MaNan SS : The Incomplete Song (Part 10 - Pg 62 - 13th April) - Page 16

Originally posted by: Sanskruti16499

Lovely update

thanks for pm

ur a great writer

thanks for such a long part

always give us such long part

dear update na how much long we wait

Originally posted by: melliflous

Wow revathi
This part is brilliant! Loved ManBir!!! I liked how virat is connected to nandini n who better than nandini would understand virat since she too had to go through this in her childhood. Looking forward for the dinner update...

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Love this proprietress... looking forward d to their proper conversation and the secrets to be revealed soon...

Originally posted by: jesse93

Wow very nice update dear,
loved it a lot.
So mission MaNan is on its way,
thanks Kabir my cupid baby.
Hope iss baar usse apni efforts ke results jaldi mile .

Originally posted by: Cooki

the story is going very well..u should write it on daily basis...i hope next part will come soon..& plzzz do pm...plzz..

Originally posted by: ArSha_ManNan

Wow...awesome part... sachi mei yeh hi socha tha ki virat ki ManNan 's kid bt koi na cabir is bck on his mission... eager to read further. .. update soon

Originally posted by: seraphicsimi

I'm rlly glad dt u have not made Virat ..manan's son...nd in ur future updates plz maintain this fact...nd plz update asap 👏

Awesome..read all the three chapters..love the story..manan and their emotional turmoil on being separated and meeting again after long is penned beautifully..love the kiddo virat..and cabira wish his plans succeed in bringing manan closer..waiting for them to meet..please continue soon and pm me if possible:)