!!MANAN SS!! FRENEMIES turned LOVERS...chapter-6 A updated/ 28-8-15 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Hey mish
Both the parts were awesome
Jealousy definitely works 😛
And Nandu accepted the same is a shock for manik
I really cant wait for the nxt part

Love,
Poonam
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Lovely
Loved how nandini answered soha
Manik in shock
Wow awesome
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: pooh2015

Hey mish
Both the parts were awesome
Jealousy definitely works 😛
And Nandu accepted the same is a shock for manik
I really cant wait for the nxt part

Love,
Poonam



Thanqu poonam...there's lot more to it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Hiee friendzz...thanqu for your comments ...today I was not doing to update this chapter as today only I updated a chapter in my ff ( LOVE...selfish and selfless) and it was too emotional and intense which made my readers cry...so to give them am myself a break...here comes a hilarious chapter...

This post is dedicated to my crazy roomie Gulkeerat...cozy i heared song which is in this chapter from her ancestral cellphone...and got idea of writing thiss chapter...

Chapter 3 - payback time...really???

"Yes I am sorry .I am jealous"

Shock would be understatement for manik, as out of all her excuse list, he didn't expected this as answer nandini smirked at his expression

"I feel sorry for these judgemental bimboos and their boring lives...and I m little jealous as I wish I to had that much time to worry about things that are none of my business"

Nandini mentally patted herself and said " I'll just grab a drink , excuse me" leaving a dumbstruck manik behind. Manik took his time to come back to his senses

She never falls to amaze me.This is just the beginning manik. Their is a long journey ahead with this girl.' He said to himself while taking a deep breath to prepare himself as the roller coaster ride has just started and followed nandini

"Monster... Are your so called happening parties are this lifeless..."

" hmm ...yeah...not really...why ??? Aren't u enjoying yourself"

"Of course...I am absolutely enjoying this dead silence "said nandini sarcastically

Wrong move! His brain screamed out

"Monster ...what u actually do ...I mean enjoy in this party"

"That's a secret "

" com'on monster manik ...stop acting like a kid...speak up..."

"Hmmm..." Said manik rubbing his hand gently and roaming his eyes around the hall

"Okay...here u go...can u see that lady with a wine glass in her hand who is standing in that group ... She is having an insane urge to throw the glass of wine on the lady exactly opposite to her...but she is not able to do that in public but she will definatly do something to take revenge...just wait for ...I guess 5 minutes"

Nandini keenly kept looking at the lady.and she felt her eyes coming out of socket when she saw the lady deliberately spilling wine on others dress and while apologizing she rubbed the spot with dirty tissue making sure that the mark never goes off
Nandini looked at manik's proud smirking face

"Who are you"nandini said with shock written on her face

"Sorry????" Manik said as his eyebrows squinted in confusion

"Are u Sherlock homes..."said nandini will pulling arnavs cheek to check if it is real "nah..then u are somewhat like ChuCha"

"Chu...WHAT" said manik, not understanding what was going in her head

"Yeah the guy in movie fukrey...he used to dream and his friend would make lottery no. from it "

Manik looked horrified . it scared the hell out of him even imagining himself as the character.
"You crazy cow...how can u compare me with that jumbo...girl die for my one glance ... And here u are comparing me with someone I can't imagine even "manik sighed disgustingly which made nandini giggled...

"By the way...how do u do it...I mean how u judge it what's going in someone's mind"

"Ahh...its just about observation of their gestures, body language...you can tell what's going in their mind..."

"now I can tell 2 women behind u are shamelessly checking me out..."manik whispered in her right ear in most husky voice.

His heavy breaths sweeping her skin in gentle caresses made her close her eyes. He was closer than she had anticipated and his intense eyes were fixed on her face, making an electric current run down her spine.

She unconsciously licked her dry lips and his eyes darted towards them. He smirked looking at the effect he has on her. He gently caught hold on her left wrist

"Definitely more than 100 beats per minute"

"Huh?"nandini letting out in confusion

"Your heartbeat. its going wild sweet heart "he deliberately brushed his lips with her earlobe

"You can actually hear it!!!!" Nandini Cried out in disbelief .as soon as her own words sank in she blushed to roots of her hair. Manik was amused by her reaction

Not knowing how to react she hurriedly turned around to leave before she hear her name being announced ...

She jerked her attention towards stage ... She found Soha throwing wicked smile on her...and said
"Ladies and gentlemen...I hope u r enjoying yourself ...and to add to make night more Ecstatic ...I would request Ms Nandini murthy to sing for us...welcome her with a big round of applause.."

Nandini frozed and blood rushed to her head which could blast any time at that bitch...god nerve of this s**t...

Manik face was expressionless but his eyes full of anger(how dare she...she will be paying back heavily for messing with my girl...which she will regret he while life...I promise she is not gonna smile after tonight)

"Manik can I stab her right now"nandini said with half pleading and half ordering voice While throwing daggers towards Soha

"Hell no...go I know u can sing"

" and when did u heard me singing"

" ahh...yah...once I heard u half singing song "sadda haq" while u were in washroom"

Nandini's lips turned into perfect 'O' in shock. Manik chewed hid inner cheek to stop himself from laughing
"Monster manik , there is no half singing...u are either lata mangangeshkar or Meryl streep "

" com'on my lata streep u can do it"

"Will u please keep ur polio effected sense of humor aside and concentrate on the problem in hand"nandini literally blasted at manik

"Okhy ...I m sorry...I was just encouraging u "said manik with a puppy face

"Yeah right"Nandini rolled her eyes

"Ohky listen nandini...I know u can sing very well ... I heard it many times...don't be nervous ... Just look at me and sing...forget the world around u.."manik said holding nandini by shoulder and looking intensely in her eyes

"Manik...but the number I sing... Are meant to be sing in such high profile parties" nandini said worriedly

"Nandini what ever u sing...sing naturally ...feeling it...and shut this f***ing bit** up ..."manik said with utmost sincerity.

Seeing calmness and sereneness on his face she felt herself protected and assured that someone is their watching her back...

Manik squeezed her hand gently in encouragement...she jerked her head up and walked towards the stage with determination to kill two birds with on stone...manik and that bitch
She confidently held the mike and begin

Tumse keh denge hum saari baatein
Kaise hain apne din kaisi raatein
Koi na koi hulchul rehti hai dil mein
Har pal lok hai kehte paagal humko

Nandini jerked her head up and looked straight in maniks eyes intensely.manik was surprised by the choice of her song and a smirk played on his face(nice move love...u srsly never fail to surprise me)

By the way, on the way
Humko jo mili hai zindagi
gaati hai, hass ti hai
Pagli si hai zara
Roothey bhi maane bhi, har lamha nayi hai zindagi
Moody hai zidi hai, kya karein kya pataa
Rukte hain kahan hum rok se
Chalte hain hawa ke jhonke se
Apni toh aisi hai zindagi
Yehi apni adaa hai kya karein
Koi bura jo maane kya karein
Humse toh hai khafa ab sabhi
Jaane do chodo bhi

Nandini sang out passionately... Manik was mesmerised by her singing...(this girl is full of life and endless surprises...she is innocent and kiddish but mature at same time...she is beautiful and flawless which can make anyone go weak at knees but she gave damn about it ...she is strong for world around to face any situation in hand...and sometimes cry like a kid...what ever she is ...she is wholely solely mine...)

She strode across the room
Stood near Soha giving her a mischievous smile and Soha gave her a disgusted look...nandini chuckled ...
Nandini walked across the hall and reached where Manik stood mesmerised by her beauty. She coyly looked up to look at him with a seductive smile.
He blinked trying to digest the scene in front of him. she winked at him which was a sign to concentrate on the next line and not on her face.

Dhadkan ki jo kahani hai
Khul ke ab toh sunaani hai
Bhool nahi sakta hai isko hai jisne suna,
suna na
Kya cheez hai yeh jawani hai
Jo baat hai deewani hai
Socho ge toh jaano ge, rasta kyun humne chuna,
socho na

She sang while looking at him seductively and he smiled while concentrating on the lyrics with hope that she was singing for him only.

By the way, on the way
Jab dil se hui thi dosti
Humne di dil mein bhi
Tha yeh vaada kar liya

She saw Soha walking towards manik from corner of her eye. She immediately twirled round in such a way she stood beside manik and between Soha and manik.

Nandini sang directly looking in soha's eyes full of anger giving her a victorious smirk she sang

Jo bhi ho, humko toh darna hi nahi hai ab kabhi
Jab hame jo laga, humne wahi keh diya

Manik scratched his forehead , avoiding people to see him giggling at nandini's antics as he could clearly see invisible smoke coming out soha's ears seeing her plan getting back fired

She looked at the audiance which started snapping their fingers, enjoying the song

Manik's chest swelled proudly seeing her appreciated by people...
(No one can escape nandini's charm)
manik sighed dreamily...

So guys how was it...please do comment ...and do hear this song along the update...eager to read your replies and views about it...I may not be able to pm u guys today...but will do it surely tomorrow...plz guys those who need pmz ..plz buddy me...all the soha haters this chapter is dedicated to u ..happy reading...stay happy and blessed...

I will be adding people in my buddy list who asked me for pmz...so that I don't miss any one...
Edited by mishshergill - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
ohk ...i loved the concept
frenemies ..soo damn cool ...
also can u pm now on ...
loved the story till now.
keep writing gurl 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
This is great...loved how she took up the challenge and the way they both are playing with their feelings... and a great revenge tactic too...looking forward to more...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
awesome...loved it
manan awww so cute...and loving their silence love
loved how she took up the challenge
continue soon
thanks a lot for the pm
take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Haha! Such a lovely update..
Loved it to the core...
Awesome work...
Continue soon :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Super!!! Love your dialogues... They are so cool... Thanks for the PM. Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aavani

awesome...loved it
manan awww so cute...and loving their silence love
loved how she took up the challenge
continue soon
thanks a lot for the pm
take care


Thnx a lot...glad to know dt u like it

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