Manan- Zindagi Khoobsurat Hai-:Updated Chaper 6 Part B Page 6

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Manan- Zindagi Khoobsurat Hai. Hi guys, I am new to this forum, a big fan of Kaise yeh yaariyan, especially Manan. Am trying to write a story, hope u guys like it

Nandini Murthy- Beautiful,simple, yet enjoy life to the fullest, ceases every opportunity that comes her way, she is kind-hearted and never fails to put a smile on someone's face. She is a pediatrician and works in a hospital and volunteer in NGO on weekends. She is a chatterbox and can talk non- stop.

Manik Malhotra- Handsome, tall and muscular.Rich, but yet down to earth. His parents always taught him to value money becuz his parents struggled a lot to reach where they are today. His parents own a NGO for old people . They always help the poor. Manik is more reserve and don't tak much, but care for people feelings.

Navya Naveli- Nandini best friend. She is also full of life. She is very close to Nandini and they share all their secrets with each other

Cabir, Dhruv, Aliya, Mukti- they are all Manik best friends(they are popularly know as Fab5). All are rich expect for Dhruv. Fab5 desire to open their own center where they can accommodate old people, orphans and basically help those in need. Aliya and Mukti are sisters and they share a beautiful bond- they are one year apart, Mukti is older for Aliya. Cabir is a lot of fun and love cracking jokes, becuz he like to make people smile. Dhruv is a photographer & love to capture people smiles. It is their passion to help people that made them become friends and bonded so well.

Let me know if u want me to continue
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plzz continue soon & pm me...
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Chapter 1, Page 1

Fab5 in Manik living room planning what to do for the opening ceremony for their center (Zindagi Khoobsurat Hai)

Manik: guys I think we should call a guest who is very good with kids and can also have a conversation with the elders. We have already met these orphans and elders who will be staying at our center. We bonded so well with them, but I want a fresh face to meet them. It is a new start for these people and I want them to start their new life with a smile on their face, knowing that their future is going to be so much better.

Mukti, Aliya, Cabir and Dhruv: good idea Manik, we will try our best to get someone

Mukti: guys I have someone in mind, her name is Nandini Murthy. She work as a pediatrician at the same hospital where I work(Mukti is a Nutritionist). She is the perfect choice, she is just wonderful with kids and know how to handle people very well. She carries with her a positive vibe and she is passionate when it comes to kids. She loves putting a smile on people faces. I will let her know and see if she will be willing to come. She also volunteer at NGO on weekends.

Manik: supered idea. If you are saying she is good then she must to good.

Aliya, Cabir, Dhruv: yes Mukti, let's bring her onboard.

Manik: ok guys I have to go to office now (he is an architect)along with his dad. He designed the center

Mukti: we have to meet tomorrow to add the finishing touch to the kids section. In the next two days we have to finish it. I will also talk to Nandini when I go in to work today and see if she have any last minute idea for us to make the children section better incase we are missing something.

Aliya: ok wonderful di, thank god we are finished with the elderly section or we would not be done in time to open our center.

Manik: once we are done with the children section we will do the opening ceremony, in a week time.

Cabir: I cannot believe our dream is about to become a reality.

All of them had tears in their eyes
Manik: Yes, I am so happy and excited

Aliya, Mukti, Cabir, Dhruv: the feeling is mutual bro

All of them came close and hug each other

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Awesome storyline 👏
Plz continue
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It's a very different concept 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I will as soon as possible, thank u guys for liking the story so far
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Originally posted by: Niti4eva

I will as soon as possible, thank u guys for liking the story so far

U r good writer so don't worry nd plz post nxt part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 2

Scene shifts to Nandini house. She is getting ready to leave for the hospital. She had a huge smile on your face.

Nandini: Today seem so beautiful, everyday is beautiful but the feeling I am having today is special. I don't know why? I am extremely happy today. When I meet my patients they may my day special, maybe I am just anticipating that only.

Nandini left in her car, after a while she reach the hospital, while entering her cabin she bump into Mukti.

Nandini:hi Mukti, how are u?

Mukti: Hello Nandini, I am great, and you?

Nandini: I am doing wonderful today, and from what I am seeing of you right now you seem to be more than happy.

Mukti: Yes Nandini, I am so happy today, but it will become more special if you agree to do a favour for me.

Nandini: Go ahead Mukti, tell me, I am always ready to help you

Mukti: Nandini you remember the center I told you that we are working on, it will finally be open in a week time and I asking if you will be willing to grace our opening event. I think that everyone will love you, especially the kids. I think it will become even more special if you come.

Nandini: Mukti, first of all congratulation, I am so happy for u and your friends. I personally want to meet them in person to thank them for the great job they are doing to make a difference in people's lives. I am taking the opportunity to thank you right now and I must say job well done. I am proud to even know you. I am than greatful that you invited me. I will definitely come. I am so excited already, can't wait to meet everyone especially the kids.

Mukti: thank you Nandini, same goes to u, that Why I thought you would be the perfect choice, but this whole idea was Manik one. He suggested that we get someone special for the opening ceremony.

Nandini: then I definitely have to meet Manik and thank him for considering the idea. I am more than bless.

Mukti: aww Nandini, you are too sweet, tommorrow we are adding last minute decorations to the kids section, you are more than welcome to come and also throw in some ideas, it will be appreciated.

Nandini: I will surely come. I will text you tonight to know further details.

Mukti: ok, thanks once again.

Both said goodbye and departed to their individual cabins.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys, am sorry for the delay, am in the process of uploading, thanks everyone who liked my work so far . THANK YOU .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great going, pls update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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chapter 3

Night- Nandini was in her room, she decided to text Mukti to know the address for tommorrow. She had a day off so she decided to go. Mukti text her the address and told Nandini thank you.

Nandini decided to sleep after that becuz she had to wake up early.

It was 7:00 am, the sun had already been risen, shinning through the curtains of Nandini room, hitting directly on her face, the birds was chirping, Nandini love the sounds that the birds make, it is like they are trying to communicate with the world letting them know that it is a new day, a new beginning. It also sound like sweet melody to the ears. In the next few minutes Nandini wake up with a smile on her face. She greeted herself good morning and thank her aiyyapaa for the new day. She then hurried off to the washroom. She open the shower tap to take a bath

Nandini: aiyyapaa:,it is freezing (she quickly adjusted the water to normal) after 15 minutes she return to her bedroom

Nandini was contemplating wat to wear, she then took out a black pencil jeans, with a red t-shirt top and a fine neck piece and a stud earring. She got ready and add flats to complete her outfit.

She left in her car to meet Mukti at the entrance of the center. Upon arrivial Nandini was admiring the center. It was so beautiful on the outside, she wonder what it will look like in the inside. She couldn't wait to see more of it. She step down from her car to be greeted by Mukti

Mukti: good morning Nandini, so glad u came.

Nandini: good morning, Mukti, the pleasure is all mine, I am so excited (Nandini excitement was radiating from her face, it was clearly visible, she was like a happy child)

Mukti: come let me introduce you to my friends

As soon as Nandini enters the center her eyes were scanning the place, it was so beautiful, she was proud of Mukti and her friends. She had to meet them, then she remembered that's is why Mukti brought her in for, she quickly shift her focus to Mukti friends.

Mukti: meet Cabir, your carbon copy. You guys are exactly the same.

Nandini: hi Cabir, my twin nice to meet you( Cabir respond: nice to meet you too, I am glad that I will have someone to match up to my energy) they high- five each other.

Mukti: Meet Aliya and Dhruv, they are a couple.

Nandini: hi guys, nice to meet both of you, you guys look wonderful together ( Aliya and Dhruv respond: it is wonderful to meet you Nandini, and Aliya said to Nandini that she is very beautiful . Nandini respond by saying a thank you.

Mukti: and finally meet Manik, the soul of fab 5 and this center. Without his contribution to
this center it would have been impossible to build. (Manik was getting shy, he told Mukti it is all their hard work together and not his only).

Nandini: hi Manik, it is my at most pleasure to finally meet you. Thank you and and also your friends for considering me for your big day. You guys make me feel like I am equally involve, thank you for letting me in and allowing me to contribute. I am so humble. Thank you guys for the great work you are doing, it is indeed something wonderful ( she extended her hand to shake his)

Manik: thanks Nandini for the kind words, and we are more than glad to have you here. ( he reciprocate by shaking her hand)

Manik POV

I like her very much, I don't know why. Her personality is so vibrant. So fast she seem comfortable with everyone. She is totally opposite of me, but her energy is infectious, her smile is so beautiful. Manik was thinking to himself as to why he was thinking so much about her already, he then decided not to think too much.

Mukti: ok guys, lets get to work
Nandini:yes, most certainly

They all departed to a table and began discussing their final plans.

End of chapter



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