MaNanFF:HUMESHA in our lives! Part7 on page 6

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Hello dear friends,
This MaNaN_trS account is being handled by 2 of us, my best friend and me. We are big fans of KY2 and spend alot of time watching or reading about it. Well let me introduce ourselves to all of you, I am Radha and my best friend is Tvisha. We are newbies here and both will be posting here. We both read alot of posts here and since the time we have made an account, we jst couldn't stop ourselves from writing a story of our own. We would love to gain your interest and support to our story so that we can continue further. Zyada ho gaya sorry but this intro was needed. Thakyou. So here you all go with the first chap of HUMESHA in our lives!!! The story continues from the Musicana opening night after their kiss 😛

CHAP-1
Manik was jut mesmerizing the beauty lying beside him, holding his hand and promising him that she will always shine for him, always keep him in her prayers and will always trust him. HUMESHA. They both were feeling on top of the world when suddenly breaking the silence Manik spoke.
Manik: thankyou Nandini!
Nandini: thankyou? for what?
Manik: for coming into my life and bringing this smile too. Tumhe pata hai your smile na...it takes all the worries away from me.
Nandini blushes listening to all this and then smiles wholeheartedly

Then Manik continues: exactly! This smile. It is killer and you've actually made me fall for this.
Manik then takes her hand in his and continues: You know jab bhi tumhari smile ko dekhta hoon na, it feels like being good and you make me realise that. You make me feel pure when i'm with you Nandini. You've actually changed me. YOU HAVE CONVERTED THE MONSTER IN ME INTO A HUMAN.

The moment he said this, the sky got filled with fireflies. It was a perfect combination in the sky just like the perfect couple. The STARS and the FIREFLIES like MANIK and NANDINI. The sky got filled with fluttering and glowing fireflies. Nandini was amazed and more than that she felt being loved. The realization struck her and she tightened her grip on Manik's hand. Manik felt this and turned to glance at her when he saw her cryiing silently. Manik panicked and asked her
Manik: Nandini, why are you crying baba?
Nandini: kuch nahi Manik. Voh bas aise hi.
Manik: tumhe seriously lagta hai main tumhare iss reason ko accept karunga. If you trust me then tell me what is it?
Manik said this all cupping her face.
Nandini: seriously Manik believe me kuch nhi hua.

She glanced at the glowing fireflies and then at Manik all smiling. Manik noticed this and then said
Manik: that's like my good girl. Tum aise hastey huye hi achhi lagti ho. Vaise tum fireflies ko dekhkar itna khush kyun h rahu thi?
Nandini: voh Manik...voh sab main tumhe kal bataungi
Manik: what? Kal kyun? abhi batado plzzz...
Nandini: no Manik. Have patience. Main pakka tumhe kal batadungi but for now, I have to go. Chachi must be waiting. Bye! She got up and picked her bag.
Manik: bye? What bye? You cant go like this Nandini. The suspence is killing me plzzz... Manik also got up.
Nandini: no Manik, bye.
And as she turned Manik held her hand and pulled her closer.
Manik: so tum nhi bataugi na?
Nandini: nope. coz I am as stubborn as you Mr. Manik Malhotra.
Manik smiles and continues: okay, fine. I'm letting you go this time but tomorrow I need my answers aur abhi main tumhe ghar drop karunga. Chalo.
Nandini smiles seeing his concern and says: okay, chalo.

The couple leave the college hand in hand but they were unaware that a pair of eyes had been watching all this and hatred for MaNan grew in those eyes.!!!!!!!!

So guys this was the first chap. Tell us how was it? Please like and comment below and tell whether we should continue the story or not. One more thing, we both wanted the first part to be fully MaNan, so there is only MaNan scene here whereas we will introduce the other characters in the next chapter only if you guys support us. There is not much difference from the real story but there is alot to come. Plz... we need you wishes and support. Thankyou.
Love
MaNaN_trS
Radha and Tvisha

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Part4-pg3
Part5-pg4
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sweet... :)
and Interesting...I wanna know which villain you will introduce

plz pm me when you update next
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Thankyou for ur likes...
Well since we r new here we dont know much abt it but ya slowly we will learn and i will try to pm you if possible...
A BIG WALA THANKYOU FROM US!!!!!!!
-Radha
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wlcm dear and big thankuuu 4 such a beautiful story
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Awesome plz continue nd PM me also if u can
Post nxt part soon👏👏
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Great Start. ..can't wait to see where you take this..
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Hello friends,
Plz tell us how you feel abt d story
Plzz let us know... 😊
-Tvisha
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Its really interesting
Who can b the villain? Guessing guessing
Update soon
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Great start... pm me if possible
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Hi guys!!! Today I, TVISHA will be going to upload the second chapter of HUMESHA In our lives. I hope u guys enjoy it. Before the chapter, I am gonna give a brief intro of all the characters as they are a little different from the actual story.
FAB5:
Manik- He is the hottie of the college and in a secret relationship with nandini.
Dhruv- He is in love with nandini and is planning to propose her.
Cabir- He is as funny and enjoyable as in the story. But in our story he is not a gay. He is getting hints about MaNan.
Mukti- she is literally over Harshad and is not under the influence of any anti-depressing pills. Her character is almost same as the show.
Alya- she knows Dhruv's secret and is helping him to propose nandini, while she is also trying hard to get back with Manik.
NH3-
Nandini- she a sweet girl and in a secret relationship with manik.
Navya- she is not in love with Harshad. But she is still a bhenji types. Getting hints about MaNan.
Harshad- he is still a jerk. Always flirting with girls and use them for his own good. Navya and Nandini consider him as a good friend because he has been very sweet and helpful to them. NavNi is still not aware of his evil side.
Shahid- he a sweet boy. His character is same as the show.
Rishab, chacha and chachi- same as the show.
*Next day*
Early morning-
Nandini was in her room smiling and thinking about last night and the new side of Manik, when suddenly her phone rang. Seeing the name on the phone, her smile became more bright, and she quickly picked it up. Obviously, who could it be!!
Nandini- Hii Manik!!
Manik- Itni desperate thi tum mujhse baat karne ke liye ki ek hi ring mein phone utha liya??
Nandini- yeh question toh Mai bhi tumse kar sakti hoon naa.. Ki tum itne desperate the mujhse baat karne ke liye ki Itni subah mujhe call kiya.
Manik smiles hearing this and says,
Manik- woh Kya hai naa Kisi ki smile ne mujhe sone hi nhi diya.
Nandini- Ohhh!!! Achhaaa??
Manik- Yaa seriously. The whole night I was thinking about you and that fireflies ka secret.
Nandini- have patience Manik. I told naa that I will tell you today.
Manik- you really test my patience. Ok I will wait. Aur option bhi kya hai mere paas
Nandini- good! Ok bye Manik! I will meet you in the college. Vaise bhi I have something very important to show you.
Manik- ok bye sweetheart!!
And they both hang up the phone
Nandini got ready and left for the college. Manik also left for the college. Nandini reached the college and on the gate itself she met the other members of NH3.
Navya- Hi Nandu!! Tum kaha reh gyi thi!? Hum sab kabse tumhara intezaar kar rhe the..
Nandini-Hi everyone! Arre yeh Mumbai ka traffic, bass ussi mein phas gyi thi.
Shahid- Haan nandini we understand! Mumbai ke traffic se Kaun bacha hai?!
Nandini, Navya and shahid laugh while Harshad in a serious mode says
Harshad- guys in sab baaton ka time nhi hai humaare paas. We have to practise as well as get ready. So don't waste time and come on!
NH3 were heading to practice when Nandini received a message from Manik
The message was-
*nandini where are u? M waiting to see my star! Plz meet me at our place, the staircase behind the music block*
Nandini reads the message and tries to escape from NH3
Nandini- u guys proceed, I will just come. I have some important work.
Harshad- no Nandini not at all. U can't just go like this. We have to practice it's the D-Day.
Navya- Haan Nandu. Tum kahi nhi jaa rhi ho
Nandini tried a lot but all her efforts go in vain. She had no other option but to agree with NH3. In their way to the music room, they come infront of the fab5. Manik and nandini both looked into each other's eyes and get lost into their trance. Dhruv tries to look at nandini but she doesn't look at him because obviously she is too busy in manik. They broke their trance hearing harshad taunting them:
Harshad- oh.. Here is "the fab5" so all set for the performance?
Manik- harshad harshad harshad why do you always have to be so childish
Harshad- really manik? I am acting childish huh? Iss baar kya tumne childish behave karke phone pr gaana hai?
Manik- oh pls harshad.. We have no time for all this nonsense of yours. Fab5 are born winners. You don't need to tell us how we have to sing.
Saying this fab5 headed towards the opposite direction in full attitude. Both the bands then went into their respective practice rooms. NH3 practiced hard while fab5 just chilled and enjoyed themselves in their room as they were THE FAB5, they don't need any practice.
After some time, it was the stage rehearsal of NH3.
When fab5 where going up and NH3 was coming down the stage, nandini felt someone pulling her aside, and who else it would be, except her love, manik.
Manik took her to their place, the music block wali staircase and hugged her very tight.
Manik- oh I was waiting for this moment since the whole day and...
Manik says something but nandini cut him by saying
Nandini- manik what are you doing? Tumhe stage rehearsal ke liye nhi Jana kya? All must be wondering where we are.. Plz manik..
Manik- oh plz nandini.. Don't you know I am the manik malhotra.. I don't need any stage rehearsals or stuff.
She smiles while manik says
Manik- ab mujhse aur wait nhi hota nandini plz tell me about...
Nandini again cuts her in between and says
Nandini- oh shit manik.. Mai woh jar Lana toh bhool hi gyi..
Manik- what? Which jar?
Nandini- manik, the jar, woh mere liye bohot important hai.. Mai uske bina tumhe kuch nhi bata sakti.
Manik- what rubbish nandini.. Uss jar ko chodo and tell me plz.. M waiting since yesterday.
Nandini- sorry manik I can't tell u anything without it.. Bye.. And all the best for your performance.
Manik- arre wait.. Do you really think that I will bear for this.. No..
And he lovingly starts caressing her arms and looks continuously into her eyes with all the love.. He then caresses her hair and then cups her face and gently kisses her forehead. He was about to kiss her but our shy nandini pushed him and gently pecked on his cheeks and ran. Both of them, smilingly go their respective changing rooms. All this while the same pair of eyes were seeing all this and hatred for MaNan grew even more.

In NH3's changing room, everyone is almost ready and Nandini is sitting infront of the mirror wearing her accessories. The door was slightly open. Manik was passing by the room and he saw Nandini infront of the mirror. Nandini could also see his reflection in the mirror and smiled. She so wanted to go and ask him how she was looking and he also wanted to compliment her but NH3 was in the room so they could not. So Nandini asked him just by actions that how was she looking and he gave her a flying kiss and an all the best sign. They both smile and Manik then goes back to his changing room.
After about an hour musicana started. Nyonika gave her speech. A grand rocking performance was performed by the great musician and the judge of the night, Shaan and his band. After a few performances, it was finally the turn of NH3.
*NH3 backstage*
Shahid- all the best guys.. We have to rock the stage this time too..
Harshad- of course shahid, we willl have to. We have no other choice than to win this.
They all hug each other and finally enter the stage to take their positions.
*fab5 backstage*
Dhruv- guys guys.. It's NH3 on the the stage.
Everyone looks towards the TV screen.
Mukti- finally the jerk is performing.
Manik, who was dying to see his star on the stage, rushed towards the auditorium.
Cabir- Kaha jaa rha hai manik?
Manik, after thinking a little, says
Manik- guys how can u miss NH3 ka performance? Jitna harshad Bol rha tha lets see what his performance says..
Everyone else smirked and went towards the auditorium.
As soon as fab5 reached the auditorium, nandini instantly spotted manik and smiled.
Manik also saw his star on the stage and seeing her beauty his eyes were glued to hers.
Finally, NH3 started performing. Nandini was the one to start the song. They performed on 'jaise mera tu'.
While singing such a lovable song, nandini just saw Manik there and all the words of the song just came out as they were just Manik. Manik also smiled seeing his beauty singing so beautifully.
As the guitar was stringed, something so terrible happened to their performance that just ruined it. Everyone now knew that there was no scope of NH3 to win. Even judges were surprised if such careless behavior by one the top bands of SPACE.
So guys I end up here only. I tried to put MANAN scenes in this too, I hope you liked it. Plz guys it's a request to like and post critical comment and suggestions on our post so as to support us as we are newbies here.
Lots of love
MaNan_trS
Radha and tvisha
Edited by MaNaN_trS - 10 years ago

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