!!MANAN SS!! FRENEMIES turned LOVERS...chapter-6 A updated/ 28-8-15

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Hi ky2 fans...Hi I am misha ... I am starting a manan SS ...

It will last in 5-6 chapters...Here manik and Nandini are 'FRENEMIES'... they neither can't stand each other nor can stay with out each other... It is a story of their confessions...its is full of romance and humour...non jhoks and J FACTOR too...

Chapter 1 : weird invite

"Don't tell me cupcake, you haven't move from her since ages"Manik said while sitting next to Nandini

"Okay I won't" Nandini shrugged

"Why u always choose to spend your time sprawled on the couch and munching all the time in front of this idiot box of your's"

"Monster Manik...every on doesn't have a life as exciting as your ... Not all the people are invited to attend lavish parties"

"So you should be grateful to me ... I just bought u one"

" I don't have much time to waste on you...come to the point"

"Neither do I..."

" what's the point Monster"in
irritated voice

"I want u to join me tonight for a party tonight ..."

She froze ( did he just asked me out...shut up Nandini ...its next to impossible...he is just making a fool out of u...like srsly...do u really think Manik is willing to take you out...)

"What do you expect as an answer"Nandini said coldly

" absolutely a yes..."

( there is for sure everything fishy...watch out Nandini)

" NO"

"I know it ...good for me ...now I don't have to tag a gigantic beach ball along with me...u owe me for this cupcake"

"What did u just call me...u Grinch"

" what u just heard... Rotten apple"

"Oh please...u r jealous...I m sexy and I know it ..."said Nandini cheerpingly

" prove it" Manik said mockingly

"I don't have to prove it to u ...out of the whole world"

"Scared???"

"Huh...scared!!!...My foot..."

"Then prove it millennium behenji"

" bring it on"

"Tonight 7 "

"Done"
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"Navya..don't u think its too revealing ...I mean don't u think I m over done"

"U are asking me this question for last 2 hours...get lost ... By the way u r late..."

"Oh freak...plz god save me from his punctuality lecture" said Nandini breezily toward the door...

"Why Aiiappa why ...why u always have to say lol...whenever I say I am happy now...can't my ragged jeans and with my crop top ever work for it...stupid me...first accepting that idiotic challenge and to add oil in fire...out of all I had to request Navya to dress me up...just too god..."said Nandini

She could feel gaze on her...as she raised her head with smile she could see Manik looking towards her with complete shock and his jaw touching the floor
...her check turned into deep red.

she lowered her head to hide her blush from him...as she walked up to him...and their eyes made a contact...they got lost into each other taking in the beauty of each other.

"Shall we"Nandini asked not fully meeting his intense eyes

"Huh...hmmm...yeah ...sshh...sure.."Manik stammered before he came back to his senses...he opened a door for her..
And drove silently...

"Do u know weigh of polar bear"

"What...I don't know"
Manik Said with surprise at her question, was still under nandini's effect

"Okay that was enough to break the ice...so tell me fast I won the challenge"

"And care to explain how did u assume that"

"Oh plz Monster Manik... It was clearly written on your face...when u saw me..."

" sorry to burst ur bubble ...but I have dated more breathtaking girls than u "

" so u agree that I look breathtaking..."

"Feel free to console your heart with whatever words u like"although he knew he was shearly denying the fact but he dare not admit it to her

" by the way..From when did u started reading me" asked Manik teasingly

" from the day, when I got a major disease by eating in your pplate" Nandini told disgustedly

"Love disorder"Manik said grinningly

"Don't flatter yourself...you are not that good to be one" ssaid Nandini though she knew it was complete lie.

"If u say so"Manik said as his lips curved in smirk

"Hmmm what do you think about love" Nandini mentally slapped herself for saying it

As shock would be understatement for Manik
"Why are u asking it..."

"Nothing, just to start a small talk..as we are still long way to go..."

"Hmm..."

Their was awkward silence between the which was broken by Manik'sthick voice
"Love is knowing all about someone, still wanting to be with them more than anyone else...love is when someone becomes a permanent reason for u to smile...when someone who not promises to fix all your problems but promise that you won't face them all alone...
May be she is someone in the world...but for me she is one in my world...
Love is giving someone power to destroy u but trusting them not to...
Love doesn't make your world go round but love is what makes ride worth it"

"I never knew u have such deep thinking about love"
Nandini whispered with was enough for Manik to hear

"Not only thinking but also feeling" Manik mummered under his breath

"U said something"

"Huh...nothing"

"So where u r gonna find your lady.. Because it rear to find pure heart with perfect beauty... As I always thought u would marry some super hot model of page 3..thats nice"

"Sexiness wears thin after a while and beauty fades but to find someone who makes you laugh every day that's a real treat for me"

"Your wife is gonna be the very lucky to have u and u r gonna be a amazing lover"

"I know that"manik said grinningly,thinking that little did she know it was and will always be her

"Your turn "

"No Manik, its really crazy...it very different and may appear weird to u...but that's what I feel about it"

"Oh come on khushi ...don't be a spoilsport ..."

"Love for me is not right fit right shoe...love is not about a fairytale with flower , hearts and happy ending...being in love is being selfish and selfless ...selfish as to whom u love the most ,u wanna give them least pain and cannot share with anyone... selfless as in when u give all your world to see a smile on their face and even let it go for his smile coz when we are in love , love gives us courage where courage has to do nothing with being fearless its about willing to experience fear even dread, without any guarantee of outcome..."

"That's really extraordinary love definition.in which u believe...very few are that strong like u ...

"Unless it is mad, passionate, and extraordinary love, its waste of time .
And there are so many mediocre things in life...
Love shouldn't be one of them"said Nandini as she saw a impressive smile on manik's face

"Hope you find your man soon..."

"I hope my man finds me soon"thought Nandini wondering about manik


Phew!!! How was it...thankyou guys for reading it...I have lot more stored for you...please do comment and share your views about it...oh please make me wwin the bet...i really dont want to clean the room...I need maximum comments to update it sooner...

Love u tonzzz
Mish

index
chapter 1- page 1
chapter 2- page 2
Chapter 3- page 4
Chapter 4- page 7
chapter 5- page 11
Chapter 6 - page 18
Yipiee!!!! Finally got a beautiful banner for my short story...
All credit goes to cute-aly...
Please tell me how is it

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsm start
loved it
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heyyy mishuuu Congo girl 4 ur story it's very interesting yr don't worry I will make u win
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its really beautiful
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hey...
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brilliant beginning
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manan thinking abt love is awesome
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Seeing the response I realized that my first chapter don't reach your expectation... So I am back with another update where I have given my 100% and I can proudly claim it to be my most time consuming and most wittest and ofcouse hilarious...hope u like my piece of work...

CHAPTER 2 - JEALOUSY WORKS?

Soon Manik pulled his lavish car to stop at gates of a 7 star hotel and ever dashing handsome Manik malhotra stepped out and he strode to otherside of the car and offering his arm confidently to breathtaking lady an nandini defined word ' 'beauty' perfectly in her deep red floor length backless coctail gown as she walked up to manik and wound her hand around his muscular bisecp and as they walked towards gigantic glass door of hall.manik felt nandinis grip getting stronger around his arm and he could sense her discomfort.

He leaned toward nandini and whispered in smiling voice" I know u are not used to it..just give a genuine smile and a confident gesture ...that's it...don't worry I m not gonna leave your side ever"

Nandini was surprised by his sudden gentleness and meaning of his last sentence but don't dare to point it out because she didn't want moment to end.

As they entered the hall , they were welcomed by excited exclamation and sighs from the crowd with restless flashes of cameras

Her lips curved into adoring smile as she walked through the crowd confidently with her arm wounded around the most handsome eligible bachelor of the country.she could even see many girl drooling over him.

"Hello Mr malhotra... Its an honour to have u with us tonight..."

"Thnqu Mr singhania..." As they greeted each other with a friendly handshake

"Mr Malhotra ... Won't u introduce us to beautiful lady beside u "

"She is Nandini...Nandini murthy, my friend..."

Nandini felt a bit dejected by manik's response
"Hello beautiful lady...nice to meet u.."

As elderly man held her hand and kissed it gently . manik felt his blood boiling

" I must say u are looking absolutely stunning tonight"

" thankyou ,Mr Singhaniya "
Nandini said with a little smile .

Suddenly she feel maniks hand around her waist.she feel shivers all around her body.she instantly looked into manik's eyes filled with anger or may be jealously...

Please make yourself comfortable"
"Sure Mr singhaniya.." Said Manik not breaking eye contact

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He was so sweet and cute...and I must say handsome too" sighed Nandini dreamily

"If u can find this oldie who is twice your age is..CUTE...than I m not surprised that u are still single"said a horrified manik

"Will u keep ur trap shut monster.manik...what u think of yourself ...huh"

"I think for that u can just roam your eyes around the hall"

She could see ladies without age restriction were shamelessly oogling and drooling over him and she could feel many eyes on me burning with jealousy

"I guess u got ur answer...what I am...and mean to them"said manik in husky voice

Her blood boiled listening to his statement. But before she could reply she saw a girl with good for nothing clothes literally threw herself on him

"Oh manik...long time...where u have been"

"Hi too u too Soha..."manik said still recovering from the shock

"I have missed u so much...and u r looking as dashing and sexy as ever"she said in a seductive tone...manik saw nandini burnind into ashes ...

A plan hit him and with a smirk
" you too are looking absolutely stunning"manik said"

(What the hell!!!! Did I just heard right. ...did he just praised this bimbo with handkerchief size dress...and not even uttered a word to me...and here I went through all the torture with dressing up...damn u manik...)nandini thought as
the shock on nandinis face deepened and she made a frowed face.

" oh manik...I tried to contact u through social networking sites...but u never responded"

" oh...I m sorry ...I dint recognize u...may be..."
Before manik could come up with something

"Why don't u try to stop editing your photographs on social sites ,how do u expect us to recognize u if u look like Beyonce on Facebook and chief keef in person" said nandini sarcastically

Of all the things he had expected, this was not on the list. Manik scratched his forehead with his finger, not knowing whether to laugh out loud or hug her right then and there for her cuteness.

"Excuse me!!! what did u just say ... "

"What don't want to hear and may be all the while u have been consoled by your friend about ur looks..." was nandini's disdainful reply.

Manik with some effort killed the cackle, tripping his throat

"U bitch...what do u think of yourself"

"Oh being crabby bitch is part of my charm u see"

"So u think u are one in million kind of girl"

"Ahh...absolutely not...I am ONCE in a LIFETIME kind of a WOMAN"scowling, nandini said emphasising on every spoken word

Soha just continued to gawk at her like nandini had grown two heads.

"We need to talk manik" said Soha "privately." With out breaking eye contact with her as word were meant for her

Nandinis eyes grew the size of saucers and she opened and closed her mouth when she heard manik agreeing to it , before she frustratedly stomped her feet on the ground and stalked off, but not before giving manik a deadly glare.

Manik knew it was getting out of limits and he said yes to Soha to give her a piece Of his mind as he couldn't stand the way Soha spoke to her

"Baby ... I missed u so much " she put her arms around his neck
"I know manik ... u can never fail to recognise my face...I cab tell u want me"said soha almost sticking to manik like a second skin

"I never forget a face , but in your case, I'd be glad to make an exception...and I want u to leave"

"Oh go on...don't be shy manik...just ask me out"

"Okay 'get out' ... Don't dare u come near my Nandini ...consequences will not be good"

Soga angerly stomped her foot she huffed in other direction with determined look of making nandini payback for her insult...

Manik plastered a slight smile on his face to hid his red angry expression as no one dares to mess with manik's girl...but he was amused and glad by nandini's jealousy ...as he walked through the hall and found nandini eating or may be murdering food...and huffing in annoyance...he could feel himself under her fork being brutally killed...

Caution to be noted for increasing your life expectancy - keep one arm distance from all your ex and don't talk to them and nandini at same time. Both species must be handled with caution and one at a time.

Manik sighed and rolled his eyes heavenward as if asking for strength and safety tonight...and walked confidently to nandini as if nothing happened...

"Control nanz control...U have to be more patient around this rotten apple..." Nandini mummered under her breath, unaware of arnavs presence, which was heard by manik...

( Get ready monster...its gonna be a long night ..wait a sec...did I just called myself MONSTER...god..this girl is gonna drive me insane)

Manik thought clearing his throat
"So enjoying the party." Manik said hiding his nervousness

"So u got time from your bimbo to acknowledge my presence to.."

"Before you criticize someone.. U should walk a mile in there shoes"

"When u criticize them then u are mile away and you have their shoes"nandini snapped back
"Woah!!! Young Lady...I think u should learn behaving nicely ... Poor her"nandinis jaw fell.she couldn't believe the nerve of this man

"I can't believe this...I just can believe this...here it was eating me up alive and I had to put all my energy from ripping off that bitch's head and here u .."

"Why"nandini asked in a stern voice though he was feeling thoroughly amused by her jealousy

"What why.."nandini said stabbing the piece of meat with more than required force and chewing it mechanically...while glaring at him

"Why did u wanted to rip off shilpa's head"said manik throwing nandini a questioning look and he was giggling very badly in his mind seeing all the expressions on nandinis face...and the pout...he just wanted to smack his lips on hers...but he controlled...

(Why He always have to rub me wrongly...always pressing my wrong buttons at wrong time...jackass)
" because I ..." Nandini stopped in middle cursing herself for blurting out without thinking...( super canary shit...what Was I going to say...wat will manik be thinking of me...aiiappa ..what to do..)

"Because i what"Said manik raising his one eyebrow...

Nandini gave him a sheepish grin hiding her nervousness and also getting time for thinking( think nanz think...otherwise this cupcake won't let me live in peace)

"Yes I am sorry .I am jealous"

Shock would be understatement for manik v as out of all her excuse list, he didn't expected this answer

So guys!! How was it...please do comment and like ...share your views about it...other wise I I'll be claimed as god...Lol...srsly silent readers...and yes I need guess about what acc to u is coming next...I am eagerly waiting to read your guesses and views...they will help me to improve and motivate to write further even better...

Love u all
Mish
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m luvin it...plzz do cont soon... it was jst awesome
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Originally posted by: apps33

m luvin it...plzz do cont soon... it was jst awesome


Thnqu..😃😃

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