Manan SS: Tum Mile Chp24A,B&C/Page141 - Page 81

Hey! Firstly big big wala thank you for taking out time for us and updating regularly!

sry I don't knw how to make lambaa cmnt...
actually after reading only the word escape from my mouth was amazing fantabulous
aww nandu is really chotu character in ur ff lovely yaar
ty for pm
sry not giving lambaa cmnt...

Great update... love the cuteness with the injection and so love thta Rishab is back...his convo with Manik was much needed... ans the MANBIR apology was so sweet as was the welcome home... can't wait to see how they handle the mini separation...

Pls update tonight 😭

Tysm for pm:))))))))nd and amazing mesmersing long long long long update...:* every update of yours make me eager ti read next parts ,;))amazing beautiful emotional superb the best part I loved was cute antics of bubbly nandu n also mananbir:):):)update soonnn nd romance was cute too:);)

wow...Thnx for the lovely update...i mean its jus fab...the way u write is outstanding...i jus loved it...cont. soon desperately waiting for next part...tnx for the pm... 👍🏼 😊

w8ing eagerly for next...

uh r terrific writer!! itne saare mini heart attackz..
i will b commenting on last 4 chapz which meanz a total of 10-12 partz.. i was busy..
so finally nandini told manik abt mayank.. manik was insecure.. dun wry manik as nandini is only urz.. dat jerk dun deserve an angel lyk her..
the office romance was so sensual.. butterflies were fluttering in my stomach (shy)..
manbir.. the best frndshp bond.. cabir hlpd him finding abt evry detail of mayank.. both the tymz..
mayank rly was a shameless person.. pehle toh he left nandini n wen c is happy, he wna create prblmz.. evn wen manik was beating him blue n black, he was laughing.. disgusting!!
i njyd both the fytz.. the slapz n punchez .. the wine bottlez.. evrythng.. while reading the fyt portion, i was thinking of "pyaar pyaar pyaar ya fir maar maar maar", focusing on "maar".. he deserve to rot in jail as datz his real place..
nandini knw vry well hw to calm manik down.. aftr all c is angel nblove of his lyf ;) ;)
nandiniz cute anticz.. hahahahah.. ice cream.. gol gappe.. disneyland dream n injection one was vry funny.. i cudnt restrained myslf frm laughing :D :D
i loved dat part wen nandini said dat c cn evn die foh manik.. but then bullet was shot n i was lyk wat, how n all the "wh" quez!! my breath hitched.. kuch samajh nhi aaya.. pehla khayaal aaya dat maine misread kia h.. so i reread n tab mujhe yakin hua dat c was rly shot.. i was thinking dat pakka nandini ne mayank ko dekh lia hoga wid gun n datz y woh manik k samne aa gyi n uh evn mentioned dat..
i felt bad foh manan.. nandini in hospital bed n manik impatiently waiting foh her to wake up..
dat scene was rly senti wen manik asked doc to save nandini or else he will set the hospital on fire.. dis showz hw much he love her..
poor doc.. he got scared of manan..
rishab apologized to manik foh the situation which forced manan to marry.. but aftr manikz confession, he was happy foh them..
evn i was thinking dat nandini ka grihapravesh toh hua hi nhi but aapne saare ritualz purey krwa diye.. but hw cn they hv sex in dis condition of her?!! but they did it.. n it was lovely :) :)
cabini bond.. cabir is ryt.. nandini is spcl.. the song "sorry sorry" was perfect..
nw manik hv to go to london.. i wna knw abt the consequences..
plz update soon.. n m wishing in advance foh new thread as i will b late..

PLz plz plz plz...upload next parts soon...