hey Revs, first of all thank you so much for introducing me to this magical couple called MaNan, I would always be great full to you making me hooked to KY2.
Coming to your FF, I have to say this, I have read your previous works, and I have always known what a gifted writer your are, but this FF is certainly the best piece of writing I have read by you till date.
You have written MaNan in such a beautiful manner, that every scene you have written between them brings both tears and smile on my face. You have depicted their love and th essence of their relationship so beautifully, that I can imagine each scene as if I am watching it on television.
In AU it is very difficult to maintain the essence and intensity of every character, but yet you have done justice to not only MaNan but all the other characters as well. As much as I loved the scenes between MaNan, I also loved CabIni scenes you wrote, especially the bit where Cabir makes Nandini realize how wrong she was to leave Manik the way she did. It was written so realistically.
Another favorite scene is the first meeting Virat and Manik !! Loved how he mimicked Nandini buy demanding an apology. I absolutely adored him from the first scene itself because he is a perforct combination of both Nandini and Manik, because of his brought up by Nandini and because of his vulnerabilities that he shares with Manik. If he thinks like Nandini, his yearning for dad makes him crave for a father figure. His talk with Manik and how he asks him if he can call Manik is another favorite scene of mine from the FF.
If MaNan and Virat were not the highlight of the FF already, you further made this FF so special but giving us CavYa and their daughter Aisha. I can imagine Cabir as dad and CavYa as parents very easily.
Along with Cavya, you also give us ManBir, which I can never have enough off. The way he tortures Manik and make him listen to reason, had me sniling and tearing up both.
Thank you once again for giving us such a beautiful story, I can't wait to read more, so please update soon !!!
Shiv Shakti
