manan ss Aadhe Aadhe Poore Hain Hum UPDATED( PART 6 PG 17) - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
promo


manik: so you love her
abhi: yes,i do...apne aap se bhi jyaada
manik gives him a fake smile and walks away
abhi: par vo pyaar nahi jo tum karte ho
manik turns


nandini: par alya
cabir: wat?? yeh aliya kahan se ayi,she is dhruv's fiance
nandini: what???






im sorry guys i knw that i'm very very very late,my project prestion ,seminar papers, lab exams,evrything was going on thats y i cudnt give the update..i'm really sorry...i promise that by sunday i 'll definitely update,and only 2 more chapters are remaining for this ss to end...

Edited by gaurimenon - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yippee I'm the first
loved it super
kalki chechi
you're back with a bang
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
awesome promo...
waiting for ur update...
take care dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
hoo thanx fo de fab promo gauri...
finally ua back.
um so happy.
ini enik update vegam venam.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome promo dea. ..
Continue soonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 5 A


(Cabir makes nandini look at him ,he wipes her tears,and sits with her,makes her drink water)

Cabir: relax nandini...and meri poori baat suno teek hain?

Nandini nods her head in a yes

Cabir: nandini mein jaanta hoon jo hua sab galat tha aur voh galati manik ki thi...par jaisa tum soch rahi ho vo bhi sach nahi hain

Nandini: matalab?

Cabir: manik ne dhoka tume nahi apne aap ko diya hain,manik loved u,loves u,and will only love

Nandini: cabir wat hell tum kya keh rahe ho?mazak karne ka time nahi he yeh

Cabir: Mazak nahi tha ,it's the ultimate truth

Nandini: cabir pls...wat r u trying to say

Cabir: yeh ki manik sirf tumse pyaar karta hain

Nandini: cabir agar tumhe nahi pata let me inform u,he was the one who ditched me,mein usse chodke nahi gayi thi,usne toh sirf mujhe use kiya apna revenge poora karne ke liye...he's a monster...jisse kisi ki feelings ki parwa nahi hain..

Cabir: enough nandini...meri baat suno...manik didn't leave u bcz he hated u,he left because ...because

Nandini: because

Cabir: usse pata chala ki druv tumse pyaar karta hain...

Nandini: kya??

Cabir: ys nandini u heard it right,uss din musicana opening night ke baad ,after u left dhruv ne manik se apne feelings ke bare mein confess kiya,he also told manik to keep aside his feelings for u,because druv ko laga ki he hates u,lyk all of us ...

Nandini was numb after hearing this she was more shattered nw,till this time she thought manik hated her,and so she tried to hate him,jo usse nahi hua

Cabir narrates the entire story

Flashback musicana night

after that cakewala incident and manan's talk manik returns to hospital delets all her messages and silently cries..next day fab 5 woke up with a good news that they have been offered an album by q label everyone among them were happy except one..thats manik which didn't go unoticed by cabir.he tried to ask him but he gave him lame excuses,cabir decided not to ask him ,and let him confess at the right time. Fab 4 went to college ,they received a grant welcome with a huge crowd of students ,but manik's eyes were searching his nandini she was seen no where he searched her evry where in the college,library,staircase,store room,music room ,navya was also not there.he tried to call her her no. remained unavailable he made druv call her but still it remained the same.manik was becoming restless he decided togo to her house and check,but hw ? wat will he tell her? Wat will she think,so he convinced druv some how to go nd check on her,they drove to her house,they reached

dhruv : tu bhi aa mein akele kaise jaaunga

manik: no ,its ok mein bahar hi hoon,tu jaanta hain na hum dono...

dhruv: ya its ok.

Dhruv rings the calling bell,manik stands behind a wall to get a glimpse of her,and to hear her voice...but chachi comes and opens the door

Chachi: tum ? phir aa gaye? Tum kya mere nandu ka peecha toh nahi kar rahe ?

Dhruv: nahi chachi

Chachi: mein kahan se tumhari chachi bani?

Dhruv: I'm soryy aunty...voh mein nandini se milne aya tha,aaj voh college bhi nahi ayi,aur uska phone bhi unavailable aa raha hein

Chachi: voh isliye ki ,voh yahan nahi hain ,voh apne ghar gayi hain

After hearing this manik comes infront of chachi

Manik: chachi voh kahan gayi hain? Kyun? Apne usse jaane kyun diya? Wapas kab ayegi?

Chachi: relax beta,voh kal raat se thoda depressed thi,competition mein teek se gaa nahi payi na isliye,aur voh apne amms se milna chahti thi ,isliye aaj subah hi rishab aur nandu manglore chale gaye..

Manik: kab lautegi?

Chachi: pata nahi shayad 1 hafte baad?

Manik: kya ek haftaa? 1 week aur mein uske binaa...

Chachi heard him: mujhe laga ki voh tumhe batake gayi hogi,akhir tum uske best friend jo ho,manik tum chinta mat karo,uske pahunchte hi mein tumhe phone kardungi,ya phir usse keh dungi ki uska dost yahan tension se mar raha hain

Manik gave her a fake smile ,manik and dhruv went back

In car

Dhruv: chachi tumhe bohot lyk karti hain na? aur voh toh keh rahi thi tum dono best friend s ho

Manik: ya chachi lyks me I knw,voh kyunki meine ek din rishab ki help kit hi na isliye...mein aur nandini best friends ...nahi hain,chachi always misunderstands us (shayad best friends se bhi jyaada,aur sirf chachi hi hain jo yeh jaanti hain,par ab in sab baatom ka koi matlab nahi),

Days passed by,manik became more restless,guilty day by day,cabir was thrown out his house wen his mom came to knw he's a gay and nw he was with manik,cabir started noticing changes in manik,when manik used to b upset he plays guitar ,but nw he's not evn luking at it,manik again visited chachi,but to his bad luck,they left from there and no one among their neighbours knew that where they were .one day at mid night cabir noticed that manik was not in his bed,he tried calling him ,but no use..next day cabir enquired abt it,but he pretended as nothing happened,for 2 days cabir was observing this ,one night cabir followed him with the help of gps

And he reached near a house,there he saw manik and a watch man having a verbal fight,then some how manik went from there..

Cabir enquired abt this to watchman

Cabir: bhayyaji kaun tha voh ladka ? kya koi pareshaani hain?

Watchman: kya batau beta, pata nahi kahan kahan se aajate hain log ,voh bhi itne raat ko,lagta hain pagal hain

Cabir: kyun aisa kya kiya usne?

Watchman: voh ladka na har roz aadi raat ko yahaan aata hain aur us ghar ke saamne ,upper kidiki ki aur dekhte khade rahte hain,aur mein jaake nahi bulau toh voh subah tak aise hi khade rahega,ek din voh suba 6 baje tak vaise hi khada raha, kitni baar usse samjaya ki vahan koi nahi rahta ,par samjta hi nahi

Cabir: mmm...par yahan kaun rehte thein

Wm: yahaan? Voh moorthy ji ka pariwaar

Cabir: moorthy ?? kya unki koi beti thi

Wm: haan thi na,nandini bitiya ,bahut pyaari bacchi thi,pata nahi ek din gayab hi hogayi,kuch bola bhi nahi

Cabir to himself mera shaq sahi nikla,nandini u r the one,cabir bids goodbye to watchman and and searches manik nw location shown is SPACE

Cabir reaches space,nd sees manik s car parked,cabir searched him everywhere and found him sitting on the staircase

Manik: kahan ho tum nandini? Mein nahi jee sakta tumhare bina,pls wapas aajao,aur mujhe maaf kardo...pls wapas aajao,and started writing in a dairy sorry nandini

After sometime he moved to garden area of college ,cabir too followed him

Manik looking at the sky

Manik: fire flies tum log bhi kahan ho?meri zindagi ki firefly bhi chali gayi,ab voh nahi hain mere life mein roshini barne keliye,jisne mujhe darkness se fight karna sikhya ,ab usne khud mujhe darkness mein bhej diya,par galti uski nahi hain ,meri hain...

Manik spent some more time there,cabir reached home before him.

Manik enterd his room,and sees cabir standing there

Manik: tu so raha tha na

Cabir: tu bhi toh so raha tha na?

Manik: (trying to avoid cabirs gaze )voh bahut garmi thi na islye zara bahar garden mein gaya tha

Cabir: manik jhoot bolna hi hain toh soch samj kar bhol iss November mein itni garmi?aur tere room toh ac hain na? aur kya garden mein jaane ke liye tujhe car ki zaroorat hain?

Manik: (was shocked ,he knew now he cannot escape from cabir,then also he tried) kya tu bhi CID ki tarah,just drive pe gaya tha

Cabir: kahan gaya tha

Manik: voh bas ese hi

Cabir: shouts manik enough is enough tu bata raha hein ya mein batau

Manik: kya

Cabir :har raat mere sone ke baad tu nandinike ghar kyun jata hain jab ki security har baar tujhe dhakke maarkar bhahar nikaaltha hain?college ke staircase mein kya kar raha tha ? garden mein kya kar raha tha?tujhe kya laga mein andha hoon? Tujhe samaj nahi paunga?

Mujhe pehle se hi shaq tha...apni haalat dekhi hain na khaata hain ,na peeta hain, apni aankhe dekh saaf saaf dikh raha hain tujhe soye hua saalon ho gaye hain,aur sabse badi baat tu apne music se chip raha hain,bhaag raha hain?

Manik's eyes started welling up,cabir notices it and hugs him

Cabir: kya ho gaya hain tujhe manik?

Manik breaks down infront of him...mujse galti ho gayi cabir mujse galati ho gayi

Cabir tries to calm him down

(Manik narrates the whole story to him,after it)

Manik:pata nahi cabir mujhe kab usse pyaar hua,harshad was right I was obsessed with her,pehli baar kisi ne manik malhotra par haat utaya voh bhi ek ladki ne...I hated her,par pata nahi kya voh hate tha??par tab bhi hamesha uske pass rehne ko man kartha,jab usse jaan ne lagaa na ,I understood ki har koi relation give nd take par nahi tha...i realized ki mein galat tha, meri soch galat thi ,pata hain cabir jab hum log ladthe thein na tab bhi voh mujhe samaj leti thi,jab pehli baar wen I came to knw abt u na,bina kuch bole hi usne muje samja aur ek solution bhi diya ,and the day wen I saw u nd raghav na mein ussi ke paas gaya tha aur uske ek hug se meri saari pareshaniyan gayab ho gayi

Pehli baar kisi ne manik malhotra keliye pray kiya,blindly trust kiya,promised to shine for me,aur manik malhotra ne pehli baar kisi ko bataya ki usse andhere se dar lagta hain,mera mazak udane ke badale mujhe apne dar se fight karna sikhaya...aur meine kya kya kiyaaa usse thod diya ,I broke her cabir ,I broke her ,voh mujhe kabhi maaf nahi karegiii...(he is completely collapsed nw)

Cabir holds him: yeh kya kiya manik tune? Druv ke liye apni zindagi barbaad kar di? Apni kya tunne toh 2 zindagiyaa barbaad kar di..dhruv toh aaliya ke saath khush hain,voh shayad nandini ko bhool bhi gaya

Pata hain tere iss halat keliye mujhe dhuk toh ho raha hain par usse zyaada mujhe gussa aaraha hain,man kar raha hain ki tujhe zor ka thappad maaron...tu hamesha apne aap ko hamare liye kurbaan nahi kar sakta manik..

Cabir tried maximum to console manik and reduce his pain .cabir also promised manik that he will not tell this to rest of fab 5,and also that he will bring nandini back into his lyf at any cost

Manik cudnt breathe the air anymore where there was no more nandini's presence he discontinued his studies at space and joined business.cabir tried to search nandini every where but all went in vain

fab 5 insisted manik to look for someone in his life,but he denied ...

cabir : manik sab teek keh rah hain u shud move on,tujhe ek partner ki zaroorat hain ,I knw ...bhool jaa usse

manik: tu sab jaanta hain phir bhi...manik ke life mein ek hi partner thi or rahegi,aur ussee bhool jauoon...aakhiri saans thak mein usse nahi bhool sakta ,aur uske baad mein bhi nahi...mein intazaar karoonga uska...

flash back ends

cabir :nandini jo galti usne ki hain ,uski sazaa usse mil chukka hain aur nahii

nandini: (her eyes where red blood,she was like a statue,) par manik ne kaha ki alyaa

cabir: wat alya ? alya is druv's fianc shayad usse laga ho ga ki u have moved on isliye manik ne tumhe aise kaha...voh bas tumhe khush dekhna chahta hain

nandini: khush??? (She smirks)wipes her tears and runs away

Bas aur nahi...hope I have compensated by writing this long chapter...Hope you all liked it..So that's all for now...keep commenting long one,do give ur suggestions ...one more part on the way

Edited by gaurimenon - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Amazing...
But very late..
Plz upload nxt chapter soon...

Thanx for pm...

Keep writing... stay blessed...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Nc update...
After a long wait...
Bt dis wait is soo
swt..
Got a dam gd update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Awesome update 👍🏼
I cried in whole flash back seen 😒
loved it ❤️
come soon🤗
dont take to long
can't wait🤔
Edited by ritikasingh_85 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Wow amazing update dea. ..
Superb loved it
Continue soonnn
Tnx for the pm

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