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crazydreamer

@crazydreamer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#901

Awesome parts...
amazing i really tell you that it's look like a fairy tale
n I'm thinking that my mom is telling me that seriously i loved fairy tale
n star scene was fantastic but i loved Alya n nandu union
ty for pm n tc 😉

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Himanshi Shah

@himanshishah15

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Posted: 10 years ago

#902

Luved it..
Yes their convo about the stars was my favourite too.
And that too when Manik was searching Nandini and he found her under the table.. 😆
And the songs...so luvly..
Nandu confused about what to wear.. like every single girl on this planet gets when it comes to get ready. 😆 😆
Finally Aliya accepted Nandini as Manik's wife.. phewww!!
But ye kya... Cabir ki party me Harshad!!!!!!
And he misbehaved wid Nandini.. 😭
And she fell into the pool...
That jerk definitely deserves a tightest punch ever... 😡
Anyways, the story was completely wow!
Loving it to the core..
Eagerly waiting for next update.. 😳

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Ayesha Nazrat

@musicialtie

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#903

TUM MILE... just loved it coz off manik only...

updates were superb and nicely written...

ishh harshaad na... ufff... bechari humuri nandu ko fain karwadia...

manik saved i liked it...

lliked aliya part too...

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#904

Nice update

Its lovely

Cont soon

Hate tht harshad

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kirankusum

@kirankusum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#905

It was superb update ...
Thanks for the pm
waiting for next update eargely ...
Why she fainted

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crazzy_girl1999

@crazzy_girl1999

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Posted: 10 years ago

#906

Superb!! Seriously...
yur story... ❤️ ❤️
I fall more fr yur story wit each passing update! ❤️
U knoe tum mile is fav song n it was 1 of reasons
I strted reading yur ss... like d 1st tym I saw d name I was like I need to read
dis story... n u put dis song todae in yur update... I was like jus smiling
through out d update... 😊
AWSOME UPDATE!!
U write very well!
Waiting fr d nxt part!!
Update soon! N tyssm fr d pm! 😊