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dreamy_doll15 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
plzz do continue...I really wanna read...
m waiting..
do update...
itsss really needed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Plz do continue.
Waiting for the next part.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
eagerly waiting for your update
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey guys...if possible then someone please remind me which part im at cause i kinda forgot :P :P :P :P :P
heres the thing guys i know i disappeared in between but we all have exams and real life problems...so i hope u would understand..i send out pms to u all and u just like it..no comments it hurts..i already have written further more updates for this ff so that i could give u regular updates like before but i wont post the next updates if u dont comment and let me know...and dont just post that u want further posts tell me what u liked about it and also what u want to see happening in future..u say and i will write..so here we go...the requested update but there wont be future updates if u dont omment and let me know that u r here to read it..just liking wont suffice this time...i hope u understand.. :) :) :) sorry if i seemed rude but all i get in return of writing is ur response...so please do



the next day
nandini woke up with a sweet smile...she remembered the kisses of last night...but soon her smile disappeared...she thought to herself that by doing whatever she did last night she is leading manik on..its not like she doesnt want to get back with manik but she still cant let go of the trust issues..she understands that manik made a mistake but its just that some pains are hard to let go of...she knows that their love is strong but but but AAARRRGGGHHH ITS SO COMPLICATED... nandini eas puzzled with her own feelings..she was helpless she didnt know what to do...she wanted to get back with manik but ...
nandini was lost in her own thoughts when her phone rang..abhimanyu was calling
N:hey abhi!!!whats up?
A:nothing much..just wanted to thank u for last night..
N:no need yaar..what are friends for?
A:no still..i kn ow how hard handling those kids is..anyway listen its been a while since we hung out together ...
N:i know right!!ever since i introduced u n mutki u totally forgot me...
A:look whos talking!!!!anyway listen i havent really talked with manik since u two got together..how about tonight we have dinner..me n my basanti and u and ur shahrukh..
N:what?why?
A:nothing..i just wanted to know my sister from another mothers boyfriend a little better
N:but u already know manik...
A:i know..but remember when me n mukti started dating he proposed a dinner with the four of us..now its my turn..so why dont u two love birds come to my place tonight...
N:ummm...no abhi..how about u n mukti come over to my place...and ill cook..
A:r u sure?
N:ya 110%
A;ok then ill inform mukti...tata see u tonight at 8!!
N:ok ba-bye!!
nandini cut the phone and started to freak out...no one else knew that manik n she were on a break...how would she even ask manik...but then she thought before her bf manik was her best friend he would help her definitely..but she knows if she asks for tis help she would be inviting trouble to her own place but she had no choice but this... she picked her up phone and took a deep breath...she dialed maniks number...

on the other hand manik was sleeping...his phone rang out loud...he was pissed but as soon he that it was nandini calling his day just became brighter than before...he immediately picked it up

M:rise n shine sweet heart!
N:no its time for u to rise!!i need ur help..
M:umm sure...whats up?
N:woh um..abhi called
M:and?
N:he wants to talk to u..
M:why?
N:well remember u wanted to talk to him..he wants to the same..
M:ooo...interesting...so what do u want me to do?
N:ummm...could u be my boyfriend tonight?
M:really?
N:would u?
M:i would love to
N:but manik this doesnt mean
M:that we r getting back together...i know i know
N:ok so abhi n mutki will be here at 8
M:so ill be there at 6...
N:why?
M:well im ur boyfriend...i should be there to help u prepare for the dinner and stuff
N:hmmm...but i can do it by myself..u can come at 7.30
M:okk...miss murthy if we r doing this than we r doing it my style..got it?
N:ok...
nanidni disconnected the phone..she was too scared to even think what will happen tonight

6.30m pm
its been half and hour only since manik came in but he had already troubled nandini a hell lot..she was making pasta when manik encircled his arms around her waist and rested his chin on her shoulder.
N:manik what r u doing?
M:practicing...we need to make mukbhi believe that we r a couple..
N:manik..
M:hmmm sweety!!
N:ur taking advantage of the situation..
M:oh really?
N:aha!!
manik turned her around in one go...
N:manik what r u doing?
manik entwined their fingers and brought it near his lips and kissed it..
M:taking advantage of the situation..
N:ummm
Manik didnt let her complete her sentence he kissed her forehead..nandini felt weak on her knees...but she knew she had to stop..she slowly untangled herself from him...
N:manik why dont u look after the pasta while i go n change..
M:ummm sure...
N:okk...
M:vaise nandini wear something in red..u look pretty!!
N:okk
after few more minutes of teasing mukbhi finally knocked the door
nandini opened the door..they came in..mukti n nandini hugged each other while manik and abhi shook hands
A:hey man its been so long!!!whats up?
M:nothing much...what about u?
A:same old..u know i wanted to hang out with u for so long but ur best friend just keeps me occupied...
Mt:abhi!!!
she smacked his arms...
M:well tell me about it...well we cant really deny them..they are our lady loves..
manik swooped nandini into a back hug and kissed her hair..nandini forced smiled...while manik was just enjoying the situation
A:well u know guys im so happy that u two got together...i have always seen taht spark between u two...i always used to tell mukti but she blew me off...
MT;ya he did..but i never thought that these two would hit it off in goa..
A:in goa omg!!!now i really want to hear that story..
N:why dont i serve dinner?
MT:no wait even i wanna hear that story...
M:ya sure...nandnu lets tell them over dinner..
over dinner manik told them their love story...mukbhi were totally awwed over the story...
M:thats the night i saw my solace in her eyes...
A:awww!!!im so happy for u guys!!!
manik held nandinis hand under the table..
N:manik what r u doing??they cant see us under the table..(in low voice)
before manik could say anything
Mt:manik i know u cant keep ur hands off her but at least wait till we leave yaar!!
mukbhi broke down in laughter...
M:see...
N:guys why dont u sit here and ill get the desserts..
nandini left the table as she was having a hard time control her blush...
as soon as she left manik followed her..in the kitchen:
m:why did u leave?
N:manik..to get the desserts...
M:but i want my dessert before that..
N:manik what r u doing?
manik swirled her..and scooped her into his arms..he nuzzled into her hair and whispered
M:sshhh!!abhi is watching...
N:oh god!!
manik brought his face up..he removed a haor strand from her face
M:did i tell u how beautiful u look tonight?
nanidini made a fown..abhi couldnt see that from the back
M:i love when u smile like that
nandini showed him his tounge..
M:nandini
N:what?
M:i want a kiss
N:manik..
M:sshhh...abhi is watching
N:ur such amonster..i hate u!!!
M:but i love u
nandini slowly kissed him..
M:wow!!u know nandu last night was amazing...thanks for giving me hope
nandini smiled..
manik kissed her eyes
M:vaise if u dont mind?
N:sure...
M:abhi left before u kissed me..
N:what?
M:sorry..
nandini smacked him..they ran around the kitchen and then went back to the dining room..the rest of the dinner went fine..all the youngsters had all of fun talks..
soon muikbhi left...
manan were washing the dishes
N:vaise chacha chachi r returning tomorrow
M:really!!oh cool!!finally ill get to meet champ
N:ya i know...even he is very excited to meet u...
M:i know..anyway its late i should head out
n:thanks for tolerating everything tonight manik
M:anything for u love
nanidinis eyes enlarged..for the first time manik called her something like that
M:dont give me that look...u know i love u right...and if u keep that cute look in ur face i might not leave..
N:ok ok time to go...
M:goodnight girlfriend...i cant wait to get back together with u..
he kissed her cheeks and went out of the door..
nandini went to her window and waved to him as he started his car...


so guys here im done with this update...next update is ready but will update only if u give a good response...i need a a considerate amount of comments to update the next part and as im done with my ss BE MY DATE..will start a new one tomorrow!!!!comment to let me know if u want me to continue this further and start the other new ss :)

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Posted: 9 years ago
yipeee
first one to comment
hey u write such a beautiful way
waise can't wait for ur next update
pls update soon
muhhhaaa
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice update
Manik will be Manik no doubt
Loved MaNan scenes
But feeling bad for Manik
I know Manik was at fault but he loves her yar
And I m not so happy will Nandini's p.o.v
Thanks for pm
Please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
wowww.. itss a nice yar.. itne time bad update.. I really waited for long.. but itsss a nice... m loving it.. thanks for this.. :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) - :-) :-) - - :-) - :-):-):-):-) :-) :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Naice...wen will dey get back together😭
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing yar continue soon.. Really can't wait till manan get back together... Do it fast waiting

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