear. In d coming parts all things will b cleared to the readers. We can't just write a story in d same old way..boy falls fr girl and get jealous or girl falls for boy and get in secured. So keep reading. I promise u wnt b disappointed.

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Shahnazzie101

@Shahnazzie101

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Your stories are Damm too good my day can't not go without reading your stories amd really interesting and trust me your really good at it too soo keep it up and give us move interesting stories and update soon ❤️ 🤗

Edited by Shahnazzie101 - 10 years ago