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Posted: 10 years ago
Helo dear I have read all ur chapters now...each n every chapter was driving me crazy to read...u have penned down so beautifully 'hats off to your writing skils pls update soon as possible coz now I can't wait to read further parts pls update soon. Nd Ty fr wonderful story😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wooww...triple dose...awsome...amazing...loved it...
Finally aaliya chapter close...manan chapter start😉
Nandini prepare lots of dishes for manik Awww...nandini rock...manik shock..😆
bechara manik pehle hi ziada khana kha liya tha...or phir salty cake bhi khana para...😃
manik sing song pr nandini awsome...
loved it...Thanks for PM...
Cont Soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for the update
Loved the part where manik ate the salty cake for nandini
It was so sweet and also where manik consoled nandini and promised never to leave her.
Awesome updates
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omgg.. Its a big shout out from my side...
Firstly luv ur writings alot...,
Secondly three updates wow..
Thirdly get well soon..

Coming back to update..
Nandini snuggling in Manik's chest a moment i really wanna watch in KY2..
The cuteness ypu showed in that scene was awesome...

Her hairs always tempt Manik and his closeness always makes her feel weak.. Mind blowing..

Manik confrontation with Alya was much needed... You showed this perfect.. When it comes to love Manik knew no bounds.. He will love her till eternity...

Coffee for her this is the sweetest gesture a man can do for a woman...

Cooking almost every cuisine for Manik is her way of showing love but she is not aware of it...

Oh Nandini in blue saree and messy bun cooking no doubt she wud be looking ethereal thats how she look almost everyday... Licking the cream on her cheeks must had sent shivers and melted her insides as she was feeling weak...

Oh god stuffing almost 10 different cuisine is like ssly.. And humara Manik baba was done with the food.. So our one track mind bae thot of having a lap romance...
I just loved the dialogue.. " don't you dare tie ur hair in my presence"

Aww that was a sweet gesture of ignoring the saltiness of cake and telling her it was yummy but Nandini being Nandini has to get upset or else where wud we get these manofying session which was cute.. Song was one of my fav... Its been like ages bae has not performed...

TRUST is all they have in their relationship that can take their relationship to peak.. Don't break that

Past never leaves us.. And it is still haunting his doll.. But he will take it out of her.. We all know..


Lastly thank you for a bful story.. I love it to the core..


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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 12 A


(This chapter is dedicated to my sweet friend Sam aka Butterstoch..!! Stay blessed honey..!!)


Next morning it was 7 when Nandini slowly opened her eyes,and lifted her head to see her husband's beautiful face. She remained still,listened to his heartbeat for sometime and gently traced her fingers on his cheeks. He moved in his sleep and tried to hide his face in her hair. She smiled on his loveliness.


"Manik..!! Wake up..!!" She said softly ruffling his hair.


"Nandini please..!! Let me sleep..!! Just ten minutes..!! Tum bhi so jao..!!" Manik said in a sleepy voice and nuzzled his face more in her hair. Nandini giggled.


"Acha..!! Let me go I have to cook your breakfast..!!" Nandini tried to untangled herself from him. Manik let her go,she went into washroom to take bath and Manik again hide his face in blanket to get some sleep before that Nandini again woke him up. Today she wore a knee length,sleeveless purple frock with a jeans, just for a change. After that she came out of bathroom and saw Manik still sleeping. She smiled and went to almirah to take out his clothes.


"Manik..?? What you want to wear today? Blue or black? I think blue theek rahy ga..!!" Nandini said in a loud voice to wake him up but no response just sound of snoring nothing else. Nandini frowned. She angrily walked towards bed tapping her foot.


"Mr Manik Malhotra get up..!! Or else I..!!" Nandini tried to pull the blanket from Manik but before she could complete her sentence to her shock Manik pulled her and pinned her on the bed. Nandini's eyes widened in shock.


"Or else You..!!" Manik said huskily leaning closer to her and tucked a wet strand behind her ear.


"Ma..! Manik..!!" Nandini fumbled in proximity.


"Shhh..!!" Manik put his finger on her lips and shushed her. He slowly entwined his finger with hers. He leaned dangerously close to her ,traced his lips on her neck and kissed her neck Nandini closed her eyes and held Manik's hand tightly. Manik smirked and tracing his lips from her neck he reached her shoulder and kissed her there too.


"Manik please..!!" Nandini moaned,still closing her eyes breathing heavily.


"Please what Mrs.Malhotra..!!" Manik whispered and blow in her ear. Morning romance was about to reach it's peak when they both heard knock on the door.


"Perfect timing..!!" Manik sighed in frustration,to which Nandini giggled and tried to get up but Manik was in no mood of letting her go this time.


"Ni na please don't go..!!" Manik pleaded making a cute face.


"Manik please..!!" Nandini replied after a lot of convincing session Manik let her go. It was the Butler who told Nandini that Nayonika was calling her that means she was back and then he left. Warning Manik to get ready fast she also left the room.


Manik was very angry on his Butler's wrong timing,cursing him he went to bathroom to take a shower. Then he started thinking about Nandini's nightmares. "One thing about which I am sure that it's about her parents. What should I do? I think I should talk to Janvi aunty about Nandini's condition..!! Yes it's a good idea. I can't see Nandini like this..!! And what was she talking about the teddy? Hmmm first I have to talk to aunty..!!" Manik talked to himself. Janvi aunty was Nayonika's friend and was a doctor too an old lady but full of life. Manik always share a good bonding with her she was a kind lady she didn't have children of her own that's why she loved Manik a lot.

Manik came out of the bathroom when he saw the bed again he started cursing his Butler.


"I'll fire him today..!!" Manik murmured in frustration. While wearing his clothes he was continuously thinking how to call Nandini back in the room.Then an evil plan hit his brain. He immediately torn the first button of his shirt ,smiled wickedly and then make sad expressions just to add a little reality to his wicked plan.


"Nandini..!!" Manik shouted on top of his voice.

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Nandini was serving tea to Nayonika when she heard Manik shouting her name. Nayonika raised her eyebrow and looked towards Nandini. Nandini gave her a I-Don't-Know look.


"Go and ask him if he needs something..!!" Nayonika suggested and Nandini left for her room to see now what was her husband up to.

...

Manik peeped out of the room and saw Nandini coming he run back into his room meanwhile Nandini entered the room. She was facing Manik's back.


"Manik? What happened?" Nandini asked worriedly. Manik smiled and before turning towards her he again plastered sad expressions on his face.


"Woo..!! Look na Nandini..!!"Manik started sadly "This button..!! It is torn..!!" Manik added almost crying and showed her the button. To which Nandini laughed aloud and Manik frowned.


"What is funny?" Manik said asked angrily.


"No..!! Nothing is funny..!!" Nandini became serious seeing her husband angry,walked towards him and pull his cheeks and Manik become more irritated. "Manik..!! Just aik button toota hai..!! Why are you so sad..?? Me hoon na..!! I will stitch it for you..!! You just wait here I'll be back in two minutes..!!" Nandini hurriedly left. And Manik smiled on his success. He turned towards the mirror and started brushing his hair.


"Manik Malhotra you are a very good actor..!!" Manik complimented himself.


"Who is a good actor..??" He heard Nandini's confused voice. He became serious and turned towards Nandini.

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Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 10 years ago
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Chapter 12 B

"Ummm no one..!! You tell me? What to do with this button?" Manik tried to divert her attention.

"Ohhh yeah..!! I'll stitch it..!!" Nandini showed him a needle and a matching thread. She walked towards him. As it was the first button of his shirt and Manik was too much tall Nandini wasn't able to reach there. Manik saw her confusion and pull her towards him.


"Hmmm my choto wife..!! Step on my feet..!!" Manik said smilingly. Nandini slowly stepped on his feet. And started stitching the button carefully trying her best not to hurt him with the needle. Manik held her waist so that she may not fall. Manik was back in his romantic mood. He tried to lean closer to her but Nandini give him a angry glare.


"Manik..!!" Nandini said angrily.


"What?" Manik said if he hadn't done anything.


"Don't you dare to move..!! You will be hurt with this needle..!!" Nandini said warning him. Seeing his plan getting flop Manik again cursed his fate. He did all this drama just to do some romance with her but she wasn't even allowing him to move. He started mesmerizing her. She was too much concentrated on what she was doing. Then again Manik's wicked brain think of a plan. Nandini will must use the scissors to cut the extra thread. Manik slowly with one hand hide the scissors in his pant's back pocket,which was luckily placed on the table near them. Soon Nandini was done with the stitching thing and then as Manik expected Nandini look here and there to search scissors to cut the extra thread.


"Manik..!! Where is the scissors..?" Nandini looked at him,for the first time during the whole stitching the session she noticed that how much Manik was close to her. He was just looking at her without blinking his eyes. His breath was fanning her face. She slowly moved more close to him and cut the thread with her teeth. Manik smiled and encircled his arms around her. Feeling his arms around her she hugged him. They both stayed like this for some time just feeling each others warmth.


"Nandini..!!" Manik broke the silence.


"Hmmm..!!" Nandini said snuggling her face more in his chest,closing her eyes.


"Thank you..!!" Manik smiled. Nandini opened her eyes and looked towards him in confusion without breaking the hug.


"Thanks for what Manik..?"Nandini asked innocently. Manik again smiled brightly. He had a long list of thank yous for her which he wanted to tell her but not now. He wanted to make her feel special before all this he had to help her to overcome her fears.


"Thanks for this Button..!!"Manik changed the topic and Nandini smiled.


"No need..!! Mr.Malhotra..!!" Saying that Nandini closed his button. Manik cupped her cheeks and kissed her forehead. Suddenly they heard Nayonika's shouting voice.


"Manik..!! Nandini..!! Come fast I am hungry..!!"


"Mama..! Not you this time..!!" Manik said making an angry pout. Nandini again laughed on his craziness.


"Come fast Manik..!!" Saying that Nandini run towards the door,leaving a hell frustrated Manik alone. But before she step out the room he saw her turning he became happy and waited for her to say something.


"And yeah Manik..! Next time na there is no need to break your Button You can call me anytime when you need me...!! You don't have to make "Bahanazzz..!!" To get close to me ok?" Nandini said smilingly. Hearing that Manik's jaw dropped open in shock. "And take that scissors out of your pant's pocket..!! Chubh jye ge..!!" And she left. Manik was shocked as well as happy too. How well she knows him. He smilingly accepted his defeat today was not his lucky day.

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Manik joined Nandini and Nayonika after some time.


"So Mama..!! How was your visit to your friend?" Manik asked cheerfully.


"Well..!! It was good..!!" Nayonika replied smilingly. "You both enjoyed each other's company..?" Nayonika asked with all her motherly affection. MaNan looked at each other. They both smiled and Nayonika got her answer.


"Nandini..!! Will you please get the butter from fridge?" Nayonika asked Nandini and she noddingly left to get the butter. Nayonika asked Nandini to get the butter because she wanted to ask Manik a question.


"Manik..??" Nayonika said in a lower voice.


"G Ma..!!" Manik said chewing his sandwich.


"You are happy na? Do like Nandini..?? I know they way you both married...!!" Nayonika asked with a doubt she left her sentence incomplete. Manik smiled on her concern and put his hand on hers.


"Mama..!! I am more than happy..!! Yes I do like her..!!" Manik said in a assuring tone. Manik wanted to tell her that he love Nandini but before he could say something he saw Nandini coming with the butter so he kept quiet. Nandini handed over the butter to Nayonika and sat beside him. He smiled at her and she smiled back.


After finishing the breakfast he hugged Nayonika and walked outside as usual Nandini followed him. They both reached to Manik's car. Manik turned to her and she smiled,the smile which was only reserved for him. Manik look her tip to toe. He was so busy in romancing with her that today he didn't noticed her dressing, she was looking different but very cute, in that knee length frock she was looking like a choto doll. Manik smiled at her.


"Aj kuch special h..??" Manik asked lovingly.


"What special..??" As usual she become confused.


"No I mean you are looking different..!!" Manik said smilingly.


"Achi ni lag ri..?? Should I change?" Nandini asked worriedly this time Manik laughed.


"Ufff Nandini..!! You are looking beautiful..!!" Manik said cupping her cheeks,and Nandini become relax. "And yeah thanks for letting your hair open..!!" Manik said running his fingers in her hair,Nandini smiled.


"Ok now you go..!!" Nandini pushed him so that he leave Manik quickly kissed her on her cheeks and sat in the car. He was about to start the car when he remembered something. He lowered the window and Nandini leaned closer to him,bent on the window.


"Now what..??" Nandini asked lovingly.


"Woo..!! Nandini I don't have your cell number..!!" Manik said sadly. "Such a dumb husband I am..!!"


"Hahahaha..!! You are a perfect husband Manik..!!" Saying that Nandini leaned more closer to him.Listening to this Manik forgot what he was asking to her and he also moved closer.


"Really..??" Manik said seductively.


"Really..!!" Nandini also said in the same tone and grabbed a pen from Manik's car dashboard and lifted Manik's hand and wrote something. Manik was too much engrossed in the moment that he didn't noticed what Nandini was doing. Suddenly Nandini put his hand between their faces. And Manik frowned.


"What is this Nandini..?"Manik asked angrily.


"Mr Romeo..!! It's my cell number..!!" Nandini said naughtily. Manik noticed that she had wrote her cell number on his hand. He smiled and started the car. Nandini moved away from his car. And waved him a goodbye. Manik drove away smilingly.

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Ok that's it for today. I hope you all liked it. Full with MaNan romance. In next update Manik will talk to Janvi aunty about Nandini's fears. I am sure you will like her because I have a very interesting role for her, her role will be short but mzaydaar. In this update that button scene is my favorite. Tell me yours? Thank you for all the lovely and sweet sweet comments. I love you all...!! Keep spreading love and Keep shining. Do comment and hit like button I am waiting..!!


Lots of love..


Mawara

Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Manik Malhotra is too much ❤️ but he is Manik and everything is fair when it comes to him ..
Wonderful update :D
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: manya_189

Manik Malhotra is too much ❤️ but he is Manik and everything is fair when it comes to him ..
Wonderful update :D

yeah seriously he is too much 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow... once again u penned down so well.
manan romance. .. n romantic n frustrated manik so cute...
loved d update...
n ya will wait for d nxt update. ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Too much cutiee love wala update I just loved it yar 🤗


Waiting for nxt part dear ⭐️

Gr8 job 😉

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