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Posted: 10 years ago
hola!!!!!! here im with part17!!!!please read enjoy and share ur precious reviews :) :) :) :) :) :)

PART 17
6days later
Chachi walked into nandinis room..A smile instantly formed on her face..nandini was half lying on her bed..muktis head was on nandinis lap..dhruv and navya were sitting on nandinis study table..manbir were lying on the floor..this would have been a normal day to day situation but the only difference was they all had a book in their hands
Chachi:hai!!kash yeh nazara roz roz milta..saara saal to tumlog yuhi time waste karke bita dete ho..aur exam k do din pehle books se yaari karte ho!!
M:chachi!! Ab kya kare har koi to apki nandu jaisi to nehi hai..humse to sirf yeh do din hi padha jata hai
Mt:aur vaise bhi agar hum pura saal padhai karenge to exam k do din pehle aap k ghar main aisa time spend kaise karenge?
C:lagta hai chachi nehi chahti hai k huk unke ghar aye!!
Chachi pulled cabirs ears
Chachi:nautanki!!nandu ki tarah tum sab bhi mere hi bacch ho..samjhe?ab sab chalo dinner ready hai..
Manbir jumped up..
N:ek minute..kya tum dono ne chapter-4 khatam kiya?
M:ha woh!!kar lenge na..khana khake..
N:bilkul nehi!!pehle chapter phir khana..
Chachi:baad mai karlene abhi ane de na..
N:nop!!aphi ke lad pyaar ne inhe bigara hai..
Manbir became upset and sat on the bed with thier books while the rest went downstairs..
M:tera kitna baaki hai?
C:4 more pages..tera?
M:5..yeh nandini bhi na..
C:puri ki puri Hitler hai!par hamara jitna kheyal rakhti hai vaisa koi nehi rakh sakta..
Just then nandini entered the room
Manbir looked at her...both of them made a pout on their face and looked away.nandini went and sat in between them.she started eating from the plate that she brought with her..manbir kept looking at her through the book..nandini took a bite and went to cabir..cabir looked away..nandini made a sad face..cabir couldn't help but falling for thay face...he took a bite from nandinis hand..
C:mera ho gaya..can I go downstairs?Nandini nodded..before leaving cabir pointed towards manik..Nandini winked at him..cabir left..nandini went and sat beside manik..manik shifted a bit..nandini again sat beside him..manik again shifted..After repeating this 2 or 3 times manik fell on the ground..nandini started laughing..manik gave her an angry glare..nandini sat beside him on the ground
M:kya hai?
N:kuch nehi..Nandini started eating from her plate..manik kept staring at her..nandini extended her hands towards him
M:I still have 3 lines left..nandini laughed.
N:thik hai to tum yeh tin line parlo..then we'll eat together
M:ab bohat pyaar aa raha hai..a while back u left me remember??
Nandini smiled...manik finally finished the chapter..
N:come lets go downstairs and eat
M:I thought we would eat together..
N:ya..so?niche sab bethe hai
Manik took nandinis hand from the plate and made her feed him..nandini blushed
She started feeding him..mukti walked in
Mt:ooops!!wrong timing!
N:mukti aisa kuch nehi hai!come in...
All of them walked back in and studied for few more hours..then navya left with dhruv and cabir with mukti..manan were standing outside
N:bye manik!
Manik held her hands and pulled her close
M:miss.murthy let me remind u..mere punishment ka ek hafta...its over
N:so?
M:sooo
N:soo??Nandini pushed manik
M:what the hell?ab kya?
N:ill see u in college tomorrow...she ran inside while manik ruffled his hair..
NEXT DAY
Manik walked into space..he was looking for nandini..her exam started at 8am..his exam will start at 1..he needed to see his lucky charm before going into the exam hall..he found navya hugging someone infront of the principals room..what he saw pierced his heart..nandini was crying her heart out.
M:nandini!
Nandini left navya and went to manik..she hugged him tightly.
M:what happened?
N:manik I didn't do anything...Please trust me...
M:navya kya hua?
Nv:wo sir ko exam hall main nandini k desk k niche se chit-paper mila..
M:what?Nandini k pass main..
Nv:now principal sir is thinking about cancelling her paper..
M:what?I need to talk to him..he left nandini and started walking towards the principals room..bt nandini stopped him
n:I tried my best..he won't listen
Manik cupped her face
M:u trust me right?? Nandini nodded
M:navya take care of her..
Manik walked into the principals room
M:may I come in?
P:of course..dekho manik agar tum nandini k bareme baat karne aye ho to main khud bhi bohat tensed hu..nandini is a really good student..even I know that she cant do such a thing..but I cant deny the evidence as well
M:u cant suspend her..u know that she cant do such a thing
P:but I cant be partial as well..thats why I have prepared a new question paper..I will ask her to appear in the exam right in front of me
M:are u out of ur mind?she is already broken..how will she appear in the exan now?
P:look manik I know that ur nyonica mams son..but to me ur a student u cant challenge my decision...its better if u go outside and bring nandini in..
Manik went outside and told navni everything..nandini instantly agreed to principals decision
M:tum sure ho na??I can just call nyonica and get it all over with..
N:no manik..let me prove myself please..
M:thik hai tum jaw..main yehi pe hu
N:no manik ur exam starts in 15mins..already bohat time waste ho gaya hai..plz jaw
M:but..
N:no buts...Nandini kissed his cheeks
N:best of luck..vaise bhi navya hai na mere sath...dont worry
M:best of luck!!Nandini gave him a smile and went inside the room..
NV:Manik hum hai yaha..tum jaw.Apna exam do..
3 hours later..
Fab4 walked out of the exam hall..manik told them everything...Everyone was tensed for nandini..manik suddenly stopped and asked them to go ahead and he will join them later
Manik walked into the principals room
M:may I come in?
P:of course..dekho manik agar tum nandini k bareme baat karne aye ho to main khud bhi bohat tensed hu..nandini is a really good student..even I know that she cant do such a thing..but I cant deny the evidence as well
M:u cant suspend her..u know ghat she cant do such a thing
P:but I cant be partial as well..thats why I have prepared a new question paper..I will ask her to appear in the exam right in front of me
M:are u out of ur mind?she is already broken..how will she appear in the exan now?
P:look manik I know that ur nyonica mams son..but to me ur a student u cant challenge my decision...its better if u go outside and bring nandini in..
Manik went outside and told navni everything..nandini instantly agreed to principals decision
M:tum sure ho na??I can just call nyonica and get it all over with..
N:no manik..let me prove myself please..
M:thik hai tum jaw..main yehi pe hun
N:no manik ur exam starts in 15mins..already bohat time waste ho gaya hai..plz jaw
M:but..
N:no buts...Nandini kissed his cheeks
N:best of luck..vaise bhi navya hai na mere sath...dont worry
M:best of luck!!Nandini gave him a smile and went inside the room..
NV:Manik hum hai yaha..tum jaw.Apna exam do..
3 hours later..
Fab4 walked out of the exam hall..manik told them everything...Everyone was tensed for nandini..manik suddenly stopped and asked them to go ahead and he will join them later
Manik was walking around and finally saw who he was searching for..Alya!!
He took alya to a corner
A:r a manik!!itni hi jaldi thi to mujhe bol dete..aise drag karne ki kiya zaroorat hai?
M:r a nandini dekhleti to??
A:wo tumhari behenji gf!!
M:dont get me started..my one drunken mistake and now im stuck with her..I cant even leave her..she is my so called bff!otherwise her n me..never!!im so happy that she is getting suspended today...
A:really?
M:obviously..now ill get to spend some more time with u
A:honestly manik I was shocked when I heard that u were dating her..I was damn shocked..vaise main ek secret batau?
M:hmm
A:wo chit-paper maine uske desk k niche rakaha tha...I just wanted to keep her away from u..aur ab tumbhi wo hi chahte ho..im so happy!!
Manik pushed her away
M:I knew it..only u can do such cheap tricks
A:what??
M:listen alya..I love nandini only!!isbar im letting u go..agar aglibar if u do anything im not going to spare u!! Manik left the room leaving a stunned alya behind
Manik ran to meet nandini..she was in the canteen with others..manik sat beside her and side hugged her
N:how was ur exam?
m:it was ok I guess..bt I know that u gave an awesome exam
Nandini gave her million dollar smile at him..
Manik kissed her forehead
C:bas guys..Please dont start ur hot scenes over here..
Mt:vaise manik to itni der kaha tha?
M:I had some work..
C:dekhle nandini abhi se manik kam ko tujhse zyada priority de raha hai..pata nehi agey kya karega
Manik gave him a death glare..Everyone laughed..after a few minutes everyone left for their house..
Manan reached nandinis house
N:manik tum kaha the??
M:kab?
N:canteen mai ane se pehle..
M:I had some important work
n:jhut!!I know that im the most important thing in ur life..
M:really?
N:yes..kiyu?am I mistaken?
M:not at all..par aj tumne mujhe pehle call kiyu nehi kiya?
N:I dont know..I didn't want u to be tensed...
M:nandu if im not tensed about u then main kiske liye tension karunga?ab ek hi to gf hai meri..
N:y?do u need some more??
M:nehi baba..ek ehi kafi hai!!
N:bye manik!!
Manik held her..
M:miss.murthy im not letting u go without my reward today..
Nandini smiled..nandini kissed his cheeks
M:no..I want a proper reward..
N:exam k baad..For every A u get..u get a reward
M:what??mefi girlfriend ho tum..teacher behi..
N:jo bhi hu..jaisi hu main to aisi hi ho..
M:and I love u just the way u r
N: I love u too..
With that she left the car..She ran inside and went to her window...
She waved at manik and he finally started his car...

sorry guys i know im late...i couldn't proof read it either...so i hope u guys understand and bear with me for now :) :) :) :) :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
Manik care for nanadini is sooo cute😳
Continue soon
Take care😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Luvly!
So its study time for fab5.
Manik with Alya? For a second it shocked me 😲
Thank god everything is fyn.
...
Nyc update!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
I loved chachi and Fav5 bonding
MaNan was so cute
Please do something and punish Aliya horribly by Manik and fav4...please
Thanks for pm
Please update jaldi jaldi
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update...
For a second I thought manik is telling the truth to alya...
And I was shocked...
But as always happy ending of part..
Loved it...
Cont soon...
Thanx for pm...

Keep writing... stay blessed...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
I want that Cabir and Mukti do something to Alya for hurting Nandini
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb!! Seriously...
U r AMAZING !!
I loved it!! ā­ļø
Waiting fr d nxt part+!
Update soon!!
N tyssm fr d pm!! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
nyc update !!! I read all 17 in a go . they r so gud !!!
the way he talked with alya made me scare for a while but the duobt was cleared.
manik only loves nandu.
will b waiting for other parts
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Loved the way manik cared for nandini
Update the next soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
I just luvd it so much😊
Manan were so cutešŸ˜›
I actually thght manik was saying truth to alya ...dat it was realšŸ˜›šŸ˜Š...u wrote so wellšŸ‘
Luvd the reward thing...for every AšŸ˜‰
Luvd it
Always keep writing😊

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