manan ss Aadhe Aadhe Poore Hain Hum UPDATED( PART 6 PG 17) - Page 2

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PART 2

(Fab 5 were busy with their jamming sessions,moreover they were helping manik to get back himself.manik was trying very hard to play but sometimes he ends up with breaking the strings,sometimes hurting his hands,and with playing off notes...he was struggling with himself...after a long tiring session of gathering himselves back manik finally gives up)

Manik: ab mujhse nahi hoga...i'm done with it.music has left me..

Cabir:no manik its u...just try karte jaa... tik ho jayega..may b bhahut saal hogaye na..isliye.

Manik: no cabir,bas..i'm leaving ( he trys to walk away)

Mukti: don't give up manik.its not u

Dhruv: ok buddy ek kaam kar...guitar hum phir try karengee...tu ab apne singing par concentrate kar

Alya : dhruv is right manik...sing naa...

(He strats singing but there also he fails)

Manik: ab bas.enough is enough.i told u guys na music is not a part of my life anymore.so pls leave me...(he bangs the door and goes out)

Mukti : ab kya kare iss ladke ka..?

(Cabir was in deep thoughts ,train of his thoughts were broken by alya)

Alya : wat happened cabir?did u see hw he is behaving? Hw will we get him back?

Dhruv: v miss him yaar...

Cabir: (he talks to himself )ya I knw .. only one person on this earth has a solution for this problem ...miss nandini murty...

Guys u don't worry. I ll do something...this time I wont let him fail...aaj voh agar iss state mein hain that's because of his friendship only..and its time to repay...

All in unison: what?

Cabir: I'll ansr all ur qustions but first let me find answers to my questions...so guys bye...I ll meet u later

(Days pass by...manik was still struggling.but finally ends up saying)

Manik: guys tum sab jao mein nahi aa raha hoon, u pls go... mere liye apna career waste mat karo

Mukti : oh shut up manik...

Dhruv: manik for us .u r more important than our careers

Alya : ys manik...u r everything to us

Manik: try to understand guys,mein gaa nahi pa raha,guitar nahi play kar paa raha phir kal mein vahaan aake kya karunga...i don't wnt u guys to get embrassed bcoz of me...

Cabir: ok guys chill.teek hai manik I agree with u ..tu kal perform mat karna but hume accompany toh kar sakta hain...manglore se hum sidaa goa jayenge for a refreshment...will make it a road trip so is it ok with u all

Mukti: of course cabir.mein bhi yahi chahti thi

Dhruv,alya and finally manik also agrees with it

(Finally they all get ready to go to mangalore,they leave Mumbai by 8:30 at night and reache manglore next day by noon)

So finally the day has come

(Fab5 enters college campus in their car,they were grantly welcomed by the students and volunteers for the program,manik was feeling strange and was looking here and there,it was like a part of his was there...manik was completely lost in his thoughts)

Cabir: kya hua manik? Where r u lost

Manik: cabir voh voh.i feel like...(their conversation was broken by a volunteer over there)

Boy: music room is ready for u,if u wanna practice ,I ll take u there,programs will start by 6 pm and ur performance will be at 8pm,or we hav arranged a rest room also ,so wat wud u prefer sir?

Cabir: I think we ll practice for sometime ,then we will freshen up wat say guys?

Every one nodded yes,starts leaving their bags.

Boy: maam keep ur luggages here only,we will take it ur room

Alya : oh thanks

(Everyone keep their bags,but manik has a bag which he has been holding tightly )

Boy to manik: sir give us the bag we will keep it ,

( Saying this he tries to hold it,manik in his full anger pushes him away and says don't u dare touch this bag this is only mine)

cabir : (comes to that boy and make him stand and says) :sorry ,voh actually uska personal bag hain that's y he got hyper so pls try to understand...

boy : oh I m sorry sir I understand.and boys leaves with luggages

fab5 walks towards music room with cabir dhruv and manik walking ahead alya and mukti behind them

alya: mukti ,wat do u think?

Mukti: abt wat

Alya: I mean wat do u think ki manik ke bag mein kya hoga,voh itna possessive kyun hai uss bag ko leke,he don't even let us touch it

Mukti: I don't hav any idea,par jo bhi hai manik ke bhohut close hoga,varna he wudnt hav been this possessive,voh to uske bina bahar bhi nahi jaata office jaate waqt tak usse leke jaata hain,aur ghar pe apne bed se neeche tak nahi rakta...

Alya: kya hoga usme ??and they keep thinking

By the time they reach music room and starts practicing,without manik.he sits in a corner and watch them practicing

(On the other hand a convocation ceremony going on in its full swing)

(An auditorium filled with more than thousands of students,front rows were occupied teaching and non teaching staffs just behind it final yr passing out students.Girls were in saree and boys in their formals.stage was occupied with many honourable guests and principal of the college

Host announced the name of the students and they come upto the stage to receive their degree certificates one by one,it continued for a while)

(Meantime fab5 had done with their practice session and moved to their rest rooms which was near the auditorium they cud hear the announcements and loud noise coming from audi)

Audi

Host : so here,it's the time to announce last name, because we had saved best for the last, and before I announce here name,on behalf of all the juniors both boys and girls over here I would like say something

(With ur permission sir she looks at principal and he nods and gives a go ahead look)

Though she is just an yr elder than us,she had been a great inspiration to all of us,favourite of evry teacher,she is someone whom u can call at 4 am and ask for an help and she wud help u without thinking twice.it was under her guidance only we worked together for many good causes.how can I forget her tution classes she was there with us during our exam times clearing all our doubts sometimes she had to stay with us late nights,she didn't even bother abt herself,and ofcourse her music...when we became tired she wud refreshen us with her honey filled voice...u r the one who can never be forgotten,by who ever meets u once in their life time..we knw she has a name but we call her Angel,so here I take this opportunity to say thank u for being there with us till this day,and hope u will b there forever,we luv u and gonna miss u soo much...before it gets more emotional let me call upon stage our one and only "NANDINI MURTY"

WHAT A CLIFF HANGER!!!!!!!!!

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