Manan SS: Tum Mile Chp24A,B&C/Page141 - Page 89

aww mawara😛😛 yr just love u man😳😳 u penned down ds story in sch a beautiful manner dt i cant tell u😊😊😊 ur truely a brilliant witer n plzz keep writing as i loved ur thinking #manan fantancy😳😳😳 u mix up all essentails part of human life in one n dt is none other dn MANIK MALHOTRA who is a friend,a mother n father 2 her, her lover more important her husband who loved her 2 d core more dn himslef or even beyond😛😛😛 hatss of 2 u for writing sch a magnificient story👏👏👏👏 plzz update its nxt chp son until dn tc n love ya😳😳😳😳

Awww...Awsome update...lovely..cute...😊

Thank you for early update and u r amazing update asap thank u

Superb amazing awesome update

He is really possessive about her as he had previously analysed what happened when he was away from her so he is trying everything too get her healthy once again and plan their trip

Oh god what that harshad wants from her now if manik finds out he will not leave him

Continue soon and thanks for pm

Ohk...!! Wat to say...?? 😕
I mean u know na after reading your ff we r speechless always... 😛 😃
u always nail it 👏

now cming on r updates one by one...

23A - yaar it was hell cute... 😃
Like seriously. .. D way nandini hide under d table n then manik cmes n feed her... 😆
n in between they romance.. 😳
I truly lvd it man... 👏
Her childish behaviour and cute antics jst make love her andur writing evn more 😊
And then nandini jumping knowing that they will go to Disney land... hehehe..!! That was soo cute 😊
and then d stars.. ⭐️ ⭐️ I jst love them.. 😊
they always bring manan more close 😳
and nandini searching hr parents in d stars and manik explaining hr that they r in hr heart ❤️
how do uh write soo soo good... this convo was soo tching 👏

23B - this one was very romantic 😳
Firstly nandini bringing guitar fr manik to sing fr hr...
n then that line EVERY THING IS SPECIAL WEN I M WITH UH that was d line of d update seriously ⭐️ 👏 😳
n then TUM MILE
d song n d dance was full on dhamaka 👏
n then manbir talk... haha n d Disney land discussion
n then d party invitation... 😊
u wrote it very simply n nicely... n I lvd it 👏

23C - last one 😭 n a lil sad also
Manan naughty talk on d bed ws superb
n then nandini agreeing fir d party was also good
d dress choosind ws very good... specially manan's talk... 😳
n den party...
alya n nandini 😲 but I like it 😊
n then harshad 😡 I will kill him 😡
I mean agn he tried to misbehave with nandu 😡
n then nandu in d pool n manik saving her...
agn uh nailed it... 👏
nandu gets faint 😭
but its ok...

U always amaze me with ur writing skills...
perfect wordings...
perfect scenes...
perfect lines...
n perfect manan 👏

Thanks for the PM

Keep writing 😊
Continue soon 😊

Its really amazing update
Love it manan scenes really nice
Harshad never changed
Alya n Nandu scenes really good
Their nohk jhok are really cute
Update soon
Thnx for pm

Nice part. Harshad is dead manik won't leave him. Btw nandini was R8 she doesn't had gud experience in parties. Anyways lovely update. Continue soon n thanks for the pm.

Awesome update like always
Loved it update the next soon

Beautiful update