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hey guys here im with part 18...hope you like it like the previous ones :) :) :) im almost running out of updates...so i would love to know what u want to see next then i could write like that...please tell cause im pretty sure that im going to have a writers block so please help if u want updates :) :) :) :)


PART18
Finally the exams were over...nandini was relaxing on her bed with closed eyes...suddenly she heard someone sit beside her on the bed..she didn't need to open her eyes to tell who it was...it was her over handsome boyfriend who was now mad at her...she took a deep breath. .it was high time she pacified him...Manik was half lying on the bed...his knees were bent...nandini called out his name...but he didn't pay attention to that...rather he took her physics book which was next to the bed...nandini laughed..she went near him..she slid her head between his hands that were holding the book...manik gave her a glare...nandini made a pout..he shifted his eyes to the book...nandini decided to tease him...she kissed his cheeks...manik smiled...he shortened the radius of his arm circle...nandinis head was quite stuck now..between maniks chest and his knees on which the book was rested...she giggled..she kissed on maniks nape...she started to caress his face with her hands...manik gave her a look..nandini slowly started implanting soft kisses on his jawline..she nuzzled her nose near his ears...manik cupped her face and removed a strand of hair from her face...
M:what are u trying to do?
N:what does it look like??im trying to be cozy with my saru boyfriend...
M:accha!!!ab bohat pyar aa raha hai!!!subah kaha tha yeh pyaar...
N:Harshad is my lab partner...I have to do practicals with him...
M:u could have come to me when I called u..instead u stayed with him..
N:manik sir was standing right in front of us..I couldn't just leave the class like that...
M:hmmm
N:by the way what are u doing with my physics book??
M:im thinking about taking physics for extra credit next semester...so that i can keep that jerkshad away from u...
Nandini laughed..
N:manik ur so cute!!
M:excuse me!!im not cute...
N:yes u r..
M:no I'm not...
N:yes..and when ur angry u turn all red..u look damn cute!
M:so u think im cute when im red...
N:yes..
M:so let me also make u red na!!!
N:how??
M:u forgot?u have the most adorable blush in the world...
N:accha...but how r u planning to do that??
M:nandu ur so innocent!!!
He left the book and pulled nandini closer...nandini finally understood his intentions and realized how dangerously close she was to him...manik held her chin and made her look at him...he had his famous intense looks in his eyes...nandini felt a churn in her stomach..she couldn't look at him anymore...she closed her eyes..her cheeks had already turned tomato red...manik slowly kissed her cheeks..
M:I love u nandini!!
N:I love u more..
Manik was about to kiss her but yet again they missed their kiss as fab3 walked into the room...all of them had their hands on their eyes.
C:at least darwaza to lock kardeta!!!
M:cabir im going to kill u...
Nandini was about to straighten herself..but manik held her tightly..nandini gave him a look..manik kissed her forehead..nandini didnt argue further as she also missed being close to him during all these hectic exam days..she just adjusted herself in his arms and manik snuggled her in
Fab3 opened their eyes..
Mt:chahe kuch bhi ho jai manik tu kabhi nehi sudhrega!!PDA ka copy right karke rakha hai tune..
They all settled on the bed...
D:aur isne to hamari innocent si nandu ko bhi corrupt kar diya!!!
C:pata nehi agey chal k aur kya kya dekhna parega!!!!
M:agar kuch dekhna nehi chahta to how do u always manage to come in the wrong time..
nandini punched manik..
M:what??if it weren't for him we would have been kissing right now...
nandini was completely embarrassed...she got up and started to leave but mukti pulled her and made her sit down...
Mt:yeh itni choti si baat pe itna sharma rahi hai jaise k humne tum dono k first time k bareme puch liya...
N:first time of what??
M:mukti!!
C:what??wait dont tell me u haven't done it yet...
n:done what?
Everyone broke into laughter except manan...
Mt:manik tujhe pehle baatana chahiye tha na..koi baat nehi..main hamari nandu ko sab kuch sikha dungi...
M:mukti!!!
N:what will u teach me???
M:kuch nehi...tum rehen do!!
N:nehi..I want to know..
mt:come ill tell u!! Mukti pulled nandini closer but manik pulled her to his side..this pulling session Continued for a minute...finally cabir and dhruv managed to release nandini from maniks hands
C:ur taking all the fun out of it...
M:chor degi wo mujhe...
D:shut up yaar...let see her reaction...
Mukti whispered into nandinis ears what they were really talking about...Nandini turend completely red... she got up
N:I will go Bring snacks for everyone... ( stammering)
She ran out
M:and u guys say that im corrupting her...
Rest of them burst into laughter..nandini came back with snacks..after few more hours of teasing fab4 got up to leave...fab3 left in cabirs car..manan were still standing outside...nandini was still blushing..manik smiled..he kissed her forehead and wished her goodnight...he was about to leave but nandini held his hand
N:wo manik...do u really want us to...
M:us too??
N:u know...
M:I know???
N:do it...
M:do what?
N:manik... (she punched him)
Manik laughed out loud..
M:yes..obviously...do u know how hard it is for me to keep my hands off u!!
N:really?
M:yes!!!
N:hmmm..
she continued to look down...
N:manik I know we have been dating for a while..but I need some time..I know I shouldn't but ...
Manik husshed her with his fingers...he pulled her closer..he held onto her waist
M:u dont need to say anything..I understand...nandini u r irresistible...but ill never do anything that ur not comfortable with...never!!!I can wait for u for an eternity..but I cant live without u even for a second...so u don't need to worry. My love for u is way beyond these physical attractions...
N:so ur not physically attracted to me???
M:oh god!!
He sealed his lips with hers just to shut her up...they stayed like that for a while..they poured in all the passion that they had stored...maniks hunger for her touch that he had for all these days was clearly being expressed in that kiss..after a few minutes they broke apart...
M:I hope ur question is now answered...or do u want more elaboration...
N:goodnight manik...
She kissed his cheeks and ran inside without making an eye contact...
She went to her window..manik was in his driving sit..
She bade him a goodbye...
manik smiled and started his car..

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Posted: 10 years ago
I think so..Nandini will decide to take it further..
Waiting for nxt update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for the romantic update dear😳
Nandini is so sweet and innocent that she can't understands what mukti say?
Continue and next part jaldi jaldi update karna
Take care😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update...
Cont soon..
I love there teasing session... and tye way nandini reacted... awesome...
Thanx for pm...

Keep writing... stay blessed...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update. It is always a treat to read MaNan romance. Nandu is so innocent and our Manik is so naughty. I always love the Fav5 bonding. Thanks for pm
Please update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome!!
teasing part was super good!!
loved it!!
continue soon!!
thanks for the pm!!
Edited by ananya0908n - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update!!
D way nandini was teasing manik was tooo cute! ❤️
Srry no suggestions... jus waiting for the nxt part!
Update soon!! N tyssm fr d pm! :* :* :* :) ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update 😳
Jealous manik😛
Fab4 teasing😉
They both need tym😛
So cute answer of manik😃
Luvd it
Always keep writing😳😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
sorry guys for the late update...as i said i kind of went into a writers block...but here i am with part 19..please read enjoy and share ur reviews...

PART19

Next day Vardhan villa Mukti was swimming and nandini was sitting on the side of the pool with her legs immersed im water...they were as usual ranting like typical bff's... Mt:have u talked to any of the boys since morning?? N:nop...manik called a few times...but I didn't respond... Mt:good job!!!I dont get them...they go to parties and trips without us...but whenever u n I want to have a girls day they keep disturbing... N:I know right!! What do u want to do next? Mt:I don't know...lets watch a movie??? N:ok cool...let me get my hard disk... D:dont worry I have got mine right here... Mukti and nandini turned to see manruvbir standing... Mt:seriously guys!!!! Ek din bhi akele nehi chor sakte hume??? C:huh!!!bilkul nehi...tumhe pata nehi akeli larki khuli tejuri hoti hai... N:hum dono akele nehi hai... M:nandu!!! Wo chor...tum dono humare bina akele akele hi pool party kar rahe ho!! Mt:akele tum logone chora hume???vaise bhi kaha pool party...apki yeh pyaari si gf pani utre tab na... M:yeh to hopeless hai...lets dive in guys... Manbiruv jumped in...nandini nodded her head in disbelief... Cabir, mukti and dhruv started a swimming competition... Manik slowly swimmed towards the place where nandini was sitting...he went there and stood holding nandinis waist... M:good morning miss murthy!! N:good morning mr.malhotra.. M:nandu come in na..please... N:manik...u know na Im not comfortable with swimming... M:im there na...vaise bhi holi party mein u dived with us na!!! N:wo to cabir throwed me in... M:im here for u na... Manik held nandini and slowly brought her down in the pool...nandini strongly held onto him... Manik slowly let go off her but stood next to her... Mt:love birds!!! Dont just stand there...come here and join us... Manan laughed and joined their friends...After a long session of swimming they finally got up...they dried themselves and went to muktis room...before entering manik slowly pulled nandini to the next room N:manik kya hai???everyone is in the next room waiting for us...lets go there na.. M:tum kitni boring ho!!!here I am ur hot boyfriend willing to spend some time with his girlfriend and u keep running away from me... N:no I dont... M:yes u do... N:oh please ha manik!!tumhara yeh jo sara romance hai na yeh jab hum akele hote hai tabhi nazar aata hai... M:really!!!! N:yes...fab5 k samne thora thora...par phirvi... M:are u challenging me?? N: no...just informing u... M:fine I will romance u wiyh everyone..what will I get in exchange???? N:ummm...ill spend an entire day with u...just u nd me... M:ok...vaise yeh reward nehi hamara regular routine hona chahiye...par kya kare I have got sharmila tagore as my girlfriend... Nandini laughed...she slowly leaned and kissed maniks cheeks...manik smiles at this cute antice... He pecked on her forehead N:ab chale?? They must be waiting for us... M:ha ha chalo..tumhe to...unki zyada fikar hai... Nandini laughed...they went into muktis room... D:tum dono romance karne ka ek bhi chance nehi chorte!!! M:see nandini and u say that I dint romance u... C:what!!! Nandinis eyes widened..she hit manik playfully... N:kuch nehi!!he is just kidding... Mt:vaise guys musicana is coming up!!!! N:yes..kalse we start practice...u know I think we should do something very unique something that will blow everyone's mi... Manik husshed her with his fingers... M:practice kalse hai na..to yeh sab discussion bhi kalse hi... Mt:ha nandu..Im sleepy..lets talk about something else.. They started talking about various stuff..soon all of them were asleep...except nandini..she looked at all of them and thought how blessed she was to have them...manik was sitting next to her...he slowly snuggled in to her shoulders wrapping her in his arm arrest...she felt peaceful as she had found her solace...she hugged him back and went to sleep as well

After few hours of sleep and dinner together manik drove nandini to her house
Nandinis front yard..nandini was sitting on the cars bonnet..manik was standing with his arms wrapped around her waist..nandini cupped his face and was playing with his nose with hers... N:ur really cute manik!! M:main??cute??seriously? N:yes...bohat zyada!! M: main cute nehi hun..tum andhi ho gayi ho... He made a pout... N:manik jab tum aise gussa karte ho na to phir aur bhi zyada cute lagte ho!!! M:agar main cute hu to tum ... N:to main???? M:bohat zyada vaisi lagti ho... N:kaisi?? M:jhasi ki rani jaisi.. He left her and started laughing out loud...nandini got down and started chasing him..they ran around the car but nandini wasn't able to catch him..so she started to leave for the house...suddenly manik came from behind and caught hold of her.. M:kya hua??itni asani se har man gayi?? N:mujhe tumse koi baat nehi karni. .. M:accha...to kya karne chahti ho tum mere sath?? N:manik!!! M:vaise whatever u want to do with me u can..I dont mind.. N:I dont want to do anything with u... M:to phir...main karu?? He started to nuzzle into her hair.he kissed her shoulder..nandini pushed him away.. N:manik...choro!! M:nop...
N:I hate u!!
M: I love u
N:I hate u
M:I love u
N:I hate u
M:I love u
N:I hate u
M:I hate u
N:I love u M:hahahhahahhaha...see I knew it..u love me!! N:hufff..ur such a monster manik!!!!but im ur monster!!! Nandini smiled.. N:accha ab mujhe choro...kal result hai plus musicana ki practice start karni hai na.. M:thodi der aur nandu..please ruk jao!!! N:manik..its 1am...we r going to meet again in 8 hours.. M:8 hours ka matlab samjhti ho!!! 320 minutes!!! 19200 seconds!!! N:r a wah!!!someone is good in maths... M:side effects of having a scientist for a girlfriend... N:I really do love u... M:I wish I could say the same... N:what!!! M:its just that I love u alot!! N:goodnight manik...she slowly pecked on his cheeks and went inside...she went to her window and bade him as he started his car...
Next morning It was a busy morning for nandini..she woke up early and prepared fab5's schedule for the day...she had her breakfast and texted manik not to pick her up today as she would go with her chacha...as soon as her got ready they both went out...only to find manik standing outside... N:manik tum yaha kya kar rahe ho??? M:namaste chachaji! Ch:namaste beta... N:manik I asked u something!! M:can't u see??? Im here to pick u up... N:but I told u na that i would go with chacha...then?? M:woo... Ch:nandu!!beta kya problem hai agar o tujhe pick karne aye to???its so sweet of him..aur tu hai ki!! M:hain na chacha!!!valai ka to zamana hi nehi raha!! Ch:very bad nandu!! Very bad...anyway...tum dono college jaw..ill meet u in the evening...bye beta!! N:bye chacha... As soon as chacha left nandini turned to give manik a deathly glare... M:what?? N:tum meri baat kabhi nehi manoge??? M:ufff nandu... N:ufff manik!! M:listen nandini murthy u have got a very possessive and stubborn boyfriend with whom you dont spend quality time at all..upar se agar tum mujhse tumhe pick karne ka haq bhi chinlo to kaise chalega!! He made a cute angry pout...nandini just couldn't help but smile..she slowly went near him and hugged him from side.. N:accha baba sorry!!! Agey se aisa nehi hoga... M:promise? N:nandini promise... Manik picked her up in his arms.. N:manik what are u doing?? M:I told u na im here to pick u uo...so here im picking u up... N:very funny!! M:I know!! Im hilarious... N:manik put me down na..chachi dekhlengi!! M:do I care?? Inspite of nandinis constant ranting manik didn't pay a single heed and carried her to the car and then got in himself N:ur such a stubborn monster!! M:I love u too nandu!! N:whatever... Manik leaned in towards her... N:seriously manik?? M:what?? N:tumhe lagta hai ki mujhe itna gussa dilane k baad bhi u can just lean in and kiss me.. M:oh hello miss one track mind...I was just fixing ur seat belt... N:oh!! M:nandini murthy I get it u have an incredibly hot boyfriend...but that doesn't mean na that u will always think about such stuffs...ha wo baat alag hai ki dont mind... He leaned closer to her face but nandini put her hand in between.. N:no thanks..now will u please drive??we r getting late.. Manik gaveher a smirk and went back to his seat.. M:whatever her highness wants...who am I to refuse?? Nandini just nodded in disbelief.. After half an hour of maniks on and off teasing they finally reached the music room.. D:agai tum log!! Mt:vaise thodi jaldi nehi agai... N:mr.malhotra se pucho...i M:ha ha sari galti to meri hi hain.. N:do u have a doubt?? D:ok ok guys...stop fighting...tum dono k intezar mein cabir to so hi gaya... nandini went to and started to wake cabir up by slowly jerking his hands... M:lol!! Aise uthaogi na to yeh kabhi nehi uthega.. N:to kya karu? M:let me show u... he slowly went near cabir and shouted out as loud as possible... Cabir was startled... M:see mission accomplished... N:manik r u crazy?? Aisa koi karta hai kya?? Cabir went to nandini and hugged her...he buried his face I her shoulders.. C:see mommy dad is so rude. Only u understand me.. Nandini laughed and slowly patted his back... M:oh my god!!u guys r absolutely unbelievable! Agar tum dono ka yeh pyaar khatam ho gaya hai to kya hum practice kare??musicana is coming up guys... They all got a sudden reality check...so all of them got up and started rehearsing. ...
After a few hours of rehearsing finally they packed up...nandini was restless as the results would be hung on the notice board any moment... M:guys...lets go!! C:to the canteen... M:nop!!!to the notice board...aj hamara results ane wala hai... Mt:oh yes...pata nehi space ji problem kya hai...exam k ek din baad hi result publish kardete hai!!yeh teachers insaan hai yah emotionless robot... C:pata nehi yaar...wait a second manik tu thik to hain na?? M:ha kiyu?? C:to kabse result k liye itna excited ho gaya???nehi I know that u love nandini very much...par uska bukhaar tujhe itna zyada effect karega yeh maine kabhi nehi socha tha!!! N:kuch bhi!!!! Manik wrapped his arms around nandini... M:wo kya hain na cabir...iske pehle kabhi I was never tempted with my rewards for results.. D:really???kya reward milega?? M:batadu nandu?? Nandinis eyes widened... C:use kya puch raha hai..batana... N:kuch nehi..yeh to bass mazak kar raha hai...now can we go??? Im really tensed here guys!! Mt:oh god!!! Like seriously???? Tu itni worried hai to we should go and jump of the terrace... They all laughed and went to notice board... Nandini somehow struggled to go in the front to search for their names...manik was right beside her protecting her from the crowd... M:tum ek kaam karo tum hum logo ka result in the bottom..and I will look for urs... N:kiyu?? M:kiyuki miss.murthy apka jo result hain wo upko height so to bohat zyada ucha hain!!!! N:oh my god manik malhotra ur soo funny!!! M:I know right... Manik rested his chin on nandinis head ignoring all her glares...nandini was searching for their results...manik didn't need to search for hers cause he knew it was at the top... After a while they both came out of the crowd... C:I know k nandini ne top kiya hain...with 9 A's for sure...hume bas itna baatade k humne pass kiya hain nehi.. M:of course!!!! Mt:yes... All of them high fived each other!!! N:u know guys isse prove hota hain k agar tum chaho to accha result kar sakte ho!!!if u guys aim for a better result next time then... D:ok meri maa!!! Bas...hum isime khush hain... C:ok guys...time to go home and party!!!! N:no cabir...we cant party amd tire ourselves today...we have to practice for musicana... Mt:buf nandu we have to celebrate!! N:ok then why dont u guys come over to my place today...and we'll have some fun.. C:sounds fair...we will party after winning musicana!!!!ok then see u guys in the evening... Everyone left the place... nandini was walking but manik pulled her into the store room... N:what??? M:miss Murthy have u seen my result??? N:yes..and manik im soo happy for u!!5 A's...im proud of u!! M:im dating the famous nandini murthy!!! Itna to banta hi hai..vaise do u remember our deal?? N:what deal??? M:u don't remember? N:no Manik went dangerously near her and whispered in her ears.. M:for every A I get...I get a reward... N:o accha...to thora wait kariye mr.malhotra... M:ab kya nandini?? N:sabar ka fal mitha hota hai!!!aj raat ko..u will get ur reward... M:raat ko!!!! What r u trying to indicate?? N:manik!!!! She turned to leave..but manik caught hold of her and said that he'd be waiting for the night..

Evening Murthy house... Fab5 at the door.. Dhruv rang the bell Nandini opened it...before they could enter nandini stopped them all M:what?? N:guys u know what...kiyu na hum sab bahar chalte hai??? It would be better na?? C:no yaar..mujhe to chachi k haat ka khana aur teri bed pe sona hai.. N:no cabir..mera to bahar jane ka man hai!!! M:o hello tumhe kya hua??r u ok?? Before nandini could answer a really good looking and well dressed guy came from behind... Guy:so they are ur best friends huh!! He wrapped his arms around nandinis shoulder..manik got pissed at this M:yes and who are you?? Guy:im aryaman...nandinis fiance..
precap:drama!!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update..
ab ya fiance kahan say aa gya :D

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