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Posted: 10 years ago
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We are really sorry guys.. We thought that today we will upload the third part of HUMESHA in our lives, but because of some problem we could not. But guys plz like and comment on our post as if u don't, how will we know that you guys are really interested and liking our story? Plz guys do support us in it. We really like reading your comments.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsome update ...
egarly waiting for the nxt update...
plz update asap...
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So guys here is the 3rd chap. I'm extremely sorry for posting sooo late. It's almost after a week.

Chapter-3
Everything was going good. It was a new start for NH3. But everything got ruined in just seconds. It was a debut for NH3 but nobody expected such carelessness and that too from Harshad! While singing and strumming the guitar, Harshad broke a string which created a sudden silence all around the audi. Everyone had a blank expression on their face. Even Nandini, Navya or Shahid couldn't expect this from Harshad while this jerk was just expressionlessly watching the broken string. Even fab5 couldn't accept what just happened. They were going through a mixed emotion because their chances of winning increased, the band or the band members they hated the most were now under them but also each member of fab5 was feeling sad for such a mishap on the stage.

All this while Manik really helped Nandini. Through his eyes he signaled Nandini to continue singing which would prevent them from anymore awkwardness. Nandini and Navya glanced at each other and continued the song. Manik and Nandini had a beautiful eyelock. Harshad had lost it very badly and now he could do nothing to save it. So he quietly went to his other band members and stood there silently. Finally! the song ended. It was a complete mess but NH3 received appreciation for their hardwork. They quietly descended the stage and went to their green room. No one spoke anything cause they knew this could worsen the condition.

After few performances it was time for fab5. Everyone was too excited but how could Manik perform without seeing his luchy charm so he messeged Nandini-" Hey darling! Dont worry everything will be cool but for now i wanna meet my lucky charm cause next is my performance. Hurry up sweetheart." Nandini couldn't think of anything else. Nothing was more important than Manik. So excusing herself she went to the backstage area but to her dissapointment she only saw fab4 standing, Manik was nowhere to be seen. Then she saw him already in the stage. So without wasting anymore time she directly went into the audi. As soon as she entered, both Manik and Nandini had a huge smile on their faces. Nandini through her gestures wished him all the best and gave him some cute flying kisses to which Manik responded with a smile. But those villianish eyes couldn't take this anymore abd the person directly went to the washroom. "How dare you Manik and Nandini. Now wait and watch." These were the only words that person spoke and then came iut of the washroom. After few minutes fab4 too entered in the stage. Their song was 'Mann mera' while Manik sang the song all the time Manik and Nandini's eyes were only fixed at each other. They played it very beatifully and obviously received alot of hooting and praises.

Now it was time for the results. Everyone was in the audi except fir Harshad. The result was very predictable. Shaan too anounced fab5 as the winner. They were feeling in top if this world. They had their all time favourite group hug on the stage itself and rhen Nyonika came up to make an anouncement. "Goodevening, today I am very proud that our college has won the Musicana. So there is a party at the Malhotra mansion tonight to celebrate the winning of our college esoeciakky fab5 at Musicana. I wish to see all of you there." After that Manik couldn't escape from their fab5 celebration and couldn't even meet Nandini whereas she waited for sometime but when Manik didn't turn up she left the college and went back to her home. Manik was getting too restless to meet her but to their badluck the duo couldn't meet. Manik reached his home and messeged Nandini-" Hey baby! I know that you were waiting for mr but I'm extremely sorry I couldn't come. Tumhe toh pata hai na fab5, they dont leave me alone. Agar tum mujhse baat nhi karna chahti toh I accept it but plzz aaj party mein aa jana otherwise I wont even come out of my room. Bye sweetheart."

After reading the message Nandini smiled on his sillyness and got ready in a red ankle length gown. She was looking stunning. After that Harshad, Navya and Shahid came to pick her up. Nobody talked about the incident but everyone was calm and cool. They reached the party and as she entered Manik was left awestruck. His princess was looking amazingly beautiful that too in his favourite colour. Their gazes met and a amile crept on their faces.

Even Dhruv saw her and smiled a little. Alya noticed it and teased him in person.Alya- so Dhruv, the shy lover boy is back! Don't you think Dhruv that its high time you should ask her out? Confess to her? Unn 3 flowers ki vajah de tumhara kal ka time bhi waste ho gaya.
Dhruv- No Alya not ryt now. Yahan par sab hai aur fab5 ko bhi is bare mein kuchh nhi pata. Mujhe toh pata bhi nhi ki sab kya sochenge?
Alya- uffo Dhruv tum kitni tension lete ho. Tumhare decisiins hamari choices par depend nhi ho sakte na. U need to...
Dhruv- stop it Alya. Maine bola na abhi nhi.
Alya- okk. Abhi mat bolo but danve toh kar sakte ho na. Go and ask her for a dance.
And she pushed him so he had no other option but to ask her. In the mean time Manik and Cabir were talking and Mukti went to talk to Alya.
Mukti- hey Alya! Why are you sitting here alone? Chal na Manik bhi vahan par hai.
Alya got a little tears in her eyes listening to Manik's name.
Mukti- hey babe! Kya hua why are you crying?
Alya- kuchh nhi Mukti. I'm ok.
Mukti- no. There is something tell me kya hua?
Alya- mukti, manik...
...he broke up with me but plzzz promise me ki tum kisi ko nhi bataogi abt it.
Mukti- what?? Ok i promise but yeh kab hua.
Alya- its been a while Mukti but I still miss him.
Mukti- stop crying Alya aur vaiswbhi hum sab ko pata hai ki Manik tumse kitna pyaar karta hai toh he will come back to you so dont worry and smile now.
Alya felt better after sharing her worries with Mukti meanwhile Manik saw Dhruv going towards Nandini. He observed it very keenly.

Dhruv forwarded his hand for a dance and Nandini even accepted it. They reached the stage and Nandini didn't glance at Manik for once. Manik was getting jealous and when he couldn't watch anymore he went up to Alya and offrred his hand for a dance. Alya was happy and Mukti wished her goodluck. They reached the stage too. Then even Mukti and Cabir went. Navya and Harshad came too. Nandini saw Manik and Alya together bit didn't react. Then the partners got changed and fortunately MaNan, CaVya, MukShad, and DhruLya were partners. Mukti and Harshad went away. Alya took Dhruv to a corner to discuss about their plan whereas our MaNan were happy to be together. Cavya stopped dancing and stood there to watch Manan. They both gave questioning glances to each other after watching Manan dance so intensely.

Nandini to Manik- was Mr. Manik Malhotra being jealous.
Manik- what rubbish? Main aur jealous? And why do you think that?
Nandini- yaaa tabhi toh tum Alya koblekar aaye na mujhe jealous feel karwane ke liye.
Manik- achha agar janti ho toh why did you go and dance woth Dhruv?
Nandini- Manik mujhe laga ki Dhruv tumhara dost hai isliye tum bura nhi manoge. But sorry.
Manik- well its ok I'm noy mad at you but arecyou mad at me for...
Nandini said cutting him in middle- for not coming amd meeting me after the performance?
Manik- yaah tumhe kaise pata i'm gonna talk abt this?
Nandini- Manik i know you very well. Samajhti hoon main tumhe. Janti hoon ki tumhare friends tumhare liye kitne important hain idliye I dont object and I'm not mad at you.
Manik- really? thankyou so much. So you will always understand me like this only na?
Nandini- humesha!!
Manik- humeha!!
And they continued their romantic dance.
But those eyes had witnessed this and the person angrily left the party.




So guys plzz tell how you feel abt the story. I tried to make it little long. We would love to read your comments. Especially the critivpcal ones so that we can improve. Sorry for the typo errors coz posted from phone.
Edited by MaNaN_trS - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsm update
loved it
nicely written
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing one...
Dance was good..
Maan mera one of my fav song..
But who is the person whose eyes are on them...
Continue soon...

Plz pm me when u update...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was Gud one
I like it
Continue soon
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Hi guys!! So here we are with the 4 chapter of "HUMESHA In our lives!!!"

Chapter-4
So the party was over after some time and everyone went back to their homes.
Manik and Nandini both were in their respective rooms and were obviously missing each other as they didn't get some alone time in the party. Then suddenly Nandini's phone rang and it was of course him..
Nandini- hi Manik!!
Manik- hi Nandini!! U reached home safely naa?? Sorry mai tumhe drop karne nhi aa paya.. U know naa sab they waha par..
Nandini cuts him in between and says
Nandini- I know Manik.. It's ok.. And waise bhi now toh I have reached home safely naa so plz chill.
Manik- woh toh thik hai but ussi bahane hume thora alone time mil jaata..
Manik smirks while Nandini just blushes.
Nandini- waise Manik I was thinking kahin Kisi ne Hume aise dance karte hue dekh toh nhi liya ho ga.. After all we both were dancing together for so long and that too u were holding me so..
Manik(cutting her)- tightly.. Ya romantically
Nandini(blushes)- I'm serious Manik. M afraid agar Kisi ko kuch pata naa lag gya ho.
Manik- oh plz Nandini.. M sure aisa Kuch nhi hua ho ga.. Everyone was so busy in themselves and vaise bhi no one has the guts to gossip around about Manik.
Nandini- oho fine.. I will not talk about it now.
Manik- good
They both just stay on the line and say nothing. But this silence was not at all awkward. They just smiled and heard each other's breath on the phone. Neither wanted to hang up but it was late night and they had college the next day.
Nandini- Manik I should probably go the sleep.
Manik- okay! Sweetheart good night.
Nandini- good night!
And they both hang up.

Next day in college fab5 and Nh3 were sitting separately in the canteen, but Manik could clearly see Nandini and the both share an eye lock.
Manik then, looking at Nandini only, says-
Manik- guys lets play a love game
Alya's eyes lit up with hope that maybe Manik can get back with him.. And then everyone else readily agreed to it.
Mukti- so pehle Alya u tell that what is love for you?
Alya(looking at Manik)- mere liye love is friendship. If he can understand me, then he is the one.. (She says this coz she has hope coz Manik says that he is still her friend)
Cabir- okay, well Manik tere liye pyaar Kya hai?
Manik(looking at Nandini)- mere liye pyaar trust hai.. Those two ppl should have so much trust in them that they are unbreakable. Chaahe kuch bhi hi jaye, they will always trust each other.. No matter what..
All this while alya looks down with shame, while Nandini listening to this(from a distance) smiles.
Mukti- guys mere liye toh love is just so complicated.. Mai toh iss pyaar-vyaar ke jhamele ko kabhi samajh hi nhi paayi.. Dhruv tu Bata, what is love for u?
Dhruv- mere liye bhi love is friendship..
Cabir was about to say his opinion on love when Manik got a message a message from Nandini and he leaves. The message was-
*manik I want to talk to u.. Plz meet me at the music block staircase*
When Manik got up, Dhruv also came after him..
Manik- buddy, tu yaha..
Dhruv- Haan buddy.. Mujhe tujhse kabse akele mein baat karni thi.
Manik- haan Haan Bol naa.. Tu thik toh hai naa?
Dhruv- Yaa.. Everything is fine with me.. But is everything fine with you?
Manik- matlab? Tu kis bare mein baat kar rha hai?
Dhruv- don't pretend infront of me Manik.. I know everything about you and alya..
Manik- what??
Dhruv- yes.. Alya ne mujhe sab kuch bata diya hai about your break up.. Buddy aisa kya hua joh tere ko itna bada step Lena pada
Manik- buddy, Maine realize kiya that it was not actually love.. It was just an infatuation.. Bas ek teenage attraction.. Humare beech trust thaa hi nhi.. And I can't pretend.
Dhruv- I understand..
Manik- chal ab tu ja.. Sab wait kar rhe honge.. Mai aata hoon..
Dhruv goes and Manik then feels better sharing his feelings with his best friend.
Manik reaches there and Nandini was already waiting.
Manik- hi! Is everything alright?
Nandini- ya ya Manik everything is fine.. I just wanted to meet u.. So I heard that for u love is trust...haan?? it's true with us na Manik??
Manik- of course my star it is true I trust u... And I will trust u HUMESHA. Coz I know u will never leave me and u will always be there.. To shine for me.
And he pecks on her cheeks and Nandini blushes..
Manik- vaise tumhare liye love Kya hai?
Nandini- Manik mere liye bhi love friendship Se zyada trust hai. Agar trust naa ho toh u start doubting. And humaare dil mein sirf ek hi cheez reh sakti hai.. Pyaar Yaa phir doubts. And my this believe has become more stronger by seeing us.. I wasn't ur gud frnd earlier but we still fell in love and trusted each other. I wilk trust you HUMESHA.. And more than anyone else.. And that has made me love you...
Manik smirked and said..
Manik- KYAA?!? Maine suna nhi.. Dobara bolo plzz..
Nandini realized what she just said and in innocence, she covered her face with her hands and said
Nandini- kuch bhi nhi.. Ok bye Manik
And she starts going away when Manik, adoring her shyness hugged her tightly.. She also responded to it equally.. Both were smiling.
But all this was seen by those two eyes and hatred for MaNan grew. But all this was ALSO seen by navya. She was extremely shocked and stunned seeing MaNan together like this.
But she didn't stay there and went towards the corridor.
Navya was all the while murmuring..
Navya(to herself)- he mata rani.. Yeh kaise ho sakta hai?? Manik aur nandini.. Saath.. Woh bhi aise.. Hume toh humari aankho par vishwaas nhi ho rha.. Woh toh ek doosre se bilkul nafrat karte the.. Ab Kya ho gya hai inhe.. Mata rani plz ab aap hi help Karo humari.
While saying this all, she by mistake collided with cabir.
Cabir- tumhe chalna nhi aata Kya? Aur yeh Kya bud-bud karke chal rhi ho.. Kya help chahiye tumhe mata rani Se..
Navya- hum tumhe kyun bataye yeh sab?
Cabir- kyunki Maine Suna ki Tum Mainik ke bare mein baat kar rhi thi.. Aur Manik ki har baat mujhe pata honi chahiye.. So plz..
Navya(to herself)- he mata rani.. Aapne isse kyun bejh diya?? Hum vaise hi itna pareshaan hai..par ho sata h ise kuchh pata ho aur yeh humari help karde..
Cabir- ab Bataao gi bhi?
Navya- tumhe Manik aur Nandini ke baare mein kuchh pata hai kya??
Hearing Manik and Nandini's name, cabir pulled nayva into a classroom and said
Navya- yeh Tum mujhe yaha kyun laye ho.. Mai Bata rhi thi naa tumhe bahar bhi.
Cabir- taki koi sun naa le. So plz.. Ab Khul kar poori baat Bataao.
Navya- woh naa actually Maine unhe saath dekha.. Music block wali staircase pe.. Woh kuch trust ki baat kar rhe the...aur hug bhi kar rhe the. chiiieee!!!
Cabir- Haan aaj Manik trust ke baare toh rha tha.. Ki pyar uske liye trust hai.. But woh do do ladkiyo ke Saath.. Woh alya ko ditch kaise kar sakta hai..
Navya- KYAA? Manik aur alya saath hai.. Nhi nhi.. Aisa nhi ho sakta.. Nandini me Hume Khud bataya tha ki Manik ne usse bola hai ki uska aur alya ka breakup ho gya hai..
Cabir- what?? Are u sure??
Navya- Haan Haan mata rani ki kasam.. Usne toh Hume yahi bola tha..
Cabir- iss sab ke bare mein Manik Se baat toh Karni padi gi.. Vaise...tumhare liye pyaar Kya hai?
Navya- humaare liye toh pyaar dosti hai.. Hum mein aur uss mein bohot si cheeze ek jaisi ho.. Woh mujhe samajh sake.. Bas yahi pyaar hai.. Waise tumhare liye pyaar Kya hai?
Cabir- love.. Love for me is enjoyment.. There should be no bounds. Ek dum bindaas aur mast. Love for me is a wonderful feeling like you..
Navya is shocked to hear this.. But they both them share a beautiful eyelock.. But after some time someone opens the door and they both come out of their trance. Cabir realizes what he just said and without saying a word he went out of the room. Navya was standing there stunned.
Navya( to herself)- he mata rani.. Saare jhatke aapne Aaj hi dene the?? Cabir aisa kaise Bol sakta hai? Aur hum cabir ke bare mein aisa soch bhi kaise sakte hai? Usne mujhe kitna pareshaan kiya hai. Plz mata rani.. Humari help karo.
Cabir was also equally shocked.
Cabir(to himself)- black and white madhubala.. Mai uske baare mein aisa kaise soch sakta hoon.. Cabir just get her off your Mind.. Mere paas waise bhi bohot important kaam hai..
After some time, they all meet in the music room and start jamming.
Manik was just thinking about his star and he sang the song "Jaane kyun" from dostana. He just thought about her and the lyrics came out from his heart... and the day went on a good note.

Precap- revelation of the villian

so guys plz give us your feedback and wait for the next chap coz in it we will finally disclose abt the villian and abt his plans.
love
MaNaN_trS
Radha and Tvisha
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Please pm me when you update in future
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Plz plz plz guys comment on our posts. We really need your response. All critical suggestions and replies are most welcome. We need to know that do you like our story or not. If we get our full support then only we are gonna post the next chap tomorrow. Else we will delay the villian till Sunday. Plz support us as we are newbies here and get ready for more and more drama and romance.
Thank you
Lots of love.
Tvisha and Radha ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update
N thnx for updating
A long one

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