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hi i am new here ...n this is my first comment ...ur story is very nice ...continue soon 😊

Is dat sum1 abhi ?...nyc update...continue soon

Originally posted by: DikshaAnand

Is dat sum1 abhi ?...nyc update...continue soon

no no abhi ki entry mai tym hai :P

Originally posted by: cutebesties

hi i am new here ...n this is my first comment ...ur story is very nice ...continue soon 😊

thanku so much dear :)

waiting for d update. .
update soon. ..

PART-9 (B)
IT WAS 7 IN THE EVENING WHEN NANDANI OPENS HER
EYES.. AND SAW TWO UNKNOWN PERSONS STANDING
IN FRONT OF HER..
SHE TRIED TO SIT.. BUT DUE TO WEAKNESS SHE WAS
NOT ABLE TO DO..SO..HE ASKED THE PERSON WHO
WERE STANDING INFRONT OF HER.. HOW SHE CAME
HERE..AS SHE DON'T REMEMBER ANYTHING..
U WERE FAINTED ON THE MIDDLE OF ROAD... MY
HUSBAND CAR WAS PASSING THROUGH THE SAME
ROAD.. HE SAW U THERE AS WE DON'T KNW UR HOME
OR NO SO HE PICK U HERE..AT OUR HOME. SAID THE
LADY..
NNANDANI- GAVE HER A FAINT SMILE..
THANKU UNCLE AUNTY.. BUT I THINK I SHOULD LEAVE
NOW... I LIVE IN HOSTEL.. WADREN AUNTY MUST BE
WAITING FOR MEE.. SHE AGAIN TRY TO SIT ON BED
BUT FAIL.. UNCLE AUNTY. RUSH TO HER SYD.. UNCLE.
- ITS OK BETA,UR NT WELL..U NEED REST U STAY
HERE WITH US ND JUST TELL MEE UR HOSTEL NAME I
WILL TALK TO UR WARDEN..
NANDANI-BUT UNCLE HOW CAN I STAY HERE.. I
MEAN.. (BEFORE SHE COMPLETE HER SENTENCE LADY
INTERRUPT)
LADY- LYK MY CHILDREN STAY HERE.. U CAN ALSO
STAY HERE.. SHE PUT HER HAND ON NANDANI HEAD..
NANDANI- HAD TEARS IN HER EYES..
UNCLE- BETA NOW JUST TELL UR HOSTEL NAME..
NANDANI- SPACE.. I STUDY IN SPACE.. HOSTEL BHI
USKE ANDR HAI.. THEN SHE LUK AT AUNTY.. WHO
WAS STARING AT HER HUSBAND.. THEN SMILE CREPT
ON HER LIPS.. NANDANI WAS CONFUSE..
AUNTY- LO BETA YEH TO GHR KI BAAT HOGYI.. SO
NOW TUMKO TENSION LENE KI KOI JAROORAT NHI
HAI..
NANDANI- MTLB??
AUNTY- MTLB YEH JO TUMHARE UNCLE HAI NA YEH
WAHA K TRUSTEE HAI.. SHE POINTED FINGER AT HER
HUSBAND.. HAINA NISHANT...SHE LAUGH A LITTLE..
NANDANI- REALLY
UNCLE- YES BETA.. MAI ABHI WARDEN SAY BAAT KRTA
HU.. TBTK SUJATA TUM HUMARI BETI KO KHANA
KHILAO.. HE SAID TO HIS WIFE..
AUNTY- OK.. BETA WAISE TUMHARA NAM..
NANDANI- NANDANI... NANDANI MURTHY
UNCLE- BETA TUMHARA NAM TUMHARE JAISE HE
BHOT PYAARA HAI.. HE SOFTLY PULL HER CHEEKS..
NANDANI- SMILE THEN BCM SAD
BOTH NISHANT & SUJATA NOTICE THIS..
SO THEY ASKED NANDANI WHAT HAPPEN.. BUT SHE
REFUSED.. THEY INSTIGATE HER.. AGAIN ND AGAIN..
THEN NANDANI BLUR OUT EVERTHING.. WHY SHE
CUM MUMBAI.. HER PARENTS DREAMS.. FIRST DAY IN
CLG.. FAB 5 MANIK EVERYTHING.. HER SCHOLARSHIP
CANCELLING.. .. SHE START CRYING THINKING NOW
SHE CAN'T FULFILL HER PARENTS DRRAMS.. NISHANT
WAS FURIOUS LISTENING AL THIS.. WHILE SUJATA
HAD TEARS IN HER EYES.. THINKING.. SHE SUFFERED
THIS MUCH.. NISHANT CALL SUMONE ND TOLD HIM
TO CUM OVER THERE PLACE ANY HOW THEN CUT THE CALL IN ANGER..
AFTER FEW MINUTES DOOR BELL RANG..
NISHANT SUJATA WERE IN LIVING AREA.. NANDANI
WAS IN ROOM.. BUT SHE WAS HEARING VOICES
CUMING FROM LIVING AREA..THEY WERE TALKING TO
SUM ONE.. AS SHE CAN HEAR 3RD PERSON VOICE..
NISHANT- (IN ANGRY TONE)- HOW COULD U DO
THIS..
PERSON-BUT DAD I DO NOTHING..
(THE PERSON WITH WHOM THEY ARE TALKING
TRYING TO GIVE EXCUSE)
SUJATA- OHH SHUTUP U.. STOP LYING WE KNW
EVERYTHING..
PERSON- MOM BUT U KNW THE HALF TRUTH.. I DID
NOTHING.. SHE IS LYING TO U GUYS)
(NANDANI THINKING OOH TO HE IS THERE SON.. BUT
WAIT A MIN WHO LIE TO WHO)
NISHANT- STOP LYING MANIK.. U KNW SHE WAS
FAINTED ON ROAD WHEN I SAW HER.. AGAR MAI WAHA
NHI HOTA USKO KUCH HO JATA KAUN RESPONSIBLE
HOTA..
(NANDANI IS TOTALLY SHOCKED HEARING MANIK
NAME.. SHE THOUGHT ITNE ACHE UNCLE AUNTY KA
BETA YEH MONSTER)
MANIK- BUT DAD..
SUJATA- FURIOUS - HOW MANY TYMS WE TOLD U
THINK BEFORE U ACT.. ND TUMNE NIYONIKA KO BHI
INVOLVE KR LIYA ISNE..
MANIK-MOM DI DID NOTHING.
NISHANT- U KNW WHEN SHE TOLD HER WHAT
HAPPEN WITH HER IN CLG.. MUJHE SHARAM ARI THI
THAT UR MY SON.. HOW CAN U DO DIS WITH A GIRL..
MANIK- I CAN'T BELIEVE AAP USKI SYD LERE HO APNE
BETE KI NHI.. I DIDN'T TELL HER TO GET FAINT ON
ROAD.. SHE PUNCH MEE INFRONT OF WHOLE CLG.. I
WAS JUST GIVING HER A LESSON DON'T MESS WITH
ME..BUT I THINK SHE DIDN'T GET HER LESSON..
SUJATA-SHUT UP MANIK.. DON'T BE SO EGOISTIC..
NISHANT- SAY SORRY TO HER
MANIK- WHAT SORRY NO NEVER.. WO BHI US
NANDANI KO..
NISHANT-IF UR NOT GOING TO SAY SORRY TO HER..
THEN THERE IS NO NEED OF U HERE.. I WILL STOP
SUPPORTING TO U ND UR FRIENDS..
MANIK- DAD I CAN'T BELIEVE UR FAVOURING HER NT
UR SON
NISHANT- I AM FAVOURING THE RIGHT THING..
NOW GO AND SAY SORRY TO HER..
MANIK- ANNOYED- OK DAD MAI CLG JAKR BOL DUGA..
SUJATA- CLG JAKR KYUN SHE IS HERE..
MANIK- SHOCKED- WHAT HERE - WHERE
SUJATA- IN GUEST ROOM
MANIK- I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS U GUYS ..
NISHANT- NOW GO ND SAY SORRY TO HER
MEANWHILE MAI NIYONIKA KI KHABR LOON..
MANIK LOOK AT THEM THEN LEAVE FOR GUEST ROOM
SUJATA FOLLOWED HIM

TO BE CONTINUED...

Awesome twist..was thinking of some new guy entry but not maniks father..well the family is good then what made him a monster.. For that I have to wait for more chapters..jaldi jaldi liko I just love the story..
So another intense faceoff of manan in the next update.. Please continue soon with a long update and thanku for the pm :)

Wow superb update can't believe they are his parents and I think he is going to be more angry with her now but he still doesn't know the truth what his friends did to her yet all he knows that she insult them and punch him

Continue soon

Nyc update now our monster will say sorry to her 😉

ooops Monster Manik is back