Manan- Zindagi Khoobsurat Hai-:Updated Chaper 6 Part B Page 6 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved manik's pov!
Update soon :) story is going great !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A little insight into the story

Fab 5 along with Nandini made a few changes to the kids section. They add vibrant colors to the kids corner(which signifies happiness ). They also allowed the children to make painting on their room walls. All the children had a equal say in which princess/superhero bed sheets or pillow pattern they want in their room.

Manik thoughts of Nandini since they have been working together on the center

Manik was thinking of Nandini constantly throughout the week. He said to himself that there is something about her that have cause a great effect on him. He just can't get her off his mind, and he is unable to understand what is happening to him. He said to himself that maybe it is her positive vibe that is rubbing off on him. He also felt an instant connection when they shaked hand for the very first time. He also noticed her beautiful hair, luscious lip, and not forgetting her smile, it is just killer. It is the first time he is being pull towards a girl so deeply, or we can say the only girl he is attracted to so immensely.

Nandini POV when she first meet Manik

To herself: oh my god, he is so handsome, or I would rather say gorgeous. She was literally shaking from within like a tree branch during a windy weather, but she tried to brace yourself so that no one would notice the effect he is having on her. When she extended her hand to shake his hand she felt the shiver again, she felt a connection . They even shared an eye lock, but then shifts her focus to thank him and his friends. She was already sensing that trouble is approaching, this guy has already made a huge impact on her.

Note: will upload chapter 4 soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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[FONT=Times]chapter 4

It was the day of the opening for the center- ZINDAGI KHOOBSURAT HAI

Unlike every day, today was special for fab5, they were extremely happy & proud of their achievements. Who wouldn't be proud, at such a young age they were able to build and finally open a center for orphan kids and the elderly with their own hard earn money. Their dream was completely about to become a reality within few hours.

Manik was sleeping when the sunlight hit his face, he quickly turn to hide his face but then realize what day is today. It was time to wake up and show the world that dreams do come true. A smile took over his face. He was delighted thinking of how far him and his friends has come. They became friends because of their similar dream and passion for life. Fab5 was now his world, because whenever one of them was giving up on their dreams, another one of them was there to give hope and encouragement. They kept the fire burning in each other, they never let it gets out.
He then gets up and take a shower. He wear a blue jeans with white t- shirt and a red blazer. Red is his favorite color. He recall the first day when he met Nandini for the first time, she was wearing red, she looked so dam beautiful even in simple jeans and t- shirt that day. After finish getting ready, he hurry off to meet his friends at the center.

Nandini home

Nandini was not arriving at a conclusion as to what she should wear today. She usually gets ready pretty fast but today she was finding it difficult. After a couple changes she settles for a white anarkali dress with a pink shawl, she also added jhumkha to her outfit and left her hair open. She was looking like an angel and why not, she was the epitome of beauty. She was happy, her face had a radiant smile. She was honor to be apart of fab5 success.
After a few minutes of getting dress, she left her home to meet up with fab5 at the center. While driving she remembered about Manik and told herself that she needs to control whenever she is around him. She usually gets nervous and blabber in front of him. She doesn't want him to think that she is crazy.

When Nandini arrived fab5 was already there. The first person her eyes met was Manik. He was looking handsome that she even told him so, but to make him and everyone else comfortable she told everyone they were looking good, but to herself she knew Manik was looking extra special. Nandini usually speak her mind out when she feels something but choose to be careful around Manik because she doesn't want to him uncomfortable, she could sense that he was the silent type. Mukti then hug Nandini and told her that she herself is looking beautiful. Manik in his mind said, she is not just looking beautiful, but she is looking out of this world, she is looking like an angel, her hair is so beautiful. He just admires them,but we know Manik wouldn't dare say that to her. They quickly form a circle hugging each other, letting out their nervousness energy and trying to feel each other happiness. Today was the day of celebration.

They then decide to separate and see what needs to be done before the opening ceremony. Nandini was putting the welcome garland on the front door when she suddenly felt that her stool is shaking, she was about to adjust herself when she slip. She is about to hit ground bottom when she felt a pair of strong arms under her. She had her eyes shut, upon opening it she saw it was Manik who is holding her. They share an intense eye lock for about a minute when Mukti came, she was searching for Nandini. Manik then carefully place Nandini on the ground to stand. Mukti ask what is going on, Nandini quickly narrates the story without taking breaths, it was like she is trying to cover up her true feelings. Mukti tap Manik on the shoulder and said to him well done Hero, Nandini ki hero. Manik start blushing and leave from there to avoid further embarrassment.

End of chapter: will continue soon - let me know if u liked it, please be honest about what you feel. It will be appreciated THANK YOU
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very very nice
please cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Haha so cute :) continue soon !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
read all chapters in a go...beautiful story...!!!
matured manan and loved the way u penned each characters and dialogues...!!!
continue soon
take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Read all the chapter in one go nice story continue fast and also pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Very nice.. Could you please add index or change the title when you update?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Chapter 5

After making last minute preparations for the opening ceremony, Fab5 along with Nandini gather in the hall to officially welcome the kids and the elders to their center. There were a total of 80 kids and 50 elders. Fab5 later hope to extend their center so that they accommodate more people.

Manik, Mukti & Aliya, Cabir and Dhruv parents also came to congratulate them and share in their happiness . They were all proud parents. Nandini also invited her friend Navya to come.

Finally it was time to cut the ribbon, Fab5 gather to cut the Ribbon holding the scissor together when Mukti call Nandini to join them. First Nandini was refusing to come but fab5 convinced her saying to her that although she has not been from the start of their journey but she help them to complete it and they need her to be there too. Shen then agree to join them. There were loud cheers and claps when the ribbon was finally cutted. Everyone was busy congratulating them and told them that they were doing an outstanding job.
Fab5 happiness knew no bound, they were overjoyed, that they all had tears in the eyes.
Fab5 then welcome the kids and the elders to make their official entry in their new home.
All of them enter and settle in their individual seats. Manik stand up to make a speech

Manik: First I will like to welcome you all to your new home, from today this is your home and this is your family. We are all a big family now, u guys are more than free to share with us what you feel and you're needs will be provided to u from now onwards. You can share your happiness and sadness with us. We are here to help you in every stage of your life. I am so happy today, as you know I don't like to express my emotions openly but today nothing is going to stop me. I am so proud of my friends and myself, finally we made it. This has been our dream for a very long time and seeing it coming to reality right in front of my eyes makes me immensely grateful for everyone who helped in contributing to our dream(Manik had tears in his eyes) I am thankful for my parents for their teaching, they always taught me that money should not be wasted but should be spend in good and fruitful things. Thank you mom and dad( his parents responded by saying we are proud of u son). I also vividly remembered the day when I met Mukti,Aliya, Cabir and Dhruv for the first time at a charity function, that day I saw in each one of their eyes the same fire that was burning in me in them also, they were equally passionate and willing to come together to work in building this center. Their were never an ego clash between us because we knew our dream was more important, we all have different personalities but we only used it to our advantage, adding variation and different ideas on how to fulfill our dream. Thank you guys so much for being there with me in each and every step. I love you guys so much and without your unconditional love, support and contributions this would have been impossible. I also want to thank another person, I want to thank Nandini for joining us and giving us your precious time to helping us by giving us ideas in how to make this center more beautiful. Thank you for giving the kids a free checkup on their health. Coming to you now (referring to the kids and elders) a big thank you for trusting, believing and letting us help you guys out. Thank u all once again.

All the kids ran hugging him and his friends telling them thank you for building a home for them. Some of them also kiss their cheeks to show their appreciation. They elders all stand and clapped for fab5 and thank them also for giving them a home when no one was there to help them.

Fab4 join Manik to thank him also, you deserve the biggest thank u, you were always the backbone of this project. Thank you for letting us share your dream because although we all have a passion to help people it was your idea to build this center. We also love u and thank you for making us a part of your life. All of them hug each other

Nandini: I want to thank you guys once again for letting me help out and be apart of your success and celebrations. I am grateful for this opportunity and may all your dreams and aspirations come true. I have known you guys for a short time but you made me feel welcome and apart of your family. I also have grown to love you guys and I hope u guys let me remain apart of your family always.

Cabir said to Nandini: yes Nandini we are never letting go of you , we all love you too.
All of them form a circle and hug each other again


Will continue soon: I know it is too much thank you, but I wanted to portray how they were feeling. Next part will be a success party between fab5 and Nandini & Navya for their center.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful concept..read all the chapters love the story..please continue soon :)

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