MANAN FF FOUND PERFECTION WITH YOU part25 on 45 - Page 23

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Posted: 10 years ago
hey people finally over with my exams :) :) so im back...i was so stressed..finally got some rest today :) :) im writing the part today...so here's a little promo for right now :) :) hope u guys are still here for my ff ...

M:so u thought about this stuff?
N:nooo
manik pulled her close
M;its going to happen...u cant resist me...
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M:i miss you
N:i love u too

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N:manik im sorry...i really am...
M:ssshhh...i dont want to hear a word...

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M;can i?? please...i need it...
N:manik...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally u r back...
Update soon...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally u r back
Nice promo
Update soon please
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey people!!!!i know im late but i sent pm's to a lot of you and i can see you liking it..please comment cause that would mean a lot to me...not only that all of u lovely likers it would mean a lot if u comment once in a while...would inspire me to write ahead..im not asking to comment more than once or long long comments...just a tiny appreciation would mean a lot!!!!!!


3 weeks later--------
nandinis phone was ringing...
N:what do u want abhi?
A:how do u know that i want something?
N:cause u dont call me everyday and whenever u do u want something..
A:thats not true..u know i love u right?
N:ya ya..i love u too...whats up?
A:actually me n mukti are going out tonight but suddenly her aunt came at her place and is responsible for baby sitting them tonight..can u please help?
N:ok..but u owe me one!!
A:i definitely do sweety!!!


EVENING
Muktis house
nandini rang the bell
Mt:nandu!!!what are u doing here?
N:well ur darling boyfriend called me...
abhi walked in from behind...
A:ur darling boyriend who loves his sister little nandu!!
N:ya ya whatever...i just hope i dont get bored...
Mt:oh dont worry!!these kids are a handful...plus maniks here..so u two lovebirds can spend some quality time!!
N:he is here...
Mt:ya...cause i didnt know u r here..so i asked him for help...
A:thats nice...great plan!!come lets leave...
Mt:ok honey bye!!have fun and please be censored cause two 4 year olds r here!!
N:bye guys!!enjoy..
nandini closed the door after mukti left..she took a deep breath and went upstairs..she found manik playing with the little kids..an instant smile crept on her face..
M:tum yaha?
N:ha woh abhi called...
M:do u want me to leave?
N:of course not...
M:but arent u going to be uncomfortable?
N:manik its already been 3 weeks...please dont do this
M:ok..so come here!!!ill introduce u to these little cuites...this pretty little girl is naomee and this handsome little man is naveed!!
N:hello babies..
Nm:so manik bhaia is this your wife?
Manans eyes popped out..
N:ummm no...
M:but she will be in the future!!
N:what?
M:its going to happen..u cant resist me!!
N:manik...the babies are here..
Nv:no no...we wanna hear about ur lovestory!!
M:why??i love our lovestory!!specially u know our first ki...
He was stopped by nandinis hand on his mouth...
N:babies why dont u and arrange your teddy bears..me n bhaia will come and join u!!
Babies:ok didi!!!
N:what are you doing?
M:what??telling them our lovestory...
N:but they are babies..what would their parents think if they find out...
M:so u want me to tell this story to our kids??
N:shut up manik!!
M:why??
nandini had turned completely red by then..she ran to the kids and started to play with them..manik ruffled his hair and followed her...naomee and naveed had three bears..two of them was in their hands and one was in nandinis..there was none left for manik...
Nm:hawww!!!!manik bhaia there is no teddy for you!!
Nv:now who will sit on your lap??
M:i think i have a solution for that...i have the most perfect most beautiful little doll of my own...she fits perfectly into my lap...and i love her a lot!!so im just going to pick her up...
he started advancing his hands towards nandini...nandini started moving back...he leaned in while she leaned back...manik sat up and slowly picked naomee up in his laps...nandini was shocked...
M:kya hua nandu??what were u thinking?
N:nothing..
M:then why are u blushing?
N:no reason...
M:wait a minute..u thought i was going to pick u up..didnt u?
N:nooo...
M:chhhiii!!!the babies are here!!!
N:manik...
M:waise...i dont mind u know..i love u in my arms..and then maybe we can go on an unbreak?
N:umm...i need to go..the babies might be hungry..
nandini ran downstairs...she was blushing like anything...she prepared cereal with milk...she went back up...manik picked both the kids up in his arms...nandini started feeding them..while she was feeding both of them manik extended his mouth.
N:what?
M:u know i love chocos..and im like a baby..
n:ur my favorite baby...
she slowly fed him...after feeding she took a napkin and wiped the babies faces...she took them up from his lap and put them into the bed for sleeping...she was tugging them in when manik came behind her...
M:u forgot to wipe my mouth..
N:wait let me get the napkin...
M:no no no...do it like u applied the haldi on me na..
N:manik!!
M:why cant u do it?
N:it was different...
N:we werent together at that time as well...
N:there werent babies at that time...
M:come on!!they are sleeping...
N:manik..u cant do this infront of kids...
M:ooo
N:yes...like i wont ever allow to do this infront of our kids..
M:wait??what did u say?
N:nothing...
nandini started moving back...manik encircled his arms around her and pulled her close
M:so u think about these stuffs?
N:well yeah!! duh!!
M:what did u think?
N:well we would have 3 kids..two sons and a daughter..
M:two sons?
N:yes..cause the daughter u will love her more than anything...and i need my boys to love me..
M:so my love isnt enough?
N:it is...but u will love the babies..i might get fazed out..
M:but i wont love u any less..but yes i will love them a lot!!
N:i know...im afraid u might spoil them..
M:whats wrong with that?
N:manik...u need a parent to be strict...u need to keep constant attention on them
manik slowly let go of her and turned around...nandini then realized what she had done...manik was always deprived of his parents attention..she could feel the tension building up...she went near the music system and played SAPNA JAHAN on it...
M:what?
N:lets dance?
M:really?
N:yeah..for me?
M:anything for u...
manik wrapped his arms around her waist..they entangled their fingers...they looked into each other and dived into each others eyes...nandini rested her head on his chest...manik left her hands and pulled her closer slowly...nandini wrapped her hands around his neck...they were slowly moving to the tune hugging each other..the silence was comforting...the environment was just peaceful...
N:manik?
M:hmm
N:im sorry
M:for what?
N:for making u wait so long...i want to be together with u again..but i need a little time..
M:ssshh!!!not a word...the fact that u r ready give me another chance after what i did means the world to me!!!
N:really?
M:well yeah...i love you...i miss you
N:i love u too...btw i think u will make a great dad..
manik broke the hug
M:really?
N:yes...you would be the best dad for our kids...
M:i would love that
N:me too...
manik had tears in his eyes...nandini seeing his tears couldnt control her tears as well...manik slowly kissed her forehead..they looked into each others eyes...maniks eye went to her lips
M:nandini can i?please??i need to
N:manik
M:its ok..i get it..
he was moving back...nandini pulled him closer holding his neck...manik looked at her for assurance...nandini closed her eyes..manik slowly kissed her...it felt like he had found comfort after ages..he ran his hands through her hair while the other was trying clasping her closer...they slowly moved away..
M:thanks...
N:thanks to u too as well...
they both smiled...nandini cupped his face and and started playing with his nose with hers...manik couldnt control himself and kissed he again...nandini responded back...they continued to kiss...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it so much
cont soon
Hadjer13 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsm i loved it
after such long time
Cont soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update.
Future planning abi sa.
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update
MaNan scene was very cute
Specially their kiss
I loved it
Thanks for pm
Please update soon
Bring MaNan together again
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally u r back
I m so happy ...
It was superb. ...
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Update the next part soon

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