Enchanted - a manan ff link for new thread and part 14 in the indexl - Page 11

Very nice update.
Loved it.
Continue soon

Nice one I was expecting a long vala but its okay next time please do a long one and give us some manan talk as I wanna knw that is everything jst physical for manik or he even talks with her

aww itna chotu s apart😭😭😭 bt i lke it seruxly😳😳😳 n wana req dt plzz dnt mke man seperate as i wanted manik 2 fell for her😃😃😃😃 plzz update it nxt chp soon a si cnt w8 for more😳😳😳

Too good and please make Manik fall for nandini and update soon 🤗

The way you describe about thier lives was amazing and really heart touching my heart is still beating fast.

wow di u updated thnk u soo much
now things r getting serious n the storyline going awesome
m wondering wht will happen whn everyone will know the real truth ????
thnx for the pm di update soon n love u lotzzz

Awesome update..but chotusa..well manik whispered sorry but a little more of his pov where he thought he hurt her and shouldn't have done it would have been good..but loved the chapter and they both are madly in love with eachother while nandini is aware of it manik is not.. Manik want her presence near him always..can't bear the thought of her away from him and he made sure her sleep doesn't get disturbed bcoz of him..he unintentionally hurts her but does care about her too..maniks character is interesting and so is nandinis she is a lovable character..would love to read a litte about their past how they married how she fell in love with an angry young man all that..I've said this earlier too and am repeating I'm truly enchanted with your story and eagerly keep waiting for the next chapter please continue soon with a longish update..and would love to read a reply from you..thanks for the pm :)

Its been more dn yrs dy got married,cn't sleep without nandini either.. Bt still m wondering y he is not realising..wat nandini's role in his life... In all these 3 parts, nly 1 thing happened in my mind.. I.e., plez sum1 hit manik till he bleeds frm nose.. Update soon...

super cute!!

Lovely update
I loved the family bonding
Manan scene was so adorable
But I m little upset with u
I was waiting for ur update impatiently and u gave a short update...not fair
Please update the next part soon and this time please long one