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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 6

So here it comes the much awaited reunion of manan but not that easily ,bcoz manofying nandini murthy is not an easy task

Nandini was sitting on the stairs,with tears running down from eyes like a waterfall..she heard foot steps approaching her.nd was sure that it wud b none other than manik,she wiped off all her tears.manik came and stood behind her

Manik: ( with a shivering voice) nan...nandini...

Nandini: (stood up and turned towards him asked asked very casually ) hey manik!! Tum??

Manik: (he was shocked by her this behavior) mein... tum...he

Nandini: mein tumhee?? what manik??

Manik: I wanted to tell ki...

Nandini: sorry??

Manik: no...i want to tell u ki nandini I Love u Hamesha

Nandini: (she was startled by his sudden conffesion ,though she was happy deep inside ,but she didn't wanted give up this easily)

Love??voh kya hota hain??do u knw its meaning,u hate me na ,mein toh tumhari class ki nahi hoon phir??and voh bhi 5 saal baad ?? koi happy realization?

Manik:nandini ,jo hua sab galat hua ...dekho give me a chance mein sab teek kar doonga..us din tumhare jane ke baad...

Nandini: dhruv aya tha..and he said ki he loves me,so tumne decide karliya ki lets pass nandini to him ab voh rakhlega right??

Manik: nandini esa nahi hain, I thought ki druv tumhare liye perfect hain .voh bohut achaa hain aur tumbhi usse like karti thi na,so i thought...

Nandini: so u thought ki,tumhare betray karne ke baad ,I ll easily accept druv,and will live happily ever after with him ri8

Manik:nandini..

Nandini: wat nandini manik?? Mein kya koi toy hoon manik,jo tumhare paas tha,aur jab tumhare frnd ko achaa laga u gave it to him,tumne yeh bhi nahi socha ki mein ek insaan hoon,I'm a human being with feelings emotions..and were is my right to choose manik..mein kiske saath jeena chahthi hoon,socha tumne kabhi?? Ek baar bhi nahi na,nd u r telling me that u love me

Manik: no...i luved u ,loves u and will always only love

Nandini: yeh kahaan ka love hua manik,humne ek saath ek nayi shuruvat ki thi,aur pehle hi mujhe raste par chod diya tumne aur chale gaye??

Manik: (came closer to her and cupped her cheeks,)I knw nandini,pls mujhe ek aur mauka do, I knw ki u also love me

Nandini: wat? Who told u ki I love u?? (she jerked off his hands and said) mr manik malhotra let me b very clear to u , I hate u,and I will hate u,and saying this she walks away and says and don't u dare come behind me,mere peeche ane ki koi zaroorat nahi hain,and that's my final decision she intends to walks

Manik: hate karti ho? Toh phir paanch saal intezaar kyun kiya??shaadi kyun nahi ki?? Apna ghar kyun chod diya...??bolo??aur nandini mujhe tumhare peeche peeche nahi aana hain mujhe tumhae saath chalna hain poori zindagi

Nandini: enough manik!!

Manik: kyun truth hurts na?? u love me na?? agar hate bhi karti toh yeh tumhare gale mein kya hain star pendant,tum tho stars ko hate karti hogi na?? and voh guitar ..tumne guitar kyun sikha...nandini ab aur pretend mat karo na admit it ki u love me... Say na u love me ,and had always loved

Nandini cudnt hold back any more she ran towards manik and punched him hard,so hard that his lips started bleeding but this time manik malhotra was just smiling she held his collar ,shook him and strated breaking down

I hate u manik I hate u manik I hate...saying this she started crying her heart out,and kneeled down infront of him,manik also started crying ,he also sat down with her rubbing her back,he just wanted to let her pain flow down that she was holding this long

Manik I did everything ,which will make me forget u ,hate u...pata hain manik jab manglore wapas ayi thi na mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha tha.. bas ye hi soch thi rahi ki y u did that to me,jab ki jo bhi humare life hua ,voh toh kuch bhii planned nahi that,sab kuch so natural ...par phir I taught my self that u hate me because I punched u ,tumhe toh revenge lena tha...

Manik u knw I kept my self so bc in my life ki mujhe tum kabhi yaad bhi na ao,meine apne aap ko ek single second bhi free nahi diya subah 4 bhaje se rihaaz,phir college,then eveng college mein tution juniors ke liye,and sat nd Sunday music classes,aur kya kya nahi kiya meine par phir bhi tum yaad aye pata hain kab,jitni baari "meine saans liya na utni baari",aur pata hain ek baar meine psychologically bhi try kiya,koi chzi hume adaat bana dena ho na ,we have to do it 21times ,21 days continuously aur meine na 21 times har day kaha ki manik malhotra I hate u I hate u,socha ki I will hate u par phir bhi nahi hua phir bhi nahi bhool payi tumhe manik phir bhi nahi par kyun ??manik par kyun??

Manik: bcz u loved me

Nandini: ys manik I I loved u you

Then I started learniig guitar ,ki tumhari tarah mein bhi apni frustration guitar par nikaloo

Par mujhe dhere dhere us instrument mein bhi tum nazar aane lage,wen I played It I felt like I am close to u

Then amms ne mujhe shaadi karne ko kaha ,par mein kaise kisi aur se shaadi karti jab mere andar sirf tum bhare hue ho

Now she took his hands in her's nd

Manik tum to atleast yeh jaante thi ki I luved u par mera kya mein kiska intezaar kar rahi ti itne saal ,the one who cheated me, one who threw me out his life

Manik hugged her tightly

Nandini: yeh kya kiya manik mere zindagi ke paanch saal tumahare zindagi ke paanch saal aur humhare paanchsaal sab barbaad kar diya voh bhi tumhari ek galati ki vajah se,mere paas tumhe aur todne ke liye dil nahi hain ,auur yeh aansu yeh to rukne ka naam hi nahi leti

Now manik hugged her more tightly...

Manik: bas nandu bas...ab aur nahi...I promise u ki aaj se yeh aansu nahi girenge,jo dard meine diya hain usko heal bhi mein hi karoonga.tumare har ek ansu ke badle mein hazaroon khushiyon se bar doonga bus mujhe ek aur chance de dooo..plsss...tumhe kuch nahi hone doonga...because I cant live without u nandini ,yeh 5 saal mere liye bhi easy nahi thein...mein sans tho zaroor le raha thaa par zinda nahi thaa...plss nandu plss vapaa s aajoa

Because I luv u very very much hameshaa..aur akhri saans thak kartha rahoonga I luv u nandu

Manik broke the hug and looked at nandini for an answer,but she hugged him more tightly and said

I love u too manik hameshaaa

Manik was overjoyed with her words and he kissed her forhead and then touched his forhead with hers they stayed like that for some more time...then manik broke the silence

Manik : ab chalo

He made nandini stand, she leaned on to his shoulder and he held by her waist, they started walking under the neon lights on the road' within the campus

(Manik msged something to cabir...Cabir explained everthing to fab 5)

Manik took nandini inside the car and started,

Nandini: manik hum kahaan jaa rahein hain?

Manik: (rubbing his fingers on his lips),voh kya hain na ,5 saal pehle ek ladki ne mera ek daant thod diya tha,ab ussi ladki ne ek aur daant thod diya,to dentist ke paas duplicate banvane jaa raha hoon

Nandini chuckled at his reply now she also got into the mood

Nandini: manik!! Tumhe sharam nahi aati baar baar ek hi ladki se punch khaate huee

Manik: nahii.

Nandini: kyun?

Manik: voh isliye kyun ki uske punch khaane ke baad hi meri dimaag ki bathi jalthi hain

Nandini laughed her heart out on this,manik was so happy to see her this way

Manik: bas aise hi haste rahne nandini,aur mein tumhare chehre se yeh mitne nahi doonga I promise...huum abhi amms ke ghar jaa rahe hain, paanch saal ki doori khaafi hain nandini ,bas ab ek aur pal bhi nahiii

Nandini was so happy with his reply,she smiled as she also didn't want to live a second without him

Nandini: gaadi ro ko gaadi ro ko

Manik stopped the car with a sudden jerk

Manik: kya hua nandu wat happened??

Nandini: vohh kya hain na...tumhe dentist ke paas jaane ki zaroorat nahi hain,(saying this she rubbed small traces of blood around his lips)

Manik got it

Manik: toh phir ...tumhare paas koi medicine hain...

Nandini: hain na...(saying this she pulled him closer ,and he tightened his grip around her waist)...then...(.u can imagine wat might hav happened)

Firelies were glowing all around,stars were twinkling celebrating true love on this earth

" MANAN ARE MADE FOR EACH OTHER"

This ss comes to end. I don't knw wether I did justice to ur expctations or not...thank u so much to all my readers .keep liking and give me ur valuable comments that means a alooot to mee.ur love and support only made me write this ...luv u all from the bottom of my heart...thank u thank u

And I have written one more ss,as a sequel of my happy Diwali my monster ..so pls do read that also and give me ur feed backs

MANAN SS MY HEAVEN
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4415384#p124401820

Edited by gaurimenon - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing end of this ss...
Whole ss was magical...
Cont soon with new work...
Thanx for pm..

Keep writing... stay blessed...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update
finally MANAN reunited

KEEP SMILING ND WRITING BEAUTIFUL UPDATES
TAKE CARE SOON UPDATE NXT PART


LOTS OF LOVE,
SAMRUDDHI
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow awesome update dea. ..
Loved it
yams_ini thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely it was
finally they got togethr
yams_ini thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely it was
finally they got togethr
happy ending manan ending
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...finally manan reunited...!!!
perfect part with beautiful end...
u penned so beautifully
fantastic work dear
take care
thanks a lot for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
aww finally manan got togethr
i loved it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome,fantastic,lovely N mind blowing..update.. 😊
finally MaNan together...
thank you for the wonderful story... beautifully penned...

orupadu orupadu ishtamyi

enyium ezhuthum... enna vishwasathil...😊


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Posted: 10 years ago
perfect manan reunion chechi
enik kure kure kure kure kure kure kure ishttappettu
chechi ... you are an amazing writer plz continue writing
love you loads

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