MANAN FF FOUND PERFECTION WITH YOU part25 on 45 - Page 29

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow amazing chapter
Loved the jeoulisy chapter
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Arey it's ok meri jaan glad u like my comments...my comments are just token of appreciations for ur brilliant work ... U always give us superb Wala update ..zit na toh main kar hi sakti hu tere liye meri jaan

Again update was superb meri jaan ...loved the whole update... It's a treat to read jealous manik and nandu... Harshad was just seeking help from nandu for studies but our manik is manik fuming in anger and jealousy hahaha ...he also want nandu to be his partner so that harshad can stay away from nandu so sweet...par yeh ria kahase ta pak pari yaar ...ria is irritating yaar...manik se bilkul fevicol ke Haida chipak rahi thi ...hahaha jealous nandu ... So cute... Manik knows nandu well ..he knows where can his nandu be and what she may be doing?? Haha eating chocolate in gym like seriously good way to stay fit hahaha nice idea baiby... Their sweet moments in gym was so sweet and cute ... Suspense par kyu end ki ha yaar that's not fair ...ab jaldi jaldi update I want to what's gonna happen in music room..what's the emergency ???

Meri jaan I have a request pm if possible then it helps to know ur updates easily orelse I have to search a lot for ur story ...love u a lot ...tc... Update jaldi jaldi ... With lots of love and hugs
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Posted: 9 years ago
Read everything from the beginning till now in one go. Must say a very very nice story. Keepp it up !! I just love the way manik n nandini ade with each other!! Pls pm me for updates thank u!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update...
Thank you...
Update soon...😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kitkat5756

Arey it's ok meri jaan glad u like my comments...my comments are just token of appreciations for ur brilliant work ... U always give us superb Wala update ..zit na toh main kar hi sakti hu tere liye meri jaan

Again update was superb meri jaan ...loved the whole update... It's a treat to read jealous manik and nandu... Harshad was just seeking help from nandu for studies but our manik is manik fuming in anger and jealousy hahaha ...he also want nandu to be his partner so that harshad can stay away from nandu so sweet...par yeh ria kahase ta pak pari yaar ...ria is irritating yaar...manik se bilkul fevicol ke Haida chipak rahi thi ...hahaha jealous nandu ... So cute... Manik knows nandu well ..he knows where can his nandu be and what she may be doing?? Haha eating chocolate in gym like seriously good way to stay fit hahaha nice idea baiby... Their sweet moments in gym was so sweet and cute ... Suspense par kyu end ki ha yaar that's not fair ...ab jaldi jaldi update I want to what's gonna happen in music room..what's the emergency ???

Meri jaan I have a request pm if possible then it helps to know ur updates easily or else I have to search a lot for ur story ...love u a lot ...tc... Update jaldi jaldi ... With lots of love and hugs



uff thanks yaar!!!!ur lamba wala comment always puts a smile on my face!! thanks you thank you...the suspense will be revealed in this update..but be ready for a dhamaka...which is coming on part 26 :P :P :P :P :P i know that ria is irritating..even i dislike her a lot!!!im updating soon..till then keep commenting lamba lamba!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
hello people..im back with part 25...and yay!!its 25..i thought i would end it on 30..but need ur opinion on whether u like it enough or me to continue it...and if u guys do want me to continue then please drop comments...the same people who give one liner comments here i see them giving big comments on other ff's...am i that bad?? if so then keep giving one liners or no comments at all and i will end this ff :) :) :)
P.S:no hard feelings..im soory im i seemed rude..but it hurts a lot when i put in so much efort and u guys dont give a good eedback .. :(

part25
manan walked in to get a shock..mukti and cabir were already there..they found dhruv dropping a kiss on alyas forehead..
M:umm guys whats happening?
MT:u wont believe...
D:mukti let me tell him..
C:ok baba!!go ahead..
D:guys theres something that u should know...alya n me we r together now...i had a crush on her for a really long time...and i also asked her out once but now she finally agreed
MANAN:what!!!!!!!!
D:ya..i know u guys must be shocked but aren't u guys happy for me?
M:buddy..
before manik could complete his sentence nandini interrupted him
N:of course we are..but its just all so sudden..aren't we manik?
she pressed his hands a little..
M:umm ya of course..
Manan hugged dhrulya..
C:well then this causes for celebration..party at my place tonight!!!
MT:definitely..
N:guys i have to go..i have a class..
C:nandu ab ja rahi hain thik hain..but aj raat ko u cant ditch us..ok?
N:ok baba!!
saying this nandini went out of the room...she ran to the business studies department..she went to navyas classroom where she was talking with some of her friends..she took navyas hands in her and started walking when one if the students said
St:hey u cant do that u know!!
N:oh hello jante ho na mujhse baat kar rahe ho??fab5 can do whatever they want so just shut up and sit..
she walked out with navya and went to a corner
NV:nandu kya hua?
N:do u know about
NV:dhruv and alya?
N:ya..
NV:i do..
N:are u ok?
NV:of course..why not?
N:navya im ur sister...u don't have to pretend in front of me..i know that there was something going on between u and dhruv
NV:nandini aisa kuch nehi hain..dhruv alya se bohat pehle se pyaar karta tha...maine uska dard dekha tha jab alya ne usey reject kiya tha..maine uske akho mein wo khushi bhi dekhi thi when alya approached him..he truly loves her
N:and u two?
NV:it was just an illusion..dhruv hurt that isiliye wo distracted ho gaya..or main bhi behek gayi thi...but its all sorted na
N:hmm..but do u really think that alya is right for him?
NV:she looks a bit arrogant but she has a really nice heart beneath..when she will realize the depth of dhruv's love she will fall for him..dont worry..
N:anyway i should go now...ill see u later!!
NV:ok bye!
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manik texted nandini behind music wing..as soon as she got the text she ran to manik..
N:manik r u ok?
M:why did u stop me?u know that im not ok with her being involved with dhruv..
N:i know..but we have to thid for dhruv
M:nandini tum samajhti kyu nehi k he is too innocent and alya is too cunning
N:manik dhruv loves her a lot!!
M:but...
N:remember hamare relationship k start mein mene bhi kaha tha na k im not right for u..but ab?
M:u r more than perfect for me
N:yes..so theres hope for everyone!!trust me...
M:but...
N:ssshhh...
nandini palmed his lips...
N:we will keep an eye on her ...dont worry...
Manik hugged her..
M:u really calm me down..
N:i know..ab choro tumhare class ka time ho raha hai..
manik hugged her even more tightly!!
M:mujhe nehi jana,..
N:manik baccho ki tarah zid nehi karte...
M:main to baccha hi hu..
N:well then be a good boy and go..
M:ok but on one condition
N:whats that?
manik broke the hug
M:baby wants a kiss
nanidini kissed his nose cutely
M:i want a proper kiss
N:babies ko to aise he kiss karte hain..
M:not fair..
he made a pout..nandini pecked his pout
M:nandu just wait till we officially get back together...sab chizo ka chun chun kar badla lunga..
N:ok baba..ab jao!!!!
she pushed him..he kept walking backwards looking at her..nandini blowed him a flying kiss..he catched and and pretended to keep it in his pocket and went away..nandini kept smilimg at his antices

on the other hand...
alya was sitting in cafeteria when natasha joind her table
A:tum!
NT:ha main..
A:kab wapas ayi?
NT:bus kuch hi din pehle..
A:good for u
NT:vaise i heard that dhruv and u got together..
A:thats actually none of your business..
NT:it kinda is..finally tumne mere manik ka picha chor he diya..
A:excuse me?ur manik?
NT:yup... my manik..i still remember when me n him were dating...u tried so hard to get him..but never did..u finally got a replacement..im happy that u moved on..i will win him back soon...
A:hahaha..u dont need to be happy for me..im happy for myself..but sad for u..manik is now with nandini ...and they love each other a lot..thats the reason i backed out..
N:no no..correction they were together..they broke up
A:what?
NT:ya i heard them talking this morning...its a secret...dont tell anyone..im going to use it in the right time..anyway gotta go now!!!
she got up
ALYAS POV:well thats interesting..information like should not go to waste...
unknowingly an evil smile crept on her face as soon as she texted from someone from her phone..
natasha was observing her from far..and thought to her self
"STEP 1 COMPLETED"

precap: a confrontation..broken hearts...manan reunion maybe??
keep commenting to unravel..also i will update TOUCHED BY U TOMORROW
stay tuned...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
MaNan scene was cute
Nandini Navya scene was a lil emotional
I hope nothing bad gonna happen to MaNan
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Gawd...poor dhruv and manan...nothing can break them niw...but looking forward to the official reunion...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Good one
Loved it
Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank u so much for update n pm!! Dhruv n alya interesting..I hope manan gets back together in next update don't want anyone to create problems between them ...n poor dhruv I doubt that alya really loves him...

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