manan ss Aadhe Aadhe Poore Hain Hum UPDATED( PART 6 PG 17) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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... things are about to get real interesting... can't wait...
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Superb update yaar
Pls post d next chapter ASAP
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wow...gauri...
part 2 was awesome
but cliff hanger...????????
oho...yaar...pls continue soon
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take care

sukam aano???? studies engane pokunnu ????

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Nyc... update soon... love ur writing...
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PROMO
Nandini singing

Baatein ye kabhi na tu bhoolna
Koi tere khatir hai jee raha
Jaaye tu kahin, bhi ye sochna
Koi tere khatir hai jee raha


Maniks runs to the audi
stands by the door at the center and sings

Tujhse mohabbat karte hain jo
Tujhse mohabbat karte hain jo
Kaise kare hum usko bayaan

they run towards each other
a pair of hands pulls her back and takes her in his arms and says I LOVE U MY BABY DOLL


(Ye ishq nahi aasa, Itna to samajh lejiye...
Ek Aag ka dariya hai, aur doob ke jaana hai ...😊😊😊)


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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome promo...!!! update soon
take care
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Chechi , can't wait to read more
update ASAP

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ila ,maranittilla ,innu cheyaam
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PART 3

Host hands over mike to the Principal and Nandini dressed up in a red saree,silver small jhumkas ,her hair left open gets on to the stage

Principle: hello students ,I knw it's a big day for u all ,and it's the beginning of new stage in all ur lives .i wish u all the best for ur future..where ever u go who ever u become always stick to ur morals and bring best out of u..

And also I consider it as my privelage to award All India rank holder,Nandini Murthy.

Nandini smiles at him

Principle continues,but its not a wonder I knew she wud crack it..and being my favourite student I feel more than happy for her.and Nandini Murty(looking at her) I hav a surprise for u,that today mrng I recvd a call from my friend at oxford university,though they hav not officially announced it soon they r gonna call u to join them...they hav approved ur paper on "STARS"and they want u to take it as a project and continue there...and its with scholarship

(Nandini's happiness knew no bounds...crowd was clapping hard)

(In green room manik cud hear everything but while announcing hr name he got distracted some way or the other)

Principle takes up the trophy and cash award and hands over it to nandini.she receives it ,and bows down in a gesture of thank u

Host: so nandini its time,something u wanna say

Nandini(nods her head in a yes and takes the mike):good evng everyone and respected dignatories and my dear friends first I wud like to thank my aiyappa ,bcoz without him I wud b nothing wat I am today,and to be a rank holder its not a tough nut to crack ,If I can then anyone of u can,its just that u need hav a strong determination and a fire in you ,to shw the people who broke u apart that u r a falcon bird nd u will rise above...(wiping tears forming in her eyes) and I wud also I lyk to thank all my proffessors and friends, juniors for being there with me .thank u...she intends to hand over the mike but

Host: not so sooon nandu..if nandini murthy is on stage hw can we leave u so easily without hearing ur melodious voice

Nandini: but I don't hav...

Host: don't worry nandini ur guitar is ready,and here it is ,(she brings it and forwards it to nandini)

Crowd nandini nandini

Host : hey guys waving the audience do hav any requetsss??

Crowd: baatein ye kabhi naaa

Host : nandini all of them want to hear that song for which u won intercollege singing competition baatein yeh kabhi na,

Nandini smiles at her and the audience and takes up guitar and starts playing it along with her voice

Baatein ye kabhi na tu bhoolna

Koi tere khatir hai jee raha

Jaaye tu kahin, bhi ye sochna

Koi tere khatir hai jee raha( manik's face flashes in her mind)

Tu jahaan jaaye mehfooz ho

Tu jahaan jaaye mehfooz ho

Dil mera maange bas ye duaa (tears starts forming in her eyes)

(Manik hears the voice which he had been waiting to hear for ages,he starts to panic nandini, nandini

cabir: kya hua manik

manik: Cabir nanidini ki awaaz,tears started rolling down his eyes,which didn't go unoticed by others,wiping his tears he runs to the audi,manik's heart was beating faster and faster with the growing proximity of that voice nandini sings while getting flashbacks of her life in space and with manik)

Baatein ye kabhi na tu bhoolna

Koi tere khatir hai jee raha

Jaaye tu kahin, bhi ye sochna

Koi tere khatir hai jee raha

(Manik finally reaches the entrance of audi,and see's one of the most beautiful sights infront of him.Love of his life singing along with playing guitar,a smile of relief crept on his face,fab 5 also reached there and they were shocked to see nandini

While singing ,she was looking here and there in the crowd,sensing something different...and then her eyes got stuck on to a 6 feet man standing at the entrance along with 4 other people,

Humdard hai, humdum bhi hai

Tu saath hai toh zindagi

Tu jo kabhi door rahe

Ye humse ho jaaye ajnabi

her heart skipped a beat ,assuring that it was none other than manik malhotra.seeing him after ages,she went numb,she was frozen,she forgot her lyrics ,her music,she stood there gluing her eyes on him

(Seeing nandini ,the best singer of their college like this was new for the audience ,kya hua nandini ko? What haapend yaar?i think she forgot her lyrics,nandini,nandini...)

these words from crowd melted manik,to bring her out this awkward situation,manik picked up her lyrics and started moving towards the stage,

Tujhse mohabbat karte hain jo

Tujhse mohabbat karte hain jo

Kaise kare hum usko bayaan

a smile crept on nandinis face realizing that he was real,and moreover she cud heard him after ages,she too sang with him while getting down from the stage,keeeping her guitar aside

Baatein ye kabhi na tu bhulna

(they started singing in together)

Koi tere khatir hai jee raha

Jaaye tu kahin, bhi ye sochna

Koi tere khatir hai jee rahaa

Jaagi bhi hai royi bhi hai

Aankhein ye raaton mein mere

Kyun har ghadi milke tujhe

Lagti rahe bas teri kami

Hum toh na samjhe tum hi kaho

Hum toh na samjhe tum hi kaho

Kyun tumko paake tumse juda

Baatein ye kabhi na tu bhoolna

Koi tere khatir hai jee rahaa

Jaaye tu kahin, bhi ye sochna

Koi tere khatir hai jee rahaa

they were now few centimeters apart...getting drowned in each others eyes,manik was lightily raising his hand to pull her for hug but their trance was broken the applauds from the crowd,fab 4 too reached there,and awkward silence existed between them,cabir came forward and hugged nandini

Cabir: hey nandini,it's a plesant surprise ,tum yaahan??

Nandini: this is my college

Dhruv also came forward to hug nandini

Dhruv: tum kahaan chali gayi thi yaaar,ek baar bhi apne friend ko nahi bataaya

Nandini:( looking at manik): voh mein...

(meanwhile crowd were getting restless,yeh to fab 5 hain na,nandini ka unke saath kya connection hain aur voh lead singer manik,usne nandini ke ssath kyun gaayaa)

Host : oh nandini that was fabulous as always,and thank u manik malhotra for joining her,and hey friends u will see fab 5 performing infront of us within 15 mnts so get ready

Students were trying to approach fab5 and to calm them down,

Boy to nandini : nandini tum inhe lekar bahar jao ,crowd ko control karna bahut mushkil ho raha hain

Nandini: haa,ya its ok I'll manage( then turning towards fab 5) I think we shud leave they move out of the audi,to the garden

Mukti: y did u disappear nandini?

Meanwhile manik and nandini were stealing glances of each other

Nandini : voh actually...ams ki tabiyat teek nahi thi aur mujhe

(she was about to complete her sentence a group of 3 people came behind nandini and one of them picked her up in his arms from back and twirled her)

She was screaming,closing her eyes

This whole scene was witnessed by fab5 ,manik fists clenched with anger

Boy: congratulations ,my baby doll I love you I love I love you

She knew that voice and opened her eyes it was ABHIMANYU ,her ABHI

Nandini: abhi tum,hw dare u,put me down

Abhi: no...

Nandini: irritatedly acha teek hain love u too nw pls put me down

Manik's heart broke down into millions of piece hearing this

Abhi kept her down ,and her friends came and hugged ,and wished her.

She introduced them to fab 5

Nandini: these are my friends ,rohan ,abhi, sujata pointing each one of them nw

(she introduced fab 5 to them)

Nandini: I knw u all knw hem but phir bhi formality keliye he's cabir ,dhruv,alya ,mukti and this is ,she paused

Abhi: manik malhotra the rockstar hearthrob of ur college,hain na?

Nandini just smiled,and manik too

after little bit of chit chatting,cabir decided to give some lone time to manan.he made an excuse

Cabir : druv alya mukti,pls mere saath chalo voh ek beat hain na mein baar baar bhol raha hoon

They thot it was a genuine excuse and left with him

Abhi: nandu ,tu yahin ruk apne old friend se baath kar ,hume na kuch kaam hai...so c u bye

Now manik and nandini were only there ,with complete silence among them,and manik broke it

Manik: can we walk

Nandini: ya, sure

So that's it for now,keep commenting,give me suggestions...
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Njanane adyam comment cheythath
super update chechi
cont soon and tc
thanx a lot for the pm
Edited by vaishnavi911 - 10 years ago

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