Manan FF // The Impulsive Soul-Mates// Ch22 link updtd on pg152 29/7 - Page 76

I read this ff in one go and surprise kya likhte ho yaar dhadkan ruk jati hai ki ab kya hoga wait nahi ho raha jaldi update karo dear and thankyou for such a lovely ff.

Hi

I was silent reader of this FF. But your characterizations of Manik and Nandini and the plot progression forced me to appreciate your work and efforts. I had few issues with storyline but since last few chapters you successfully redeemed it and built it to your storyline without much jarring.

One of the biggest issue which kept on bugging me was Nandini's eloping from home on her engagement without informing anyone on one conversation with Manik who happened to be a teenage crush whom she hardly knows personally (stalking can never be counted). This was something which I could never digest. But bring Abhi to the picture and him being her support system and backup you made it acceptable. Abhi brought reality and practicality toward Nandini.

It is nice to see grey characters which both Nandini and Manik are. It was pleasure to see different streaks of these characters vulnerable, insecure, possessive, jealous, caring, loving, stubborn, adamant, ego and most importantly emotional. You did a good job with Manik's past, dad-mom bond, his mom issue, his insecurity due them. Are there more to Nandini's past about her parents especially her father and no mention of dada and dadi, paternal side? And more Nanu never accepted Nandini's parents love and marriage.

You know what the way the story connected with the loophole was really commendable it shows your efforts like the closed room for Manik's flat which was his childhood memories, Nandini meeting friend who turned out to be Abhi one knowing everything, Soha's only and only Nandini else no (I had guessed this would be the way how Nandini will be in Aura). Most importantly Neerja being Manik's mother reason for no ties with neighbor statement. Every twist and turn seems to have a hidden motive I am eagerly waiting for the other red flag to connect with storyline. I have one more guess, that is green eyed monster Manik is on way because of Harshad during Soha's wedding functions , let's wait and watch how story move ahead. I am even guessing Alya's re-entry to spice up the plot.

That prologue and two present chapters were very much tempting and intriguing. One thing is sure there are many reasons for MaNan's fall out as said in prologue "all the possible reasons to hate him". Not just Manik's past and security or Abhi or aborting of the baby or that wh*** comment or ego there are much more to it or may be its just me. By the way, it seems Manik is gravely wrong; he will have to literally grovel to have Nandini and baby in his life. I won't be judgmental waiting for Manik's side of story, hope it won't be some stupid misunderstanding without any base. I hope you will do justice to your own wordings which I quoted and reasons won't be lame and pathetic. What is cooking in Nandini's mind and her plans is definitely a curious question and how will Manik get back Nandini is another one.

I really liked Nandini's stand in last update - by hook or crook attitude. She turned the table and making it harder for Manik. But I won't deny I have some issue with this "it's over" statement, it was purely impulsive and it was his insecurities and his fear which spoke. I am holding on as Manik's point of view is not completely disclosed (of course his past is one of the reference point but still). Manik is very badly shaken that conveys a lot. The talk they had apparently is loose ended and was never a proper conversation, strictly my opinion. Hope this fall out will bind them emotionally and help them in understanding the other.

I now Nandini is the narrator of the story, she our lens but I really wanted Manik perceptive, though it was a very small portion we got it the Chapter 16 Present and I might say it was impactful. Wish I get few more of them.

I am waiting for story to culminate. I actually hoped you update on every other day or at least on the third day. And yes stick to your long long chapter updating style. Hope you will continue to keep me hooked to this FF. All the best.

Waiting for next update.

waiting for next update 😊

Omg,wat a story,some page on insta strtd posting dis story,she was in da strt,nd i loved it so much dat i couldnt control nd had to search fr dis page on india forums,nd u wont belive frm noon da nly thng i was dng was reading ur story,nd nw i completed it,finally...!!!!was dying to leave a comment hear,nd hear u go,ur writing is amazing,da way ur describing dis story is no less dan a film,wid da mix of past nd present parts,cant wait fr da rest of da parts to b updated,update it soon,bacche maar jayenge wait karte kart

Originally posted by: mounicareddyc

Omg,wat a story,some page on insta strtd posting dis story,she was in da strt,nd i loved it so much dat i couldnt control nd had to search fr dis page on india forums,nd u wont belive frm noon da nly thng i was dng was reading ur story,nd nw i completed it,finally...!!!!was dying to leave a comment hear,nd hear u go,ur writing is amazing,da way ur describing dis story is no less dan a film,wid da mix of past nd present parts,cant wait fr da rest of da parts to b updated,update it soon,bacche maar jayenge wait karte kart

okay so this is really pathetic I have just come to know that some useless moron has posted my story on instagram without my permission. I dont hav an account on insta and right now am on a vacation so it is difficult to track who that low life bug is.It is a sincere request to all my readers and those who appreciate my story. whoever from you have an account on insta can you please track that moron or atleast give me the link.

Please dont stop writing

Originally posted by: sujal1fan

okay so this is really pathetic I have just come to know that some useless moron has posted my story on instagram without my permission. I dont hav an account on insta and right now am on a vacation so it is difficult to track who that low life bug is.It is a sincere request to all my readers and those who appreciate my story. whoever from you have an account on insta can you please track that moron or atleast give me the link.

AND TILL THEN I WONT BE CONTINUING AS FAR AS IT IS NOT REMOVED.

I am deeply hurt by such shameless plagiarism.I and many other writers really put in a lot of efforts and it is really disgusting to see that some idiot just copies it and pastes it under their name.

Thank You

Sumana

A dejected writer

Iknow its damn annoying! And disheartening! But you can't do anything bout these morons !!
But its your call!
Hope you continue soon after resolving this matter :)

Hey Sumana Don't worry we'll try our best try track that moron!!
i'll search insta...and will get back to you ASAP!!
And don't be dishearten Girl...sick ppl can copy but they cannot steal your talent...you are an awesome writer!! no random copycats can beat you..!
we'll wait untill you resume..take care!!
:) 😊