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wow awsm update

wow awsm update...waiting fo next part continue soon..i jus love this story

Originally posted by: Kuushi

Awesome twist..was thinking of some new guy entry but not maniks father..well the family is good then what made him a monster.. For that I have to wait for more chapters..jaldi jaldi liko I just love the story..
So another intense faceoff of manan in the next update.. Please continue soon with a long update and thanku for the pm :)

well u'll get glimpse of his past in coming chaps :)

Originally posted by: Hasi-Pani1

wow awsm update...waiting fo next part continue soon..i jus love this story

thanku so much :)

Originally posted by: DikshaAnand

Nyc update now our monster will say sorry to her 😉

yes :P

Originally posted by: HTA111

Wow superb update can't believe they are his parents and I think he is going to be more angry with her now but he still doesn't know the truth what his friends did to her yet all he knows that she insult them and punch him

Continue soon

hehe yes nd thanku, sure :)

PART-9 (C)
nandani hear foot steps.. she close her eyes.. pretends
she is sleeping..manik enter in guest room.. SUJATA is
behind him... he stand next to bed on which nandani
was sleeping.. manik call her nandani.. but she didn't
open her eyes due to fear.. SUJATA cum and Sat beside
her nd politely call her name.. she pat on her head..
nandani slowly slowly open her eyes.. nd look at
sujata.. then sujata indicate manik with her eyes.. to
say sorry to nandani.. manik nods his head..
manik- nandani..
nandani- luk at him.. she is luking scared..
manik - luk what ever happen in clg I'm really really
sorry for that..
nandani wants to say sumthing.. but words ar nt
cuming out from her mouth..
manik luk at her.. she is luking lost
manik - I.said sorry .. tumne mujhe maaf kiya na..
luk plz forgive mee dad mom ne mujhe already bhot
danta.. plz plz forgive mee..
nandani- luk at manik mom.. who was showering her al
love nd concern on her.. she thought.. they helped mee
when I was al alone.. mai inke liye itna to kr sakti hu
so she just nod her head in yes..
sujata bcm really happy..
manik to smiles.. aise nhi say yes or no
nandani- yes I forgive u
manik - he extended his hand friends
nandani hesitates
manik- I think tumne mujhe maaf ni kiya
nandani- no aisa nhi hai. .
manik- to friends
nandani- thought for while but then shakes her hand
with him yes friends.. she smiles then look at sujata..
nandani- I am ok now.. I think I should leave now..
sujata- no aise tumko kahi ni jane dugi.. cum have
dinner with us.. or subh jana..
nandani - but Aunty
manik- no if no but chalo.. I'm damm hungry.. agr
tumne dinner ni kiya to mom mujhe bhi kuch khane ko
dengi..
nandani laughs a little..
but sujata hit on manik arm..
manik- mom.ouchh
nandani- ok Aunty
sujata-nandani beta tum ajao.. mai tb tk dinning table
arrange krti hu..manik help her..
nandani - Aunty I'm fine.. mai khud say ajaugi.
sujata- haan woh to dekha tha humne when ur trying
to get up from bed..
nandani- who..
manik- no if no but.. mom u go.. I 'll bring her..
sujata leave from there..
manik helps nandani to get up from bed..
nandani had trouble in walking she was abt to fall but
manik hold her.. nd help her to.standup on her feet..
nandani thought he is nt monster then why he behave
with her so rudely.. manik brought her down.. nd make
her sit on dining table..
sujata - to nandani - bete I don't knw abt ur fav food..
to Maine yeh sb bna diya.
nandani- it's ok Aunty.. aapne pyaar say bnaya mai
yeai khaugi..
nishant- wow ur such a gud gal.sujata nandani ko
ananya say milwana chahiye.. sujata nodes yes..
nandani-ananya??
sujata- ananya is manik sister.. as for now she is nt at
home she went to school trip.. with her friends..
nandani-- ohh
then she luk at manik who was eating his dinner
quietly..
nishant- tabhi is ghr mai itni shanti hai warna to yaha
tufaan aya hota hai..
both nishant nd sujata laughs remembering her
daughter antics..
nandani smiles..
manik- waise when is she cuming back..
sujata - day after tomorrow..
manik- gud mai tb clg chla jauga..
nishant-laughs nd sujata made sum angry faces..
nandani- in her mind - happy family-that moment she
was missing her papa ..
she bcm sad.. nd quietly finish her dinner..
nd then wish good night to uncle aunty nd manik..
nd leave for guest room.. she asusual pray to her
aiyappa.. it was 12 at night when she wake up.. as she
was feeling thirsty.. she luk at syd table.. jug is empty..
she took jug in her hand nd went to kitchen..
she heared sum voices cuming from kitchen.. she saw
fridge is open nd sumone is sitting in front of it..
searching.. she thought may be a thief.. she hold
kitchen pan in her hand.. nd without making any noise
hit on person head with pan..
nd closed her eyes tightly..
person- ouchhh..
nandani open her eyes again hit him on his head 3-4
times..
nd start shouting uncle aunty manik names..
that person whom she hit was trying to calm her down..
but she was not listening to him she was holding her
hands
nandani again yelled manik uncle aunty names..they al
came down with in a moment.. nd ran to kitchen.. nd
was shocked.. at view in front of there eyes..
nandani leave his hand..
Aunty uncle he was stealing sumthing from fridge
manik uncle aunty look at person that person look at
them..
"TUM"
to be continued

Omg wat an update firstly manik was behaving so nicely and helped Nandini and now who is dis new prsn I am soo excited plz update soon

Intersting

Awesome..didn't expect manik to behave so friendly but smells fishy to me though..and nandini is so sweet she forgave him inspite of the pain she went through bcoz of him...well u keep surprising us with the twists...now who is this new entry?? curious to know what happens next...please continue soon
And thanku for updating both stories for me :)