MaNanFF:HUMESHA in our lives! Part7 on page 6 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
I just soo love ua stry... It was an amazing update totally
U r an amazing writer
I nva in my wildest dreams wud have thot dhruv wud turn out to b so negative an wicked... Like seriously...!
Hats off... I dont have wrds
Ua stry is sumthng different fo sure... N i absolutely love to read it...

Plz don't at all consider the thought of discontinuing this stry...
Plz plz plz... Cont soon

N pm if possible

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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: apps33

I just soo love ua stry... It was an amazing update totally

U r an amazing writer
I nva in my wildest dreams wud have thot dhruv wud turn out to b so negative an wicked... Like seriously...!
Hats off... I dont have wrds
Ua stry is sumthng different fo sure... N i absolutely love to read it...

Plz don't at all consider the thought of discontinuing this stry...
Plz plz plz... Cont soon

N pm if possible

thanks soo much to knw abt your opinion
well probably planning to update on Monday
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
guys if you want pm then plz add me to your buddy list coz i'll onbly pm ppl who r in the buddy list..
next part coming up on Monday with a new entry in the story!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
so guys here is the 7th chapter. plzz guys tell us what you feel abt it.
Chapter-7
Dhruv was heading closer in his plans to separate Manik and Nandini. He had already sown seeds of doubt in Manik's mind against our innocent Nandu. All he had to do now was to give
light, water and more space in Manik's mind to let the plant grow to its fullest and then he would peacefully enjoy the fully grown fruit.

On the other side Alya was happy being near Dhruv. She was happy that there was still somebody to help her in her dark times but when the thought of Dhruv leaving her and being with Nandini came to her mind, she felt bad. She felt as if she is losing something precious but could not define these feelings. "is it jealousy?" were the only words she could speak while she was thinking about it. The more she thought the more confused she got. She was walking alone in the corridor totally engrossed in her thoughts when she heard a loud voice calling out to her. "Alya stop right there!" she stopped where she was and turned around to see the owner of the voice. It was none other than our Nandu. Nandini came near Alya just to explain but before she could even start she was stopped.
Alya- Hey you looser! what do you think of yourself haan? who are you to stop me from going anywhere? dont ever do that again!
Nandini didnt react much but with the most politest voice ever she replied- relax Alya! dont worry i'm not stopping you from going anywhere but I was just stopping you from going any further. dekho yahan paani gira hua hai aur agar tum gir jaati toh you could have really hurt yourself. Relax and take care!
Saying this she tapped on her shoulder and left from there giving her a warm smile. Alya was really shocked to have such a reaction. She glanced at the water then at Nandini and back at the floor.
Alya- She is not that bad. No matter how many times i've hurted her but she always plays optimistic. No matter Dhruv has found a perfect match.
Again the thought of Dhruv being with Nandini herted her bgut she pushed aside those thoughts.
Alya- No Alya, you love Manik!
and she again made her way to the canteen.

Manik was walking in the corridor thinking about those things which Dhruv said and then he saw Nandini in front of him. He saw her smiling and coming towards him. This smile made his life much easier. Much sorted. He forgot all that he was thinking and went and hugged her tight very tight. Nandini was taken aback by sudden gesture but then too responded with all the love she had for Manik.
Nandini- so, is everyting sorted between you and Dhruv now?
Manik- This is cheating. How do you always get to know what's on my mind?
Nandini- coz your eyes are the mirror to your inner self which clearly shows whats going inside you. so I can sense it. waise frankly speaking, baakiyon ka toh pata nhi par I can definitely sense whats in your heart.
Manik- achhaa...! so whats in my heart ryt now?
He asked with his world famous smirk which gave Nandini hints about his desires.
Nandini- Mr. One Track Mind. tumhara dimaag ekk hi jagah chalta haina. kabhi kuchh aur bhi soch liya karo.
Manik- chalo na Nandini. Lets continue what we left.
Nandini- Nhi Manik its getting late. I need to catch up with Navya.
Manik- okk. Chalo main bhi chalta hoon. main bhi apni new friend se mil loonga.
Nandini- come on Manik. You cant forget what we decided.
Manik- What??!!
Nandini- Manik! yahi ki jab tak everyone doesn't accept us. We 4 will be a secret. pz Manik, main iss friendship ko kharab nhi karna chahti. aur vaise bhi hum shaam ko toh mill hi rhe hain na, at coffee!
Manik- fine! as you wish sweetheart. usko meri taraf se hi to bol dogi na?
Nandini smiled- yaa sure! Now byee!
Manik- bye baby!
and they both made their ways in the opposite directions.

guyys sorry this is a very short update. but i'll post the further part tomorrow .
sssooorrryyy!!!!
plzz comment and like!
Luv u loaadzz
MaNaN_trS
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Fab update dear...
dhruv insecurities and hatred is rising and alya is falling in love with him..
waiting for both of them to realize their feelings...
👏😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Wow awesome update dea. ..
Loved it
Read all part in one go
Continue soonnn
If possible pm me nxt time plss
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
it was awesome update yar
bt dhruv was too bad to evil plans towards manan
continue soon
early waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Do update soon and plz pm me

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