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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice story
plz continue
post nxt part soon
PM me plz
plz reveal villain I think Harshad or Aliya will be a villain

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so guys here we present to you the 5th chapter of HUMESHA in our lives!!! so gear up and get ready to know about the villian of our story which is none other than...
Chapter-5
Fab5 had a good jamming session when they decided to call it a day and headed towards their respective homes. Navya and Cabir both were thinking of how to talk to Nandini and Manik about their relationship. Navya was getting restless as she wanted to clear things between her and her bestie but didn't know how so she decided to talk to Cabir about it.
Cabir- ji madhubalaji ! boliye kya khidmat kar sakta hoon main aapki?
Navya- ab tumhe kya ho gya?
Cabir smirkingly- mujhe kya hona hai. I am perfectly fine. tum bolo call kyun kiya?
Navya irritatingly- uff. khair maine tumhe call isliye kiya kyunki hum bohot tension mein hain aur tumhe humari madad karni padegi.
Cabir- wow. aaj tumhe meri help ki zarurat kaise pad gayi? tumhari tabiyat toh theek hai na!
Navya- bas karo Cabir aur meri madad karo.
Cabir- achha theek hai Navya, bolo kya kaam hai?
Navya- wow tumhe mera asli naam bhi pata hai!
Cabir- ab aage bologi black and white Madhubala.
Navya makes a disgusting face and then continues.
Navya- Cabir hum baar baar Nandini ke baare mein soch rhe hai. hum ussey baat karne chahte hai par samajh nhi aa rha ki baat kaise shuru karein. baar baar Manik aur Nandini ka scene meri aankhon ke saamne aa rha hai. aur phir jo tumne kaha kya pata Manik sach mein do ladkiyon ki feelings ke saath khel rha ho?
Cabir- wow madhubala! tum kai baar kafi achhi baatein karti ho. vaise on a serious note mujhe ab realise ho rha hai ki Manik aisa nhi kar sakta kyunki jab vo kisise pyaar karta hai na to he makes sure ki uss insaan ko koi problem na ho aur uski bohot achhe se care karta hai. vaise bhi Manik aur Alya kuchh dino se normal bf-gf ki tarah behave nhi kar rhe jaise vo humesha karte hai. aur maine Manik mein Nandini ke liye soft corner feel kiya hai. kal raat ko party mein tum bhi thi na vahan. deka tha na kaise dance kar rhe the dono.
Navya- haan Cabir maine dekha tha tabhi toh yeh khyaal baar baar mere dimaag mein aa rha hai. mujhe lagta hai ki yeh dono ek dusre se pyaar karte hai aur khud toh kisiko batayenge nhi toh hume hi inki madad karni padegi.
Cabir- kya? iska matlab tumhe inke relationship se koi problem nhi hai?
Navya- Nahi. kyun tumhe hai kya?
Cabir- nahi. main toh khush hoon ki Manik ko finally vo pyaar mil gaya jo vo humesha se chahta tha. mujhe toh laga ki tumhe problem hogi isliye tum tension mein ho.
Navya- aree nahi budhhu! balki hum bhi bohot khush hain kyunki Nandini bhi bina maa-baap ke pyaar ke badi hui hai. aur ab voh khalipan ko bharne ke liye Manik hai na uske paas. pata hai Cabir, Nandini humesha apne aap ko brave aur strong dikhane ki koshish karti hai taaki jo log uske aas paas hain voh low feel na karein par mujhe pata hai akele reh kar voh tut jaati hai.
cair- haan Navya! itna toh main Nandini ko jaan hi gya hoon aur Manik bhi aisa hi hai. apne friends ko khush rakhne ke liye vo khud ko khush dikhata hai jo vo actually nhi hai. vaise Navya hum Manik aur Nandini ke best friends hai aur agar inn dono mein itna kuchh common hai toh humare beech bhi kuchh common ho sakta hai.
Navya blushes listening to all this.
Navya- aur tumhe aise kyun lagta hai ki humare beech kuchh hoga?
Cabir- KUCHH HOGA! main toh bas common cheezon ke baare mein baat kar rha tha. tum toh kafi fast nikli.
Navya realised what he just said and started blushing so to divert the topic she said
Navya- achha Cabir to batao na ki hum inke liye kya karna chahiye?
Cabir coming back to the reality then spoke- haan toh ek kaam karte hain abhi milte hain.
Navya- abhi!! par kyun?
Cabir- dekho tum Nandini ko lekar college ke paas wali coffee shop mein milo. main Manik ko bhi le aayunga aur phir baat kar lenge.
Navya- good idea Cabir! theek hai phir 1 ghante mein milte hai byee!
Cabir- byee!!
and they both hang up and smiled at each other.

meanwhile, Dhruv was sitting in his bedroom and looking at Nandini's photos in his mobile and smiling. Sudddenly he came across a group photo of the Musicana opening night when they all were performing and when he saw Manik and Nandini together, his blood started to boil. The pictures of Musicana opening night started to flash in front of his eyes when he saw the duo kissing, hugging, their intimate moments and all their talks which were witnessed by him.
Dhruv- how dare you Nandini? I could never expect you to be like this. tum meri aur mere buddy ki feelings ke saath khel rahi ho. ek taraf tumne mujhe wrong signals diye aur phir jab dekha ki Manik toh mujhse bhi better hai toh tum uske paas chali gayi. what a mastermind plan Nandini. kitna quietly tumne apna game khel liya aur kisine tum par shak bhi nhi kiya. bechare mere buddy ko bhi phasa liya. tumhari vajah se Manik aur Alya bhi alag ho gaye. par ab aur nhi, tumhari vajah se Manik aur Alya ke beech diffrences aagye aur ab main tumhare aur Manik ke beech diffrences le aayung taaki Manik tumhari asliyat jaan sake. sorry buddy. but tujhe yeh sehna padega. I promise main sab kuchh theek kar dunga. I promise.
saying all this he gave an evil victorious smile and laid down on his bed.

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Navya called Nandini
Navya- hey Nandini! kya tum free ho?
Nandini- haan-haan Navya. I am free kyun kuchh kaam tha?
Navya- main soch rhi thi ki kahin ghumne chale?
Nandini- par kahan?
Navya- chalo na shopping ke liye chlate hain. aur mujhe college ke paas wali coffee shop se coffe bhi peeni hai. vahan bohot achhi coffee milti hai. plzzz...
Nandini- ok Navya. hum chalte hain.
Navya- yaaay. hum kamyaab ho gaye,
Nandin- kamyaab ho gaye? par kis cheez main?
Navya then realised and diverted the topic.
Navya aree kuchh nhi. tum taiyaar ho jao main adhe ghante mein tumhare ghar aati hoon. ok. bye!
Nandini- bye!
Nandini hanged up and then tried calling Manik but he was on other line so she gave up and went to get ready.

All this while Manik and Cabir were too on the phone.
Manik- haan Cabir bol.
Cabir- yaar kahin bahar jaane ka mann kar rha tha.
Manik- haan toh tu ghar aa ja aur baaki sab ko bhi bol de then we all can go out probably a disc.
Cabir- aree nahi! baaki sab ko bulaane ki kya zarurat hai?
Manik- matlab?
Cabir- aree main keh raha tha ki hum dono hi chalte hai na. baaki sab ko disturb karne ki kya zarurat hai?
Manik was a little confused on hearing this.
Manik- okk! theek hai hum hi chalte hai par jaana kahan hai?
Cabir- college ke paas wali coffee shop mein chalte hai. mujhe vahan ki coffe peeni hai.
Manik- Cabir tu thoda weird behave kar rha hai. daaru chod kar coffe? kya baat hai?
Cabir- aise hi Manik, kabhi kabhi doston ke liye kurbaani deni padti hai.
Manik- matlab kya hai Cabir seedha seedha bol na.
Cabir- uff mere tubelight buddy. agar hum akele disc chale gaye toh baaki sab ka reaction main handle nhi kar paaunga aur Mukti ka toh bilkul bhi nhi. so coffe shop hyi chalt hain. humari outing bhi ho jaayegi aur sab smooth bhi rhega.
Manik- aaj tu seriously bohot weird baatein kar rha hai. khair. I agree with you.
Cabir- so adhe ghante mein mujhe pick kar ok bye!
Manik- coll. bye!
he also hanged up and tried calling Nandini but she wasn't picking up so he gave up trying.

meanwhile Nandini got ready and Navya also came. they both left for shopping after informing chachi about it.
Manik also picked up Cabir and went to the coffee shop.
when Cabir and Manik were in the car, Cabir received a message from Navya--" hum coffee shop pahaunch gaye hai. tum bhi jaldi aao."
Cabir replied--" on our way will be there in 5 mins. hang on."
he smiled a little whiich didn't go unnoticed by Manik.
Manik- tu theek toh hai na? tu thoda weird behave karrha hai.
Cabir- aree kuchh nhi Manik. tu jaldi drive kar na.
Manik then gave up and tried concentrating on driving but he was feeling restless cause he hadn't seen his star's face neither had he heard her voice since a long time now. he so wanted to meet her right now. but he was stuck.

they reached the coffee shop.
Navya saw them coming so she went away to order coffee for everyone leaving Nandini alone. Cabir excused himself and indicated Manik to go and sit beisde the girl in the centre cause that was the only table free in the whole shop. he went away to meet Navya leaving the couple alone.
Manik went up to the girl and asked politely.
Manik- excuse me, can I sit here.
Nandii looked up recognising the voice and was shocked to see Manik here. Manik was shocked too.
Nandini- Manik tum yahan kya kar rhe ho?
she said this looking here and there searching for Navya so that she doesn't see them together.
Manik was shocked but happy too.
Manik- hey baby! main toh Cabir ke saath aaya tha par tum yahan kaise?
Nandini- Main bhi Navya ke saath aayi thi.
Manik- chalo its good atleast we were able to meet each other. I was getting so restless to hear you voice or to see you.
Nandini- achha itna miss kar rhe the mujhe sweetheart?
Manik- obviously. kyun tum nhi kar rhi thi?
Nandini smirkingly- nahi. bilkul mahi. main kyun miss karungi?
Manik made a frown face and turned to the other side.
Nandini smiled and then spoke- achha sorry baby. I was missing you too and they shared a cute eyelock.
suddenly Navya and Cabir came there breaking their trance.
Cabir smirkingly- suna Navya, baby! sweetheart! miss you!.bada lovey dovey scene chal rha hai yahan toh.
Nandini and Manik got shocked seeing them and now they knew they were caught so there was no other option left.
Cabir started scolding Manik- Manik tu aisa soch bhi kaise sakta hai. Nandini aur tu, are you seriously kidding me?
then Navya too scolded Nandini- tum iss monster se pyaar kaise kar sakti ho Nandini? iske paas toh dil hai hi nhi.
Manik and Nandini both glanced at each other and lowered their head in embarrasement. Navya and Cabir were enjoying the scene to the fullest. they again continued with their scoldings while Manik and Nandini kept listening to them with a heavy heart.
Cabir- Manik tujhe pata hai na agar sab ko pata chalgaya toh kya hoga? aur baaki ka to chod atleast mujhe troh bata deta.
Manik- I understand Cabir. par jo tum reaction de rhe ho na hum usi reaction se darr gaye the. hume pata tha tum hume kabhi accept nhi kar paoge isliye we decided ki jab tak sab kuchh theek nhi ho jata tab tak hum chup rhaenge.
Nandini- yess Cabir and Navya Manik is right. jab tak saari problems dissolve nhi ho jaati hum sabko humare baare mein nhi bata payenge. koi hume accept hi nhi karega. tumne bhi nhi kiya. we already knew that this was coming par itni jaldi aa jayega yeh nhi pata tha.
her eyes welled up by now.
Navya- par tumhe kisne kaha ki humne tumhe accept nhi kiya?
Manik and Nandini were shocked to listen this.
Nandini- Matlab?
Cabir- kya kiya Navya saara plan kharab kar diya. itna maza aa rha tha inke expressions ko dekhy kar. khair sinceyou have spilled the beans toh main bata deta hoon.
My dear Nandini and Manik hume tumhare baare mein pata chal gaya tha aur hum bas maza kar rhe the.
Navya- aur haan Nandu ab rona band karo. we both are really happy for both of you.
saying this Navya hugged Nandini. both wre smiling.
seeing this even Cabir and Manik smiled and hugged each other.
breaking the hug Maink spoke- thanks guys. thanks alot for understanding.
Navya- koi baat nhi Manik akhir friends hote kisliye hai?oppps...friends?
saying this she forwarded her hand to Manik for a shakehand and Manik smiled to this gesture.
Manik- friends!
seeing this Cabir did the same- friends?
Nandini- no not at all.
everyone was shocked.
Nandini then smiled and continued- cabir you are not just a friend but like an elder brother to me so I wanna ask...siblings?
Cabir was touched by Nandini's words nd hugged her.
everyone smiled and then all sat down to drink coffee.
they had a long chat session with alot of teasings, leg pullings and cute eyelocks. 4 of them became really good friends even Navya and Manik too. they decided that this coffee shop will be their signature meeting place and will often come here to have coffe and chit-chat.

so guys finally I end the 5thchapter. plzzz... tell us about your opinions we really need them. so finally got to know that those hatred filled eyes were of Dhruv.get ready for more friendships, romance and drama...
lots of love
MaNaN_trS
Radha andTvisha










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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Fabulous
cavya nd manan scene was so nice nd lovely
I hope that u doesn't make manan separate
ya dhruv ko bhi jaldi realise hojaye
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
wow awsm update
loved it
so its dhruv
hmm very interesting
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
damn awesome!!
loved manan and cavya and their bond!!
dhruv as a villain!! hmmm...nice!!
continue soon!!
Edited by ananya0908n - 10 years ago
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#26
Nice update.
Liked bonding btw the 4 .
But don't seperate manan let them face problems together .
Continue soon
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wow...awsm update i jus loved it...continue soon...try to update regularly
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Hey guys!! Thank you so so so much for replying and liking our posts, but plz guys we would appreciate more like and comments. We would be updating the 6 chap soon'. Thank u again
Loots of love
MaNan_trS
Radha and Tvisha
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys!! So here we are with the 6 chap of HUMESHA in our lives!! So here it is one more chapter full of love, drama, and friendship.. Enjoy!!
Chapter-6
The new four friends discover each other's life even more, and also CaVya teases MaNan. There are also a lot of eye locks between MaNan and CaVya. Manan notice that there is something between Cavya but they decide not to exagerate this at the moment. They even decide that from now onwards this cafe is gonna be the hangout place for the four. It's late evening now and chachi calls nandini.
Nandini- guys it's chachi calling. I guess she must be worried. We should depart I guess.
Navya- Haan.. Hume bhi hostel time se pohonch Na hoga.. Chalo chalte hein.
Manik is dropping everyone home. After a bit teasing session in the car, manik first drops cabir at his house and Navya at her hostel. When finally MaNan are alone in the car. Nandini breaks the silence and says.
Nandini- manik, I still can't digest the fact that my BFF Navya and ur bff cabir has finally accepted us together and that to so happily. I mean I never expected so smooth a response.
Manik- Seriosly.. But m so sorry baby, abhi bhi u will have to suffer fab 3 because of me.. U know naa I can't tell it them.. Unke reactions pata nhi..
Nandini cuts him in between and says
Nandini- Manik.. As I said earlier also.. U don't need to explain me.. I understand it.. It's not worth ki Meri Wajah se tumhare friends tumhare saath naa ho.. I know how much they mean to u.. So it's ok u don't need to be sorry for anything.
Manik smiles that his star understands him so much and he continues driving. Finally they reach Nandini's home. Like a gentleman, Manik opens the door for his star.
Nandini(after getting out of the car)- bye Manik.. Meet u in the college tomorrow.
And she moves towards the door when Manik called her from behind..
Manik- arre.. Tum aise kaise jaa sakti ho?!?
Nandini goes towards him with a questioning look n asks..
Nandini- aise kaise matlab?
Manik grabs her waist and pulls her closer and smirkingly says..
Manik- matlab..tumhe nhi ladta ki tum kuchh bhool rhi ho?!! My GOODNIGHT KISS
Saying this he starts brushing his fingers on her arms and then nuzzles his nose on her earlobe and neck.
Nandini(blushing)- Manik stop it.. Koi dekh le gaa.. And what is this good night kiss? M not gonna give u any..
Manik(facing towards her)- as if I care ki koi dekh le gaa.. I want my kiss Nandini.. It has been three long days... M not gonna leave you until I have it.
Saying this he tightens his grab over her waist.
Nandini thinks of an idea and then she lovingly puts both her arms around his neck and pulls him closer. He also becomes excited seeing Nandini agreeing to him and he moves closer. They both come very very close. Their lips are just about to meet when our shy Nandini quickly pecks him on his cheeks and runs away. She reaches the door and smiles brightly and wished good night to Manik and goes inside the house. Manik holds his cheek to realise what has just happened.
Manik is standing outside her house only when she reaches her room. She sees him through the window and they both smile. Nandini gives Manik a flying kiss and then waves him bye and goes inside her room. Manik also goes back to his house. They both sleep thinking about the changes in their lives that happened that day.

Next day in the college, Manik and Nandini, by chance, reach college at the same time. They are entering together only when they meet CaVya at the entrance.
Cabir- so.. Here is our couple. Guys agar Tum log roz hi aise saath aaoge naa, to definitely ek din koi tumhe dekh lega.
Nandini- no no cabir, him ek saath nhi aaye.. Woh toh we just met on the gate.
Navya- oh.. Vaise Hume pooch na toh nhi chahiye.. Lekin Hume drop karne ke baad Tum log Akele the naa.. Toh Nandini Manik ne tumhe kuch pareshaan toh nhi kiya na?
MaNan blush while cabir smirkingly says..
Cabir- Ohh.. Toh u both were alone.. That too in a car.. Toh toh tumhe kissi ne bhi disturb nhi kiya hoga naa.. Araam se sab kuch ho gya hoga.. Right Manik?
Manik- cabir will u just shut up.
He reaches to hit cabir when Nandini says.
Nandini- guys yeh sab baad mein.. Hum log late ho rhe hai.
Manik, listening to her, leaves cabir. Cabir then sighs and thanks Nandini.
The 4 friends then proceed towards the canteen. When they are about to enter the canteen canteen, Manik says..
Manik- arre guys ruko.. We can't go inside together.. Andar baaki sab hai.. If we go like this we will have to face a lot of questions jinke humare paas answers nhi honge.
Cabir- arre wah Manik.. Tu toh itna smart nikla.. Mujhe laga aise smart ideas toh sirf mujhe hi aate hai.
Manik- cabir tu kabhi nhi sudhrega naa..
And then hits him playfully.
They then decide that NavNi will go first and then ManBir.
ManBir go and sit with fab3 and NavNi sit opposite to them. Again, MaNan and CaVya are able to see each other.

ManBir greet fab3. When manik says Hi to dhruv, he gives him a faint smile, which is not very normal behavior of his.
Fab5 is then chit chatting and when mukti says..
Mukti- guys Aaj kal woh jerk, harshad kahi nazar nhi aa rha.
Alya shooks her face when cabir said
Cabir- arre uske band members yahin toh hai usne hi pooch lete hai.
He then looks at navya and says
Cabir- arre navya woh harshad Kaha hai?
Navya- Hume nhi pata.. Musicana ke baad toh woh dikhe hi nhi.
Mukti- alya u should know where he is.
Alya- mujhe bas itna pata hai ki musicana ke baad woh kahi out of town chale gye hai. That's it.
Mukti- that loser must be feeling so ashamed of himself.. Vaise cabir.. Tu aaj iss madhubala se inte araam se kaise baat kar rha hai? tu thik hai naa?!?
After NavNi and ManBir are good friends, cabir don't feel like irritating navya. But still he says.
Cabir- chod na Mukti.. Kya tu inpe apna time waste karti hai.. Tu yeh sandwich khaa..
He then offers her the plate of sandwich.

All this while MaNan were having an intense eyelock. It was like they were talking by the language of eyes. All this doesn't go unnoticed by dhruv. He is seeing manik and then after a second nandini, and then again manik. All this continues. Then suddenly manik gives a flying kiss to nandini and she catches it and they both smile. Nandini messages him to meet at the staircase.
This was now enough for dhruv to handle. He stomps the table and then angrily leaves from their. Fab4 and NavNi, everyone is shocked by his this behavior.
Alya- guys I will handle him.
Manik- no no alya.. Plz let me talk to him.
Manik goes after him and sees him hitting the window in anger.
Manik- buddy chill.. Aisa kya hua joh tu bina bole itne gusse se chala Gaya.
Dhruv- plz Manik.. Mujhe tujhse koi bhi baat nhi karni hai..
Manik- but Buddy tu mujhe toh bata hi sakta hai naa.. Kya kisi ne tujhse kuch Kaha hai Kya.. Has someone hurt you.. Plz at least share it with me.
Dhruv- Maine bola naa Manik.. I don't wanna talk to u..
Manik hold his shoulder and says..
Manik- meri kisi baat ne tujhe hurt kiya hai Kya.. Plz bata naa yaar..
Dhruv angrily jerks off his hand and says..
Dhruv- Manik plz leave me alone. Mai har ek cheez apni life ki tujhe nhi bata sakta.. So leave me alone and just go.
Saying this he goes inside the washroom.
Manik is surprised as dhruv never ever talked to anybody like that. There were not any secrets between them. He was feeling broken. He then remembered that he has to go to nandini and that only she could fix him and make him smile again.

Manik reached the staircase and saw that nandini was already waiting for him there. He then went and hugged her tightly from there.
Nandini smiles recognizing the touch and says..
Nandini- finally tum aa gye.. Vaise tum itne stressed kyu ho?
Manik- tumhe kaise pata?
Nandini- I know you very well Manik.
She then turns to face him and cups his face and says..
Nandini- tell me Manik.. Kya hua?
Manik- woh naa nandini.. Pata nhi dhruv ko kya hua hai.. Humare beech kabhi bhi koi secrets nhi hai.. You know naa how my buddy is.. Usne kabhi itna rudely behave nhi kiya.. Mujhe iss baat ka dukh nhi hai ki usne rudely baat ki.. Iss baat ka dukh hai ki woh mujhe apni problems nhi share kar rha hai.
Nandini- it's ok Manik.. Maybe he just needs some space.. Understand plz.. And vaise bhi u know do friends mein ladai honi zaruri hoti hai.. Agar friendship sachi ho toh aur pakki ho jati hai.
Manik- Ohh my lady Einstein.. Itni achi theories tum Kaha se laati ho?!?
By saying this he goes near her and grabs her waist tightly.
Nandini- yeh meri nhi yeh navya ki theory hai. And plz leave me Manik.. Yeh college hai.. Koi dekh le gaa Hume. Plzz Manik..
Manik- do you really think ki joh tumne kal raat ko kiya.. After that m gonna leave u so easily?
Manik then starts caressing his arms and kissing her neck. All this time nandini knew that she wouldn't be able to stop him now and all she could do is moan his name.
He then started kissing her shoulders and then her earlobe. Then finally came up to his face and crashed on her lips. They had a very intense and long kiss.

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Alya had witnessed the scene between Manik and Dhruv. she thought of confronting him and found him in an empty classroom.
Alya- hi dhruv! Tum theek ho naa? I mean tum aise hi bina kuch bole chale gye.
Dhruv- plz alya Plz give me some time and space. I don't wanna talk to anybody.
Dhruv said all this so rudely that Alya was very hurt.. But still she decided to cheer him up.
Alya- dhruv.. Agar tum mujhe bataoge nhi toh Mai tumhari help kaise Karoongi nandini ko impress karne ke liye.
Listening nandini's name his blood began to boil again. He remembered all the MaNan scenes. He shouted at alya in anger
Dhruv- I said naa alya.. Just get out of here. I don't wanna talk about anything. Just leave me alone.
Alya got scared and started crying. seeing her cry Dhruv couldn't help himself and cupped her face.
Dhruv- sshh!! Alya plz stop crying. you know na I can't see you crying. plz chup ho jao.
Alya- agar aesa hai toh tum mujhe kuchh bata kyun nhi rhe ho? tell me i want to know.
Dhruv- ok Alya i'll tell you but i need some time. plz
Alya- promise me Dhruv!
Dhruv- i promise!
Alya smiled, kissed him on his cheek and went away. as soon as she left the room Dhruv untangled his fingers and spoke.
Dhruv- sorry Alya. i can't promise you. you should not know the truth. par abhi i have to work on Manik and Nandini.

Manik and nandini were busy in their kissing
But all this was again seen by dhruv and anger and hatred for MaNan grew more and more. As he couldn't take it more, dhruv decided to distract their kiss by calling Manik again and again.
Dhruv- Manik... Manik.. Manik..
Listening this MaNan broke their kiss.
Manik- sorry sweet heart.. I will have to go.. dhruv is calling me!
Nandini- it's ok Manik.. U go.. I will go.. Kahin woh dekh naa le.
Manik runs towards dhruv
Manik- finally dhruv!! u want to talk?
Dhruv- Haan Buddy. i'm sorry voh main stressed tha isliye gussa tujh par nikaal diya
Manik- its okk! vaise tu theek hai na buddy! can help you in any way?
Dhruv- yaa i'm ok!vaise main yeh kaafi time se soch rha tha to talk to you abt Nandini and Navya!
Manik was shocked he thoght that Dhruv might have got to know about them.
Manik stammered- k...kya...Na..vya..au..r Nan..dini?
Dhruv- haan! Kya tujhe nhi lagta ki nandini and navya ke humari lives mein aane se fab5 has changed. I mean pehle we used to chill, party, have fun. There were no secrets.. But ab we are so unaware of each other's life. Everything is changed now. Tere ko nhi lagta?
Manik realized that maybe coz of his relationship he could not give time to his friends. All he could do now was to hug dhruv tightly and say sorry. Seeing a guilty face of Manik, dhruv's smile instantly changed into a wicked one and he thought of his further evil plans.

So guys I end it here only. I hope u liked it. Plz plz plz do like and comment on our posts as m again saying that we need your replies and suggestions. this has been edited a little.
Lots of love
Radha and Tvisha.
Edited by MaNaN_trS - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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guys this is an IMPORTANT note.
from next week our School is reopening and the upcoming month is really hectic for both of us as there are tests and some functions too. so we'll be posting new chapters only once or twice a week. plz cooperate with us.
also we both are not very happy with the response cause we r putting so much of efforts in framing a good story but we aren't getting a very good response from all you guys. atleast not as good as we expected. plz let us know abt your opinion coz it really matters to us alot.
this situation might lead to the discontinuing of the story.
sorry i dont want to be rude to you guys but i'm just putting forward our point of view.
its not necessary that the comment has to be positive, it can be negative too but plz let your opinions reach us.
luv you load guys. thankyou for bearing us. hats off!
love
MaNaN_trS
Radha and Tvisha

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