manan ss Aadhe Aadhe Poore Hain Hum UPDATED( PART 6 PG 17) - Page 9

It was lovely and so emotional. I read all part in go. Plzzz update next part. Can't wait to read further

amazing update
loved reading
after a long wait
worth waiting
cont soon
tanq fr Pm

Wow,I literally cried the way you portrait manik's pain.I felt it too

Amazing update !!! Hope manan to be together .
Will be waiting

Lovely update

um katti wid ew.
aftr waiting fo long u made me cry.
maniks pain ws wll portrayed.
kidu update.

emotional and awesome update
loving cabir and nandini bonding a lot
flashback scenes was brilliant
continue asap
take care
thanks a lot for the pm

5. Yrs...more man...pls make them 1...pls pls

Part 5 b

Manik was sitting on a chair totally exhausted after the performance,they were sitting in the backstage fab3 were standing near him evry body was trying to sooth him with their words ,but only he knew wat want he wanted at that point of time

Dhruv: manik its ok ,kabhi kabhi ho jaa ta hain,tu ne itne saalon se nahi gaya na isliyeee

Alya: ya dhruv is right manik, may b that's y all ur love for music came out at that time

Mukti: chill manik, its ok,jo bhi reason ho,teri aaj ki performance jhakaas thi

Manik just simply nodded to all their comments,by the time many fans came over there to get autograph from their rockstar,but manik was in no mood for all these,girls were hooting,manik was avoiding all those,fab3 also got busy with heir fan encounters,manik was left alone

Male voice: hey rockstar can I get an autograph

Manik turned his face to see the person,it was abhimanyu,nandini's abhi...

Manik: just gave him a fake smile

Abhi came near him and asked for a walk,after a battle with his own motions nd feelings manik agreed for it

They started walking on the same road on which he was there with nandini some time ago

Abhimanyu: hey maan!! it was really mindblowing

Manik: hmm .thanks

Abhimanyu: lagtha hain dilse gaya hain

Manik: yaa,after a long tym,dil wapas mila hain...I mean music wapaas mila hain

Abhimanyu:oh really !! mujhe toh laga ki tumhare paas dil hain hi nahi,

Manik: matlab

Abhi: I mean jo sirf dusro ke feelings ke saath khelna jaanta hain uske paas dil kahan se hoga

Manik: voh tum nandini...

Abhimanyu: toh tumhe sab kuch yaad hain

Manik: abhi I knw ki sorry kuch nahi hota ,par phir bhi I hav aplogised her

Abhimanyu:sirf ek apology?? Aur tum jaa rahe ho??

Manik: voh mein...

Abhimanyu: ok relax !!bas mein thoda overprotective hoon uske matter mein ,because she is a gem,I cant let anyone hurt her,and jo bhi hua voh puraani baatein hain lets chuck it.

(after moments of complete silence)

Manik:mmm...so u love her a lot

Abhimanyu: ys I do.jitna tum soch bhi nahi sakte

Manik: (he jst nodded his head), its getting late ,I think I shud leave

He shook hands with abhi and walks away

Abhimanyu: par voh wala pyaar nahi jo tum karte ho,aur soch rahe ho

Manik turns to him with a confused luk

Abhimanyu: voh meri behen hain,islye usse itna pyaar karta hoon ,uski itni care karta hoon,itna protect karta hoon

Manik: par rishab...

Abhimanyu: ek bhai banana keliya there is no need of a blood relation, love is enough,jo hum dono ke beech bhahut hain

Manik:( left a sigh of relief) I didn't know ki tum

Abhimanyu: hw will knw manik,u toh left her na ??betrayed her na?? hated her ??

Manik: abhi ,ab mein aur pretend nahi kar sakta ,I...i never hated her,nd cant do it ever in my life...i have only loved her only loveddd...

Abhimanyu: toh phir kyun manik?

Manik: I made a mistake abhi I made a mistake( broke down in front of abhi)

Abhimanyu: mistake ?? voh mistake nahi tha manik it was a crime u killed her,u killed her soul

Manik: mein... I'm so...o..rry

Abhimanyu:sorry?? Can u even imagine wat she went through after that incident, Manik pata hain tumhe I had promised myself jis din mein tumhe dekhunga ,I will kill you,aur mein voh karne bhi wala tha agar uss din nandu ne mujhe roka nahi hota toh

Manik was numb

Abhimanyu: tumhare yeh aansu kya mere nandu ki din aur raatein lauta sakti hain jise usne ro ro kar bitaye thein,jab usne apne apko ek band kamre ke andar chupa diya tha?hmm manik bolo

Manik had nothing to say but luk down and cry silently

Abhimanyu:pata hum sab kitne worried thein,aur rishab voh toh baccha hain ,voh kya samaj pata apni behen ki yeh haalat,pata ek din mere bohut force karne par she opened up,she confessed everthing that happened,at that moment of time I just wanted to kill u...par nandu ne mujhe roka ,and promised me ki she will give us back our old vibrant, bubbly ,nandu...itna sab kuch hone ke baad she didn't wanted to harm u

Manik: but she said has moved on

Abhimanyu: moved on? Yeh moved on kisse kehte hain? Usse jo subah sabke samne haste khelte rahe aur raat ko ek band kamre mein apni saari pain bahar nikaal dhe voh bhi bina koi awaaz kiye tha ki kisi ko yeh na laga ki nandu weak hain... aur tumhe yeh maalom toh nahi hoga na ki nandu ab amms ke ghar nahi rehti

Manik: gave him a questioning look

Abhimanyu: she left her house because of u??

Manik: me??

Abhimanyu: kyunki abhi tak voh paagal tumhe bhool nahi payi,amms ne usse shaadi karne keliye mazboor kardiya,par voh kisi ko dhoka nahi dena chahti thi,pyaar kisi aur se kare aur shaadi kisi aur se,,pata hain usne kya kaha " JIS DIN MEIN MANIK MALHOTRA KO BHOOL JAUNGI US DIN I WILL BE READY FOR IT"aur jo voh pichale 5 saal se nahi kar paayiii

Manik: she loves me

Abimanyu:par u don't deserve it manik

Manik: but I i...

Abhimanyu: mujhe bhi yahi lagta tha ,until I met cabir.

Manik:(surprised) u knw him

Abhimanyu: mmm ..cabir ko invitation meine bheja tha iss college ke behalf pe...actually mein tumhe The Manik Malhotra ko apni behen ka yeh success dhikana chahta tha,aur tumhe apne karma ki saza par then jab cabir explained to me about ur state...

Manik was continuously looking down

Abhimanyu understood him ,and hugged him ,

Abhimanyu: galti toh tumne ki hain,par uski sabse bada saza tumne khud apne aapko de di hain toh ab isse badkar I don't need to do anything

Manik: mujhe...

Abhimanyu: usse milna hain?

Manik broke the hug and nodded in a yes

Abhimanyu: voh wahan hein?( pointed towards a block) hogi,usss music block ke stair case par

Manik in excitement gave him one more hug and ran towards it

Abhimanyu: hey manik

He turned back

Abhimanyu: If one more time u hurt her na...I wont mind spending rest of life in tihaar jail ok??

Manik:(smilingly) don't worry I wont give u that chance

Abhimanyu: thats better, good luck

Manik: noo..my lucky charm is waiting there ...

that's it for nw.only one more chapter is remaining..i hav made abhi a little hatke a protective brother kind of person .hope u all liked it..waiting for ur comments,big one😉..and suggestions are always welcome

You always rock I love your ss...
Cont soon ASAP...
Cant wait for their reunion..

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Keep writing... stay blessed..

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AAROHI...