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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Excel00703

Hi I read your ff today I loved can you pm me when u next update



thanku

send mee rqst.. it's easy for mee then to pm u :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: DWJensenackles

Hey! I started reading your FF today and Man! I salute you.👏👏

Perfect mixture of comedy and drama!
Please PM me if its not a problem :)
Love, Pari😊



thanku so much :D
i'll try
send mee rqst.. then it is easy for mee to pm u guys :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Aww how sweet just not to make her feel bad he ate entire halwa... Too cute continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Read all this in one go... waiting for nxt... plz pm me when u update... love ur writing..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
nice one... love reading ur ff... continue soon. ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Hey, Just read all the parts today
Must say its very interesting and mind blowing
And Manik's sister's name is Roshni (my name)😆 😆
Just loved it
Cont soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
Hai your story is very nice I really loved it please continue ur writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
PART-20

he sat on sofa in front of her..
manik-so nandani, tell mee something abt u
nandani- luks at him..
manik- I mean we are friends nw to its good to knw abt each other.. u knw..
NANDANI- bol to aise rhe ho dost Nhi mere boyfriend ho.. she said with a smirk on her face..
manik is embarass
nandani start laughing after seeing his face - relax I'm joking..
manik-ha to I'm ur boyfriend..
NANDANI- shocked) - what
manik- ha to I'm boy nd ur friend.. to hua na ur boyfriend..
nandani- start,blushing.. nd lil embarrass.. ohh lyk that
manik- saw her blushing.. to tumne or kya samjha tha.. nandu.. nd start laughing
nandani- embarass nothing maine kuch ni socha tha.. she fumbles wo wo mujhe pani peena hai nd she ran into kitchen..
manik walk behind her.. he saw her drinking water..
he unknowingly start walking toward her.. he put his both hands on her waist.. nd pull her .. he kissed her on her neck.. nd mummrs in her ears.. bolo na nandu kya socha tha,tumne..
nandani- his breath tickle on her neck.. she blush.. nd close her eyes.. manik again kissed her neck..
nandani- try to ran away from his grip..
but manik is being manik.. he didn't let her go..
he pinned her,to refrigrater.. nandani eyes is closed.. manik want to see his face in her eyes.. he hold her chin with his index finger..
manik- kissed her on her right cheek then on left..
nandani- is blushing lyk anything.. her cheeks becomes red.. suddenly manik leaves her.. nd start walking backward he didn't knw why he did that he thought now what is,she thinking abt mee she is my friend nd what I did.. now he is angry on himself.. nandani- opens her eyes saw manik is going.. she call him.. he stops but didn't look back..
nandani-manik where ar u going..
manik- nandani bhot late ho gya hai tumko ab jana chahiye..
nandani- but manik
manik- (angrily) I said go..
nandani- has tears in her eyes nobody never talk to her in such harsh tone.. she ran away from there.. she was coming out from manik house when she bumped to cabir.. cabir saw tears in hers eyes..
nandani said sorry to him nd ran into her car nd leave from there..
cabir saw her leaving
cabir- yeh yaha
mukti - yr,yeh ladki,kitna girti padti hai
dhruv-but,yeah yaha kya kr ri hai
navya-manik or iska fr jhgdra to ni hogya..
alia - yr mera nail tut gya..
al look at her lyk she is sum alien
alia-mujhe,aise kyu ghoor re ho
cabir- isko kl say horlics pilao.. thodi akl aye isko
alia-cabir she hit on his shoulder..
navya-but cabir
cabir- yahi khade khade sari mahabharata padhni hai.. ya manik say puchne k liye baki chodna hai..
he drag everyone inside..
they look for manik everywhere but manik was nt there.. then cabir says he must be in his room.. nd they al went to manik room..they were standing outsyd of his room.. nd were thinking billi k gale mai ghanti kaun bandhega :P nd al luk at cabir.. cabir - what mai.. ??
al-haa (together)
cabir- kya pagal ho gye ho.. wo mujhe bina pakaye aise he hlaal krdega
navya- plz baby tum use baat karo I'll do ur head massage..
cabir-sarcastically Jb head he ni rahega to massage kispe karegi..
navya- cabirrr
cabirr- ok I'm going do I have any another option..
navya -no nd push him in manik's room

precap- same
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Roshni8

Hey, Just read all the parts today

Must say its very interesting and mind blowing
And Manik's sister's name is Roshni (my name)😆😆
Just loved it
Cont soon.


wow really
what a coincidence man :P
I purposely name her roshni..
and look roshni (u) reading my story :D :P
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
He is falling for her too hard that at times he can't control himself around her which is so unexpected for himself

Totally loved it too much need more parts asap

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