manan ss Aadhe Aadhe Poore Hain Hum UPDATED( PART 6 PG 17)

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Aadhe Aadhe Poore Hain Hum

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Cabir :Manik darwaza khol na.plss, we r worried for u that's y plzz khol...

Dhruv: buddy pls humse baath kar

Mukti and alya: pls manik open the door

(They all started banging the door,the after lots of efforts door opens slightly)

Cabir :you all just stay here ..i ll go inside

(And he enters the room which was completely dark but in one corner of the room,it was bright due to a small lamp,and cabir cud easily find out the manik was holding it and siting in that corner.cabir went near him and sat down)

Cabir: v were worried manik...this whole day tumne hum mein se kisi se bhi baaat nahi ki..aur nyonika ne kaha ki tu aaj office bhi nahi gaya...wat happened manik

(Manik dindnt utter a single word cabir came closer to him and kept his hands on his shoulder)

Cabir: wat happened manik? Share kar na...

(Manik suddenly broke down and hugged cabir tightly)

Manik:aaj aaj hain...november 20th..

Cabir : oh shit man ,i just forgot yaar,I'm sorry,I'm really sorry(Saying this he broke the hug)agar mujhe yaad hota ,I wud not hav let them come here ...(cabir rubs is back gently,to make him feel better)maanik...its been 5 years,I knw bhool jana itna easy nahi hain,par you shuld atleast try na...aur kitne saal tu iss kamre band rahega ,apne music se dur rahega,apne aapko aur takleef mat deh,jo galti tune ki thi un sab keliye yeh kaafi hain,it high time maanik now u shud live ur life

Manik:life...(saying this his smirks )hw can I hav life wen I killed myself 5 yrs back,and hw can I live a life without her...

Cabir: try to under stand manik...us din musicana night par job hi hua manta hoon ki teri galti hain,par aisa nahi hain na we didnt try humne kitni koshish ki usse dhoondne ki kahan kahan nahi gaye hum,tumne apni galti ka ehsaas toh hua na,u did realize it na...5 saal ho gaye maanik...do u evn rember tu fab 5 ka lead singer cum guitarist tha...u shud move on manik...may b something better is waiting for you

Manik: something better? She was and is the best cabir...a soul less body cannot become a good musician cabir...music ab sirf mujhe dard deta hain mitatha nahi...aur job hi hua it s wasn't simply a mistake ...it was a crime...i killed 2 people...myself and her (tears started rolling down his cheek) socha ki dhruv ke saath khush rahegi,dhruv usse bhahut pyaar dega...but I was wrong..usse toh nandini ko bhoolne mein jyada waqt bhi nahi laga and he moved on with alya..i was the idiot here ,uske infactuation ko pyaar samaj baita aur apne pyaar ko jaane diya...nandini sahi kehti thi I'm a fool I m a fool I m monster jisne uski feelings ki itni sib hi kadar nahi ki

Cabir: cupps his face I knw ki tu aaj bhi uss se bhahut pyaar kar ta hain ,where evr she might bhi...acha yeh bata woh tujse pyaar karti thi na?

Manik: yes...par shayaad abh nahi

Cabir:she loved yur music nah...

Manik: ( he remembers wen nandini told him manik you sing so well during their practice "dil yeh mera bas mein nahi" )yes she loves my music

Cabir: toh dekh who bh yeh chahti hogi na to hear you? Your voice? Your guitar?

Manik: par if she hates me...then

Cabir: if she doesn't then? Voh tume khush dekhna chahti hogi na...toh tumhe nahi lagta ki you shud make her happy atleast nw

Manik:may be cabir...par I don't hink ki I can play guitar any more or sing..uske bina toh mera music bhi incomplete hain ab toh sirf office aur yeh room is my life

Cabir : chill man ...hum sab hain na tere saath

Manik:hmmm

(Cabir once more hugged him tighty)

(Rest of the fab 3 knocks the door..Mukti guys sab teek hain na kya hum andar aa sakte hain)

Cabir: haan aa jao

(All of them enters,)

Alya: oh y is it so dark

(Druv then somehow reaches the switch and lights it)

(All are shocked to see manik like this siting on the floor with a lamp in his hand,his eyes are blood red...)

Mukti come running to him and hugs him

Mukti :wats all this ab bas bhi kar hum tumhe aise aur nahi dekh sakte yaar dekh us raat cabir ke ssath jo kuch bhi hua voh survive kar gaya par tu,abhi bhi wahin atka hua hain

Dhruv: ya buddy apne aap ko blame karna band kar

Alya : ya manik,tumhari carelessness ke vajah se nahi hua ,voh toh bhai tha..

Dhruv : that night...

(Cabir understood maniks restlessness hearing about that night)

Cabir: bas bas...aur nahi.manik is now all right, and I hav a good news for all of u manik aaj se guitar play karega aur gayega bhi, so again fab 5 is back...

Dhruv: keeps his hands on maniks shoulders yeh sach hain kya buddy

Manik simply nods his head

Dhruv :we are really happy manik

Alya:wow...v r back then all of them hav a group hug

Cabir :guys I hav one more news for u...

Alya : wat cabir

Cabir: last night I received a mail from MANGLORE INSTITUTE OF SCIECNE AND TECHNOLOGY ,and theres an invitation requesting us to perform for their Convocation ceremony,so wat say guyz wat shud I tell them

(Manik is shocked to hear ,the word mangalore)

Dhruv: that's also super cool news yaar

Mukti: but cabir its strange na...for last 5 yrs we havnt performed any where still they are calling us ,wen there are many popular bands here

Alya: ya its true...

Dhruv : don't thnk too much na.take it positively

Then all of a suden manik speaks up

Manik: ( tightly holding the lamp)yes we shud perform there at MANGALORE

All are surprised by maniks words

Cabir: if manik is in...then we hav nothing more to think ...so guys lets rock...mangalore v r coming..

(And they again hav a group hug)

So guys this is my next story on manan..do leave ur comments,and give me feed backs...



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